Date: 06/15/11 11:35 pm Title: Chapter 28
no lo vi venir... no harás pelílogo verdad? hahahaha ya no quedaría, dejaste el final muy concluyente :D a ver cuando escribes otra cosilla para leerte más [:D nos leeremos :D
Author's Response: Hola!! Si, generalmente dejo todo concluyente, está difícil seguirle. A ver que se me ocurre, ahorita ni tiempo de pensar en algo como antes, pero derrepente me viene una idea que me guste mucho y ya no la suelto. Trataré de escribir la historia completa antes de subirla para no desesperar con la tardada jaja. Gracias por los reviews :)
Date: 06/15/11 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 28
Haha, wow, I never saw that ending coming. I'll be honest, I didn't like it at first. I don't know, I thought it ended abruptly, and the plot veered out to a strange direction XD But then I read it a second time, knowing that was going to happen, and it's a little better now :)
I did so love that Tom was able to get both Bill and William. *heart heart*
I'll try to leave a review with more closure later :)
Author's Response: hehe I knew nobody would expect it, but it was planned since I started writing it. I just love happy endings :P
Date: 06/15/11 11:01 pm Title: Chapter 28
Great story! :)
Author's Response: Thank you :D
Date: 06/15/11 10:54 pm Title: Chapter 28
Wow that was great! He got what he wanted. A mixture of Bill/William. Yay everybodies happy! In the story I mean.
Author's Response: Yeah, I think rl Bill is a mixture of Bill/William XD Glad you liked the story. :)
Date: 06/15/11 10:49 pm Title: Chapter 28
Awww! This was a great ending, fo sho! Going into the favorites now...
Author's Response: Thank you! :) Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading.
Date: 06/12/11 02:13 am Title: Chapter 27
holaaaaaaaa!
que pena no haberte dejado rev en el cap anterior pero siempre ando pensando en algo super wow que decirte y se me va en eso, y total nunca me decido (=S) en fin... siendo la una de la mañana, me decidí jojojo
¿Qué te puedo decir? simplemente genial!!! no me puedo creer el giro de eventos, sobre todo con lo de el con el ex-general, eso sí que no me lo esperaba!!! dioses!!! i just wanna DIE!!!
De verdad que no quiero que esta historia termine nunca!!! never!!! con decirte que ya puse a mi novio a leerla jojojo.
Oh my... y la última escena cuando la bala le pega a Tom??? simplemente cardíaca wow, y el hecho de que Bill admite que siente amor por Tom? no puedo creerlo, tengo que saber la reacción de William al respecto... y también si es que Tom los ama a ambos por igual o sólo siente atracción por William, aunque tengo una idea no quiero asentar nada en mi cabeza... en fin, creo que ya fueron muchas palabras sin sentido...
Till next one!
Author's Response: Holaaaa jajaj tu novio leyendo twincest?? XD Muchas gracias por el review! Oops, pues todo tiene que terminar en algun punto ejeje ya estoy por subir el último capítulo y espero te guste :D
Date: 06/01/11 03:00 pm Title: Chapter 27
O____O I CAN'T SEE THE NEXT BUTTON! *faints*
just when bill said those magical three words. UGH. you are the sole reason for this heartbreak i feel. lol! sooooo, bill does mean like he loves as in LOVES tom as a lover right? :/ OHMYGOD! i really can't move on! LOL!
and OMG this part
“What?! Oh God! I don’t want to hurt—”
“Oh, for darned sakes!” William erupted in annoyance. “I’ll do it!”
.. i think i just grew abs from laughing so hard. XD
Author's Response: lol thanks for your nice review! Writing William's character was so much fun, it was easy to know how he'd react in that situation lol! :D
Date: 06/01/11 02:16 pm Title: Chapter 25
oh i'm lovin' the brotherhood between the G's and tom :") and wow, i didn't expect that. :/ i feel like crying like tom :'(
Date: 06/01/11 01:44 pm Title: Chapter 23
*sigh* i wish bill would just feel the damn same feelings towards tom but at the same time i feel sorry for william. i'm just as torn as tom. LOL! not to mention william's fit that would probably cause the end of the world when bill finally feels the same way. XD this is addicting!!!
Date: 05/29/11 03:50 pm Title: Chapter 27
Oh my god! Nein Nein Nein poor bill and tom.I can't stop crying :(
Author's Response: Aww. I hope I make it up to you in next chapter :D
Date: 05/28/11 08:27 pm Title: Chapter 27
wow!!!! o_O
Author's Response: XD
Date: 05/27/11 08:04 pm Title: Chapter 27
PS: Oh yeah. About Bill saying that he loves Tom... I'm not sure if that's a good thing or a bad thing. Probably a good thing, since maybe that means the two personalities are merging ever so slightly...
I was rereading some earlier chapters and was wondering if William is capable of crying. Despite Bill and William being opposites, that doesn't necessarily mean to me that there are physical actions that only one can do. I think it would be fitting if William *did* come out and get all distraught.
Author's Response: Good observations!! I have your answers in next chapter. :)
Date: 05/27/11 05:05 pm Title: Chapter 27
T_T Well.. I teared up.
Author's Response: Awww :/ But don't worry, it'll be alright. :D No sad endings for me.
Date: 05/27/11 12:16 pm Title: Chapter 27
damn.... i knew there was a reason i didn't like the priest.... T_T
Author's Response: Right. He was being too good, wasn't he?
Date: 05/27/11 05:20 am Title: Chapter 27
Bill is next in line to be executed I suppose, since he's not able to defend himself as Bill. But both Bill and William run on a motive the priest had not encountered which is love and I'm sure there'll be little left of Hanes when either of them get their revenge.
I'm pretty sure William will step forward because he'd never off himself (Bill) if that is even possible - and I'm also pretty sure Tom in his special position as the key is not capable of being killed. My question is only if Bill/William knows this *G*G*G*
I might even be so lucky William has the power to undo Hanes' deed. After all, he is the top of the food chain.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your encouraging reviews. I'm posting the last chapter next and I hope I still surprise you and you like how it all turned out. :D
Date: 05/27/11 04:11 am Title: Chapter 27
AHHHHHHH NO YOU CAAAAAAN'T
Author's Response: MUAHAHAHAHAH HAHAHAHA!! XD
Date: 05/26/11 09:12 pm Title: Chapter 27
*waits in here til something happens*
Author's Response: Hi! The waiting is over. (hopefully you didn't turn into a skeleton cuz of the waiting lol) Posting next chapter in a min. :)
Date: 05/26/11 08:24 pm Title: Chapter 27
Ok, I am sorry RL got in your way for a while, but GAAAHHH!!! I can't believe you left us for this long, AND THEN when you FINALLY update you leave us with the hugest cliffie of all!
This was a really fantastic chapter. I was slightly disappointed we didn't get to see the General and Company get their asses whooped, but it kinda makes sense.
Through out this whole fic I hadn't had a bad feeling about Priest Hanes, but somehow I knew, I just KNEW as soon as he was there waiting to pick them up that something was up with him, and that something bad was gonna happen.
Fantastic chapter. I hope life gets to being better for you. I was having such a good week at not biting my nails (horrible habit of mine) but I think this might have ruined it. In other words, I can't wait to see more! Update soon. Please, for my poor finger nails sake, it isnt their fault.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your nice reviews! I'm glad you enjoyed it so much. RL is better now, if somewhat frustrating, lol but it's alright. Did I say I love your reviews? They put a huge smile on my face. Thanks! :D
Date: 05/26/11 07:47 pm Title: Chapter 27
NOOOOOOOO wtf, william where ARE YOU? holy shittttttttt not after all that!
Author's Response: Hehehe! Not expecting it hmm? I hope you like the last chapter :D
Date: 05/26/11 07:15 pm Title: Chapter 27
*screams* GAH!! That came out of nowhere!!!
I thought they'd be safe!! Oh my god.. -.-
I strongly suggest replacing 'heightenng' with 'increasing' here: William's leaning on Tom was heightening
Oh lordy! *mourns some more*
My only hope is that Tom's not really dead. *shakes head* I don't know, I'm grasping at straws. By the way, I think a shot to the chest would have taken a little longer for the victim to die, rather than immediately.
Author's Response: Hehe, I surprise myself too with all the twists and turns, but I don't like stories to be predictable. Sorry for taking so long to post chapters, but I'm posting next and last chapter in a minute, so you can relax now :D