Date: 09/10/10 08:43 pm Title: Tom Watches
I don't know why anyone would be put off this, it's a pain kink like spanking. Unless they don't like pain.
I love this story already. I love how Tom is interested in spite of himself. And Bill getting off on sensation, almost sensation alone, is really hot.
Your writing is great! It's really easy to get into the story, it's so interesting. And it's well written; it's like you open the window, start reading, and you're transported to this world and story you've made. Great job!
Date: 09/10/10 07:03 pm Title: Tom Hears
I love this story! but i dont like bills approach to tom. It sounds like bill just wants to get with himself and not tom:(
Date: 09/10/10 06:43 pm Title: Tom Watches
I like the kink. :l Do not people on this site click for the secks, and kink? They don't give a shit if your writing is like that of a 2nd graders or like a professional author, as long as a penis is used you're praised. :P
Anyways, loved it...
I actually admire your writing style.
How you use ":" and "-" it makes it more flowing, and I really like it. :)
Every time I read a fic with such impressive style and perfect words, sensory ect. I forget what's happening in the fic! :O I get so caught up in how amazing and beautiful it is written and I just stop to read it over so I know to use such techniques in my own writing I ignore what's actually happening. :l
Sort of happened with this, it's good and bad.. Bad b/c I didn't really pay attention the first time though did reread!
Either way, the whole candle idea is wow... Makes me wonder how much more kinkier this will get, when twincest is introduced. :D
Beautiful fic~
Loving it so far.
Such lovely description too!
Date: 09/10/10 06:35 pm Title: Tom Watches
its not ur writing. thats for sure. its likely the bizareness of the kink. but thats their problem, they're missing out on an origional story.
Date: 09/10/10 04:51 pm Title: Tom Watches
Why would your writing put people off? DD:
I personally love your writing and the kink *_*
Can't wait to read more, I really enjoy it so far and I'll for sure add it to my faves when it's done :3
Date: 09/10/10 02:13 pm Title: Tom Watches
This is unbelievable sexy.
Please gimmie more :3
Date: 09/10/10 01:25 pm Title: Tom Watches
Don't mean to offend in response to your question. The kink is not all too rare but your right it may not be some peoples thing. Again I mean no harm but when describing how Bill feels you almost make it sound painful. Now I k ow that wax is hot and yes it hurts but try to justify and explain why the pleasure comes with the pain because as of now the entire time I've just been wincing at Bill's experiences
Date: 09/10/10 01:14 pm Title: Tom Watches
You are definitely not putting me off from reading this. Actually, this story is quite captivating *-*
Date: 09/10/10 12:32 pm Title: Tom Watches
HOT for sure! I like how this is going, don't stop.
Date: 09/10/10 12:20 pm Title: Tom Hears
Just started reading and its so different and kinda sensual/erotic to me. I have to catch up now...
Date: 09/10/10 12:14 pm Title: Tom Watches
I don't know about anyone else, but I think this is fantastic. Once a week is too long between updates!
Date: 09/05/10 04:42 pm Title: Tom Hears
Wax play is nice, so count me in with this fic! As ... hmm... pleasant as Bill's solo play was, was it equally hot when he got caught to Tom. I'm excited of what will happen next... *grin*
Date: 09/04/10 12:11 am Title: Tom Hears
this is diffirent. Can't wait for more :-)
Date: 09/03/10 09:04 pm Title: Tom Hears
I think there should be more wax kink fics on this site, so I'm very excited to see this! Very sensual chapter, and I like how you handled Tom walking in on Bill...it was very realistic but still humorous. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 09/03/10 07:28 pm Title: Tom Hears
That was neat! I've always poked around in candle wax too, I love the liquid-solid/hot-cool properties it has. Apparently so does Bill. I like the idea of his getting so turned on by sensation. He's at the mercy of his sensory nerves. Looking forward to more!
Date: 09/03/10 06:53 pm Title: Tom Hears
Interesting concept, I was surprised to see Tom wasn't that shocked about Bill's... doings.
Do continue please :'D
The idea is really... amazing with the candles ^_^
Date: 09/03/10 12:26 pm Title: Tom Hears
I've never read anything quite like this before, and I love it so far! *_* Go go wax-and-Tom covered Bill!