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Reviewer: crazigothness Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/07/10 08:08 pm Title: Chapter 1

Hey my name is autumn to yeah and Ms.Maril i always love you stories you to Angie!! This one seems awesome!!

Author's Response: Thank you sweetie. We're so glad you're enjoying the story. I picked the name Autumn and Angie picked Alaina. I just love the name. <3

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/06/10 09:15 pm Title: Chapter 6

Man o man...Tom's got it in a bad way and I love it!!! Cannot wait for some sexy time with these two, for some reason i'm thinking it will be H*O*T!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review. We are trying to make it as hot as we can without getting arrested but romantic too. <3

Reviewer: THROX Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/06/10 02:58 pm Title: Chapter 6

hhahaa loved it.. It was amazing how Tom was watching bill and doing what he was in a bar full of people.. my my naughty Tom.. ;)

Author's Response: That's our Tom. You never know what he's going to do next. Thanks so much for the reviews. We're really glad you're enjoying our story. <3

Reviewer: AnoukKaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/06/10 01:03 pm Title: Chapter 6

Aaaahhh omgosh I can't believe I didn't read chapter 5!!! Oh well, I caught up :D *thumbs up*

Author's Response: Shame on you for not reading chapter 5. LOL Yay!!! You caught up. Now you're right on track. <3

Reviewer: AshesPashes Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/06/10 12:40 pm Title: Chapter 6

I'm really enjoying this story but the chapters are too short. I always want more. I'm excited for the next update.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. We're really enjoying writing it for everyone and ourselves. <3

Reviewer: FairyCelt Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/06/10 12:12 pm Title: Chapter 6

I love see Tom so moony and gone for Bill! It really makes his character so endearing. I'm really enjoying the progression in this story, and I'm always so happy to see an update!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your reviews. We are so happy you are enjoying our little story. We're sure enjoying writing it. <3

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/05/10 03:28 am Title: Chapter 5

Lol, I loved that Bill gave himself away. And that he set his alarm in the first place. Too cute!! Keep up the great work, i look forward to more.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review. We are glad that you are enjoying it. <3

Reviewer: Alice Her Many Horses Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/04/10 09:26 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is a great story, Ms. Marril, and Angie of course. I cannot wait to read the next part!

Author's Response: Thank you sweetie. We're so glad you're enjoying it. <3

Reviewer: THROX Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/04/10 07:00 pm Title: Chapter 5

love it I wanna see how long it will take for them to enjoy the wedding great job.. :D

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review and for reading. <3

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/04/10 05:57 pm Title: Chapter 5

Awww---I think i'm in love....with both of them!!! ^_^
Lovin' it more and more. I think that when they finally get together-it will be romantic, slow, sexy and oh so HOT! But thats just my opinion so, meh...

Author's Response: Thank you so much. Your opinion just might be right. <3

Reviewer: FairyCelt Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/04/10 03:40 pm Title: Chapter 5

OMG, so excited for the wedding! That's a big step to invite Bill to something as big and important as that, so I'm really curious to see how it plays out!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review. We hope you continue to enjoy the story. <3

Reviewer: THROX Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/10 09:30 pm Title: Chapter 4

That's what I like keeps me guessing till the next chapter can't wait for more.. Lots of love sent your way.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. We are so glad that you like the story. We are having such a good time collabing on it. It's is being written with much love let me tell you. Thank you for being so supportive. And know that much love is sent right back. <3

Reviewer: AnoukKaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/10 07:45 pm Title: Chapter 4

*thumbs up*

That's what I will say from now on, instead on ranting about how fantabulously incredible every chapter is. I'm sure you guys would get a little bored of that, won't you? Oh you know.... I'm jealous of Helmut... I wish my name was Helmut. I actually think it's a pretty epic name, to be honest. It sounds like a ninja name o___O :D Perfect! Muahaha *evil grin*

Author's Response: Hi Anouk. It's Maril. Angie isn't allowed to respond to remarks so it's still me. We're so glad that you are enjoying our little story. We are both feeling such joy from writing it. It is great fun. <3

Reviewer: FairyCelt Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/10 05:36 pm Title: Chapter 4

Tom has it so bad! I really enjoyed reading his inner thoughts in this chapter, and I'm actually finding myself wondering about Bill right along with him. This has definitely kept my interest!

Author's Response: We are so glad that you're enjoying the story. Thank you for the review. <3

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/10 05:21 pm Title: Chapter 4

Awww! Tom is so addicted already! It was fun to read about what's going on in his mind, interesting chapter. That definitely kept my interest!

Author's Response: Thank you so much. We're glad you are enjoying this little romp. <3

Reviewer: RissaTH Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/10 04:51 pm Title: Chapter 4

i caught up!!
and so far amazing!!

Author's Response: Thank you very much. We're glad you're enjoying it so far. <3

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/10 03:55 pm Title: Chapter 4

interesting so far. keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Thank you. We'll try! <3

Reviewer: ingold Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/10 01:03 pm Title: Chapter 4

Ver god! Love!

Author's Response: We thank you so much. <3

Reviewer: helpmebill Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/10 01:02 pm Title: Chapter 4

Go to Bill's place and see what he sleeps in. Yes. That's a good idea. :)

Take him a Grande Caramel Macchiato with extra whipped cream and he'll love you forever.

Shoo! Go!

Author's Response: Wait for the next chapter! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. We love all comments. <3

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/10 12:09 pm Title: Chapter 4

Tom's got it and got it bad! Its so sweet to read about his infatuation with Bill, i'm guessing Bill's feeling the same way! Looking forward to their working at the club tonight and see what goes on between them! Thank's for the update

Author's Response: You're more than welcome. We're glad you're enjoying the story. Thanks for the reviews. <3

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