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Reviewer: swmcconnell Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/01/15 05:50 pm Title: Adolecence Consumes Us

I must know what Molded is - waiting for more : )

Reviewer: tokio_fan_girl39 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/19/11 04:28 am Title: Adolecence Consumes Us

this confused the hell out of me and i like it. update soon :)



Author's Response: I'm glad. ;) Thank you.

Reviewer: Horseluvr14 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/15/10 05:29 pm Title: Adolecence Consumes Us

Aw no! Please update!!! What do you mean by moulding though???

Author's Response: Thank you. :) molding in my story means to 'change' but in the future you'll get a better and deeper understanding

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/01/10 01:54 am Title: Adolecence Consumes Us

Thanks for the update, i am very excited for more. keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Thank you for taking time out to read it. :)

Reviewer: sadangel10 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/12/10 10:16 am Title: Fame. Consumes Us.

You know I was a little sad that you were starting another story because that means, you won't update "That TRumper Kid" that often. But as i was reading this first chapter, I discovered that I don't mind you putting your attention on this story because it looks really interesting so far.
I really liked how you describe fame and all the things surrouding it, in the first couple of paragraphs. Wat all the famous celebrities have to deal with everyday and how some of their "managers", don't really care about them but the money they produce.
I also liked how Bill seems to recognize what fame is doing to him and isn't blinded by all the lights.

Anyway, I just want to let you know that I like this story so far and that I hope you update both of your stories=D

Author's Response: wow. Can i honestly say that what you just said gave me the motivation to continue Clay. Thank u so much. Ill try not to let u down. :)

Reviewer: xXfaithXx Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/10 12:47 pm Title: Fame. Consumes Us.

hey,

i'm here! *waves*

first chapter...and i'm thinking this is very different to that trumper kid...but it's very interesting..

good luck with this & i know it's going to be brilliant just because you're writing it

*tracking* X

Author's Response: *HUGS AND KISSES* rnrnSo looks like you made it xD. lol. Thank you so much. I hope you enjoy it.

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/10 02:04 am Title: Fame. Consumes Us.

This is a really good beginning. I am very much looking forward to more, keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thank you for reading. Hope you enjoy :)

Reviewer: AndeinerSeitenureineWeile Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/02/10 11:22 pm Title: Fame. Consumes Us.

This story has such an incredible start, and I really think it's going to be good.

I also noticed that you have an eating disorder warning, so I hope you've done the right amount of research on that if you plan to describle it accurately. I'll probably end up pointing out if any inaccuracies occur... eating disorders are something I know too much about. And, if you have any questions about them don't be afraid to ask!!

I really like that Bill has no control of himself when he's thrust into the life of fame, and I think, that being molded on the outside will destroy him on the inside. I can't wait to see if I'm right. :)

Author's Response: Thank you. You're the first to review :) And honestly I don't know much about the disorder so maybe you can help me with some stuff. Like symptoms and whatnot that would be great.

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