Date: 09/25/10 01:49 am Title: Tom Plays
*_* Well I'm excited to find out, I am. Who will give in first? Will it involve ~special sexytiems?~ Bill is so, so bad at talking himself down. Looking forward to seeing where you take this...and poor Bill, still burned enough he needs help with those bandages. ._.
Author's Response: Eeeeeee it excites me that you're excited to find out. xD I like when readers are intrigued~ Bill is indeed super bad at talking himself down, but is that because he maybe doesn't want to? 8D I think little parts of his brain are realising things they hadn't quite thought about before. *seals lips*
Aw he's such a derp at taking care of himself, really. And Tom knows just the right amount of pressure to use... when applying bandages, of course.
Date: 09/24/10 07:13 pm Title: Tom Plays
Bill, oh Bill, stop being so denial...
But I loved the masturbating scene, how his thoughts entwined with thoughts of Tom and it all got mixed up and in the focus was Tom, always Tom. That is so hot, tbh.
And so awkward to avoid situations where to talk. Bill can't run forever, he should know that.
Btw, that ferry scene and icey ocean made me remember the closest moment for me becoming overly excited fangirl. It was before Finnish concert, when they indeed were delayed because of the ice and it was about to become a big mess (actually the men were still building up the stage when they started to let people in to the venue - 1,5hrs late). I was driving to Helsinki that morning, when I got a phonecall from another fan that the signing session was cancelled because the boys were stuck on the ocean (I was as well, when I traveled couple days earlier to Stockholm to a concert).
A quick Intérnet search of which company has their night boat delayed and after short time of figuring out, we came into conclusion that we could possibly manage to get to a harbor before the boat they assumingly were in. In that moment, for a blink of an eye, I was so tempted to drive straight to the harbor and just "hang around". :D
But I didn't. But I admit: I was tempted to be such a fangirl :D
Okay, that was off-topic. I'm curious to read how Bill and Tom will figure out their forbidden feelings :)
Author's Response: Eee, thankyou! I wasn't sure if the sex scene in this was enough, compared to the other chapters, but you've reassured me that it was okay. =D He might try to run forever, though, or maybe he'll turn back and push Tom to run again? They're both too nervous to talk to each other, poor dears.
That story was actually pretty cool, haha. xD I'm not sure I could have stopped myself from being a crazy fangirl if I'd known which harbour they were coming into!
Date: 09/24/10 06:43 pm Title: Tom Plays
why don't you respond to your reviews? :p
Anyways, this chapter had very little dialogue, that's fine... I wanted them to taaaaaalk. But this was perfect, because it actually shows how they're dealing. You know? The ferry... idk if the mention of the time they couldn't get past is supposed to contribute to the plot - ie: staying longer on the ferry with a real bed which could lead to... other.. twin things? IDK. You either accidently made it more significant than it is, or it is done intentionally. I'll never know till chapter umm.... 5. :D :p
Bill jacking offffffff nanananana....
xDD
Wait a second, the ferry is about to dock? Hmm... and omg... the next chapter will be like BAM OMG DRAMA.
Seriously cannot wait. O_O
< 3
Author's Response: Ahh, I'm sorry, I've always meant to and then just gotten hideously distracted. =X (And your super long and amazing reviews are kind of intimidating. You're just so nice, aaaaaaah.)
They will talk, don't worry! They're just trying to find the right words. ;D And there will be drama! There's a fight brewing between them, I can sense it~
Date: 09/24/10 02:11 pm Title: Tom Plays
I aboslutely love this story, it's so hot! (npi). And the wax kink is great, I've never read a fic that included that. I loved the dilogue between Bill and Tom in the bathroom last chapter.
Author's Response: Thankyou! I'm glad you're enjoying the kink. =D
Date: 09/24/10 12:22 pm Title: Tom Plays
I can't wait to see where you're going with this. I love the way the twins are dancing around each other at the moment
Author's Response: I don't know how much longer they can dance. =O Someone might be giving in sooner than they want to...
Date: 09/24/10 12:21 pm Title: Tom Plays
this story is so damn hot. I love the wax play, and how sensual you make it sound. Bill is a kinky mother fucker. But of course, we already knew that. ;)
This is extremely hot and well written.
And yes, more twin sexitimes. :)
Author's Response: Thankyou! I'm really pleased that it sounds sensual, it's not something I've personally done so it's been a challenge imagining just what it's like. Maybe kinky Bill's gotten all of his ideas into my head, haha. More twinly sexytimes in the future, to be sure!
Date: 09/18/10 08:07 pm Title: Tom Does
Oh woah, that was HOT! I loved tyhe scene of Bill with Tom even more than the scenes of Bill alone. Tom's insecurities and want were amazing and how it was a boost for Bill. Hotness, definitely.
Just that I wish Tom woulden't be so... afraid?
Btw, even if wax play is not so much of my thing (tried it, got a bit disappointed), it's visually pleasing and you make it sound hot. Nice :)
Date: 09/17/10 07:51 pm Title: Tom Does
>.> Tom should so get a smack for that. He asked for it! And then he's gonna runaway like Bil has the plague? >.> COME OFF IT.
But really.
The whole wax thing is beyond hot.
Like I've never heard of such a kink before, but it's unbelievably sexy. For REAL.
Date: 09/17/10 07:11 pm Title: Tom Does
It's brilliant~ I love it. *_*
Tom joins... the bath, wax, ooh.. It was wonderful, your writing is fantastic. :) The story is so original and the candles... I love how Tom was more sensitive to the candle wax... whereas Bill is used to it. Really love the idea.
I get uneasy at the mentions of bathtubs/showers but I tried to let that pass. :/ The scenes of that were lovely, and my favorite actually. I can't describe it... but amazing. Green candle wax looks strange in mind... It just does, idk. :p
I liked what was uhh.. going on with the twins in the tub. ;D Secksy, and very nicely played out.
Then when Tom leaves was like a slap in the face for Bill, and was just wow.
I wonder what'll make out with the ferry the next morning...
Their talk.
THIS STORY IS MAGNIFICENT.
Love it.
Seriously.
Finally something worth reading!
I'm going to reread the chapter... it was so lovely, and your writing deserves a prize. BEAUTIFUL fiction.
Even deserves a feature.
Date: 09/17/10 07:05 pm Title: Tom Does
I wonder if Tom will blame Bill for getting him into this.
Date: 09/17/10 04:00 pm Title: Tom Does
wow. that was incredibly freaking hot. very much looking forward to seeing what happens next.
Date: 09/17/10 02:42 pm Title: Tom Does
Oh my. That was hot. I love how awkward Tom is about it. I can see this developing into a very complex dance.
Date: 09/17/10 01:40 pm Title: Tom Does
I hope they will talk about who's going to buy more candles. I loved this chapter *_*
Date: 09/12/10 12:32 am Title: Tom Watches
wow. hot. that last image of tom is super hot. keep up the good work. =)
Date: 09/11/10 11:39 pm Title: Tom Hears
I think Tom handled that remarkably calmly.
Date: 09/11/10 06:22 pm Title: Tom Watches
this is so weird..but i can't stop reading xD
Date: 09/11/10 05:06 pm Title: Tom Watches
aifjweaohcawe AHMIGOSH. this is amazing. your writing is lovely, dear XD
Date: 09/11/10 02:53 pm Title: Tom Watches
I really enjoy the minute detail of descriptions you zoom in on with Bill getting pleasure off his kink, like the associated pleasure that comes with pulling the wax off. It was also quite well done, very realistic, that Bill was plotting so craftily to hook Tom in, yet he didn't quite know if he could go through with it once he got what he was aiming for. ♥
Altogether this is just quite sensual and I really enjoyed reading it. I'd never thought about this kink before, really, but I like what you've done with it!
Date: 09/10/10 09:39 pm Title: Tom Watches
:) I love this! In my personal opinion, there aren't enough wax-play stories on here. Thank you!! (And you have nothing to worry about as far as your writing is concerned!)
Can't wait for more. ;)