Date: 09/29/16 06:56 am Title: CHAPTER ONE: Prologue
pls update more?
Date: 07/29/11 02:07 am Title: CHAPTER FIVE: “I can’t avoid you anymore.”
absolutely amazing story...definitely one of my favorites on here :) You are planning on continuing this right?
Author's Response: Aw thanks! And yeah I am. My old PC broke so I bought a MacBook... but I don't have Word on this one so I can't write until I do.
Date: 02/23/11 07:52 pm Title: CHAPTER FIVE: “I can’t avoid you anymore.”
I love this! Please continue!
Date: 12/27/10 01:39 pm Title: CHAPTER FIVE: “I can’t avoid you anymore.”
wow is all I can say why was Bill like that was it a bad experience? or something a long those lines
Author's Response: You'll find out soon =D
Date: 12/26/10 04:53 pm Title: CHAPTER FIVE: “I can’t avoid you anymore.”
ok.... bill, you need to make up your mind.... *whacks bill upside head* anyway, great job!!
Author's Response: Haha, that'll teach him! And thank you :D
Date: 12/26/10 12:42 pm Title: CHAPTER FIVE: “I can’t avoid you anymore.”
aww im sorry about ur friends and everythinggoing on in life for u. but i hope u had a merry christmas even if it was hard trust me i know. this was the second christmas with out my best friend, uncle and grandma who all i loved very much. things are going to set u off just like something set all us of off this christmas. everyone in my family started to cry and all the kids were looking at us like we were crazy. but getting ur mind off things will help hun. also great update. take ur time :)
Author's Response: I had a wonderful Christmas, thank you!
I'm so sorry! That must be tough, I can't even imagine what that must feel like. I hope you had a great Christmas too, despite everything!
rnAnd thank you again =)
Date: 12/26/10 12:19 pm Title: CHAPTER FIVE: “I can’t avoid you anymore.”
Awww poor Tom, I hope Bill realises what an ass he was soon :'(
Author's Response: Me too!
Date: 12/26/10 09:16 am Title: CHAPTER FIVE: “I can’t avoid you anymore.”
oh, i am sorry about your friends, but even though you were sad and had a lot of work, i think this chapter was really good! love this, and can't wait to read more of it :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm really glad you like it! =D
Date: 12/26/10 03:22 am Title: CHAPTER FIVE: “I can’t avoid you anymore.”
wow, bipolar bill. i hope he explains why he was so abrupt with tom the morning after.
thanks for the update!
Author's Response: Hopefully, he will =) and you're welcome!
Date: 12/26/10 12:28 am Title: CHAPTER FIVE: “I can’t avoid you anymore.”
Damn Bill and his Bipolar-ness.
Author's Response: yeah!
Date: 12/25/10 11:50 pm Title: CHAPTER FIVE: “I can’t avoid you anymore.”
I'm sorry for your loss...i understand how tough that is. Im looking forward to your next chapter....poor tom...bill hun make up ur mind!
Author's Response: Thank you, I really appreciate it.
rnHopefully he will soon!
Date: 12/25/10 11:05 pm Title: CHAPTER FIVE: “I can’t avoid you anymore.”
I am greatly intrigued.
Author's Response: I'm glad =D
Date: 12/25/10 10:29 pm Title: CHAPTER FIVE: “I can’t avoid you anymore.”
can not believe bill! what a jerk
Author's Response: Yes he is! But he'll come around.. hopefully!
Date: 12/25/10 10:04 pm Title: CHAPTER FIVE: “I can’t avoid you anymore.”
Happy Christmas :)
Even w/in his own internal confusion bill was really harsh >.
Author's Response: Thanks! rnYeah, he was!
Date: 10/19/10 10:46 pm Title: CHAPTER ONE: Prologue
awww hope is sooo cute !!! =)
Date: 10/16/10 11:39 pm Title: CHAPTER FOUR: “Bill is not gay, end of story.”
haha. ohmy ! this chapter is confusing . i don't get Bill. HE IS DEFINITELY CONFUSED ! :)) . but i do love Bill and Tom's kiss. :)
Author's Response: Haha, yeah he is. And I'm glad you liked it ;)
Date: 10/14/10 06:24 pm Title: CHAPTER FOUR: “Bill is not gay, end of story.”
mmm i love billa pushing tom again the wall and making out
Author's Response: It is kinda hot, haha :D
Date: 10/13/10 11:38 pm Title: CHAPTER FOUR: “Bill is not gay, end of story.”
"What the actual fuck" That is too funny!!
Thanks for another good chapter, I can't wait for the next one. I'm very intrigued now about Bill's scar and what happened to his wife.
Author's Response: You'll get to know more about Bill's scar and his ex wife soon :D
Date: 10/13/10 09:18 pm Title: CHAPTER FOUR: “Bill is not gay, end of story.”
i love it so far! great job
Author's Response: Thank you :D
Date: 10/13/10 05:44 pm Title: CHAPTER FOUR: “Bill is not gay, end of story.”
Don't worry. I'm a spelling grammar nazi and i didn't notice anything bad. I have seen lots of other brain-dead authors on this site gushing over their betas doing such a wonderful job and still every other word is spelled incorrectly, misused etc. You have done very well without a beta. Perhaps you don't really need one. Good job on the story; I'm looking forward to your next chap.
Author's Response: You have no idea how happy that makes me! So thank you =D - and I'm glad you like the story!