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Reviewer: username bi Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/09/14 06:38 pm Title: If the world runs out of lovers..

Jus duh fwufwiest of all duh fwuff fwuff!!!!

Reviewer: MashiHi Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/29/12 01:55 pm Title: If the world runs out of lovers..

Great song, such deep lyrics.

Oh..and great story too!

IT'S SO FLUFFY IM GONNA DIE!

Reviewer: hunnybunny Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/17/11 02:44 pm Title: If the world runs out of lovers..

That was amazingly adorable!

Reviewer: AndeinerSeitenureineWeile Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/02/10 10:46 pm Title: If the world runs out of lovers..

I just wrote a story for Humanoid483 too!!! She's totally awesome. :)

I really liked this, and it was so cute, even though there was no smut really. Tom's cooking attire was delicious XD

Author's Response:

she's awesome. XD -hugs- and thanks! I planned smut actually, but I kinda got conflicted where to put it so yeah. XD

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and the statement on Tom's apron is actually a rip off from Selena Gomez. XD

Reviewer: cherryrose Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/01/10 03:52 pm Title: If the world runs out of lovers..

Hunny you don't fail at fluff. :D I really enjoyed it, and it was different from the other 'birthday sex' fics. It was so sweet, and nearly made me cry. :')
I loved the concept at most. (:

I only caught one mistake... it was in the lyrics.
"this world that I found I is too good to be true."
Added an extra 'I' there so as I read it I was terribly confuse. :p
Sorry.

Anyways, what a lovely fic. (:
The fluff was done so sweetly and I adore how you explained their connection. ^___^
really heart touching~



Author's Response:

oh.. -giggles- sorry. XD thank you! I'm glad you liked it! fluff is honestly my weakest point. other than having a plot without getting it drowned with smut. XD 

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fixing it now! -huggles-

Reviewer: Saiisuke Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/01/10 01:14 pm Title: If the world runs out of lovers..

You don't fail, it was fluffy enough :)

Author's Response:

-hugs- thanks! glad to know this attempt was good. 

Reviewer: dubistheilig Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/01/10 12:52 pm Title: If the world runs out of lovers..

Aww, that was amazing *___*

Author's Response:

-huggles- thanks! I am so happy you guys liked this! <3

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/01/10 11:28 am Title: If the world runs out of lovers..

Awww That was adorable, you don't fail at fluff at all! Really cute birthday fic, I liked it a lot!

Author's Response:

-hugs- thank you! I'm glad you liked it!! 

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