Date: 10/03/10 11:12 pm Title: Chapter 13
I have to say, the scene where Tom brushes Bill's hair was so amazingly sweet and intimate! And the thought of Bill on a stripper pole is a great one, so I thank you for that image!
Author's Response: You are so welcome. Thank you so much for your lovely review. We are so glad you're enjoying our little story. <3
Date: 10/02/10 09:50 am Title: Chapter 12
this fic is awesome! I can't wait for an update =) xxx
Author's Response: Thank you so much!!! <3
Date: 09/30/10 04:29 am Title: Chapter 12
i very much enjoyed this chapter. thanks so much for the update!
Author's Response: You're very welcome. Thanks for reading. <3
Date: 09/29/10 07:32 pm Title: Chapter 12
aww poor Tomi trying to get something going.. Great job however. can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review. We're so glad you're enjoying it. <3
Date: 09/29/10 02:57 pm Title: Chapter 12
Awww I can tell they both want to live together and spend as much time as possible together. I really like this story. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Thank you sooooo much! I'll try to have the next chapter done as soon as I can. <3
Date: 09/29/10 11:08 am Title: Chapter 12
I'm still loving the interactions between Bill and Tom! They really go well together, and I'm always so excited to read about them. Loved this chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review. We are so glad you are enjoying this story. <3
Date: 09/29/10 10:27 am Title: Chapter 12
Talk about plan's being shot to hell,poor Tom and Bill!LOL Looking forward to next chapter
Author's Response: I know! Poor boys but I'm sure they'll be able to overcome this! <3
Date: 09/22/10 08:50 pm Title: Chapter 11
Awesome! Loved it
Author's Response: Thank you. <3
Date: 09/22/10 02:35 am Title: Chapter 11
There was no need to lose sleep, it was a great chapter. Loving and not too over the top. I think it was great, but if you aren't comfortable you can always elude to it tastefully so we know it happened without having to really get into it.
My one hint would be to use cock and penis less. Use things like arousal, erection, member, you can say things like, "Tom moved deep inside of Bill" or himself, "Tom watched himself slide in and out of Bill's tight opening." Things like that. But it was really great. You should be proud of your first smut scene.
Author's Response: Thank you sooooo much for the advice. I will definitely take it into account next time. And thank you for the review. I'll try not to lose sleep next time. :D <3
Date: 09/22/10 12:26 am Title: Chapter 11
Aww sweetie, ur too hard on urself. This was pretty damn hot xD I love it! I smiled so big when Tom gave Bill the bracelet & asked him to be his boyfriend =) It had my tummy doing flip flops. I swear u'd think it was me getting the bracelet or something lmao.
Author's Response: Thank you Ang. I'm just sorry it took me so long to write. It'll be faster next time. Now it's your turn!!! <3
Date: 09/21/10 11:34 pm Title: Chapter 11
You were worried for no reason!!! Simply beautiful
Author's Response: Thank you so much. <3
Date: 09/21/10 11:22 pm Title: Chapter 11
Aw! What a romantic and loving pair! I so loved this chapter and the progression in their relationship!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. We're so glad you're enjoying this. <3
Date: 09/17/10 08:56 pm Title: Chapter 7
Es ist Oktoberfest, Octoberfest nicht. :)
Author's Response: Danke. <3
Date: 09/16/10 10:12 am Title: Chapter 10
Bill will love it-after all it's bling! LOL This chapter is cute and sweet.
Author's Response: You are so right - Bill does love his bling! Thank you sooooo much. <3
Date: 09/16/10 02:23 am Title: Chapter 10
Aww I love romantic, love struck Tom. I really like this story!
Author's Response: Thank you. We're so glad you like it. <3
Date: 09/15/10 11:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
very nice and sweet story, can't wait for more chapters!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. <3
Date: 09/15/10 09:43 pm Title: Chapter 10
awww how cute... Tom buying a gift for Bill to cute keep up the good work
Author's Response: Thank you sooooo much. <3
Date: 09/15/10 09:01 pm Title: Chapter 10
I just can't get enough of this story. I love Bill and Tom so much, and even reading something like lunch and a shopping trip has me captivated!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. We are having the times of our lives writing this baby. <3
Date: 09/15/10 08:39 pm Title: Chapter 10
They are so sweet. I love how in awe of each other they both are. its very cute and bodes well for always appreciating each other. thanks for the update!
Author's Response: You are very welcome. Thank you for the reviews. <3
Date: 09/13/10 03:22 am Title: Chapter 9
very cute...tom may have to admit at some point that it wasn't his idea. his girls are slick though. =)
Author's Response: Thank you so much. They are slick aren't they? <3