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Reviewer: veestone Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/15/11 03:47 am Title: Chapter 25

I just read all 25 chapters in one sitting. That's how good this is. Please don't leave me hanging for too long now. b29;

Author's Response: Hi! I'm happy when I see new readers :) Glad you liked the story so far. Next chapter is done, I'm just waiting for my beta reader to send it back. I don't like to post unbetaed because my English grammar is not good and some stupid mistakes may irk readers or I don't know, spoil the scenes. u__u

Reviewer: Aleksei Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/10/11 10:00 pm Title: Chapter 25

Hey!!!

Hola de nuevo. Siento mucho por no haberte dejado un review en los capítulos anteriores, pero había estado debatiéndome en si dejarte el rev en español o en iglés... la última vez fué en inglés, pero después me puse a ver otros comentarios y me dí cuenta que hablas español (jojojo tonta de mí) además no se que prefieras si los comentarios en inglés o español... en fin...

Simplemente no puedo creer que lo hallas dejado ahí!!!! me jalo el cabello de la desesperación XD EN VERDAD William ama a Tom!!! a su muy demoniaca manera pero amor sin más ni menos... ahora Tom tendrá que enfrentarse a lo que tanto deseó... pobre Tomi... XD

También pobre William, abandonar al que amas debe ser difícil aún para un demonio (o al menos eso creo)¿Sabes que me hizo ponerme histérica? cuando William desapareció y Tom gritó por él, no por Bill, por el demonio, aunque no lo acepte también lo ama, y mucho (I think so o.o...) es como amar dos partes de una misma persona...

AHHHHH no puedo esperar al siguiente cap!!! si tienes los ánimos bajos para escribir tu di que necesitas y y vemos que podemos hacer jojojo (aunque como escritora sé que no hay nada mejor que los revs XD)

En fin de nuevo me excedí en la longitud de esto, pero como lo dije en mi rev pasado es mi fic favorito ¿que se le va a hacer?

So see ya!!! :)

Author's Response: Hola! En ambos idiomas esta bien. Mi primer idioma es español jaja pero lo escribo muy mal u__u Perdon por los cliffies! jaja. Pero creo que hacen la historia más interesante. Muchas gracias por el review! Si se siente padre saber lo que opinan los readers! :) Espero no tarde mi beta reader en mandarme el prox capítulo, yo también ya lo quiero poner! :D Nos vemos!!!

Reviewer: experience junkie Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/08/11 06:57 am Title: Chapter 1

Bill/William gone??? Oh, NO!!! Bring him back. And soon. I love this story. It's incredible. I read all the chapters in one go, couldn't tear my eyes from it. It's wow. But you have to post the next chapter SOON, cuz I'm dying here to read what happens next.

Author's Response: Hi! Thank you! Really glad you liked it :D I will post as soon as my beta reader sends the betaed chapter back!

Reviewer: Hinomaru Aki Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/07/11 02:00 pm Title: Chapter 25

OMG! I shouldn´t never start reading this before you complete it! I hope you finish writing ASAP, because I probably will bite off the rest of my nails from this suspense. (Does it make sense? I hope so.)
This make an impression on me, maybe it´s stupid but I don´t care. xD

Author's Response: lol Don't you hate it when that happens?? heee But don't worry, the story is already finished :) Rl stuff makes me delay the posting, like right now my beta reader is on a vacay break, but I'll try to post next chapter soon. Thanks for reading and all your reviews!! I'm really happy that you liked it! :)

Reviewer: Hinomaru Aki Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/07/11 12:22 pm Title: Chapter 21

This is a dilemma! What now? :)

Reviewer: Hinomaru Aki Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/06/11 08:07 pm Title: Chapter 10

Yeah, right, oh shit! xD It´s just crazy, I like it!

Reviewer: Hinomaru Aki Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/06/11 07:12 pm Title: Chapter 5

Bill doesn´t exist?? Well... wooooow xD

Reviewer: Hinomaru Aki Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/06/11 06:56 pm Title: Chapter 3

Ok, I´m big fan of this, you have to know it. It´s great. xD

Reviewer: Hinomaru Aki Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/06/11 06:41 pm Title: Chapter 2

OMG! Yeah, omg xD It´s so thrilling!

Reviewer: s3s3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/04/11 10:09 am Title: Chapter 25

snif snif!!!!!
Really he did go back to his plane?

Author's Response: You'll see in next chapter. u___u

Reviewer: CarasGaladhon Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/31/11 05:46 am Title: Chapter 25

Why couldn't he take Tom with him???
William, come back!! D':
This is too heartbreaking for me to endure, no no no no... He's not allowed to leave Tom....
I'm gonna go sit here and beg that he transported somewhere else, or captured Tom's reaction somehow and returns. And I won't stop begging before the next chapter comes. Though I don't want you to think I'm nagging you about it. I'm not, you live your life and write your stuff at your own speed. I wouldn't care if it took a year or two, you would still have me as a reader.
This story has just blown my mind. I really felt like running with this to Peter Jackson or something and force him into a making a film out of it. Preferably several films, so that we don't miss out on anything. This story is just simply very incredible, and I've loved every minute. Your talent has literary knocked the breath out of me *_*

Author's Response: Wow! Thanks so much for your inspiring review!! I'm humbled ^___^ I honestly write for the pure pleasure but it also gives me great joy to know when readers enjoy my stories. I'll try not to make you wait so long, but yeah, rl gets in the way, sometimes a lot. But I will keep writing!!

Reviewer: yellow-hello Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/30/11 09:18 am Title: Chapter 25

OOOHH SSHHHIIIT. I am so anxious about the end now. God! How can you leave me hanging here with your cliff-hanger, huh? xD Fucking brilliant.



Author's Response: Heee thanks!! Most chappies I end with cliffies XD

Reviewer: Hanna_LiebeTH Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/29/11 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 25

I lived this chapter! It was soo good (: ahh what happens now

Author's Response: Thanks! :)

Reviewer: kireinayorudakara Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/29/11 07:39 pm Title: Chapter 25

oh no! ;_; that's so sad. he has to come back...!!

Author's Response: u___u

Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/29/11 12:41 pm Title: Chapter 25

O damn! I'm dying to know what's next!

Author's Response: It's good that so far no one has predicted it heh :)

Reviewer: Haleema Kaaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/29/11 12:36 pm Title: Chapter 25

Tom practically begged him to go, so I don't see why he wants to think it's just a nightmare now that Wiliam's finally gone. 



Author's Response: This is a perfect example of "Be careful what you wish for."

Reviewer: Maria Dane-Edwards Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/29/11 08:06 am Title: Chapter 25

Oh, this is beginning to worry me more than I can handle :(

I really hope William is just testing Tom. Tom really needs to get his priorities straight. Didn't he think William was cable of leaving, because it seems like he didn't and now that he possible has, his in despair?

I hope William is watching for a reaction, because the poor demon is suffering from Tom's unrequited love. Maybe he wants to find out if Tom will miss William now that he's 'gone'.

Dramatic stuff here, and would William (in future) kindly not drop Bill to the ground from a tall building? ;) *Maria

Author's Response: Hey! They all suffer in their way! u__u lol, William has been a bad, bad demon, but he has a big heart! You'll see. XD

Reviewer: SouthernAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/29/11 02:34 am Title: Chapter 25

i hope things get better

Author's Response: :) I was thinking I was gonna make the characters and readers suffer first :)

Reviewer: dee25u Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/28/11 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 25

What the freak?! OMG! I know William is going to come back right?

Author's Response: Easy to answer, but I won't :) But like I said before, I hate sad endings.

Reviewer: saliorellie Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/28/11 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 25

d-a-m-n

Author's Response: XD

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