Date: 08/07/11 08:20 pm Title: Chapter 1: This Isn't Real...
Aw, even though this is sad I love the way it's written.
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Date: 01/11/11 05:32 pm Title: Chapter 1: This Isn't Real...
Considering you wrote that in under an hour that was really good. I liked the swapping from the two worlds and I particularly like the last two paragraphs. Very well done :)
Author's Response: Thank you! :) I'm glad you liked it. :D
Date: 09/02/10 03:18 pm Title: Chapter 1: This Isn't Real...
that was good
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Date: 09/01/10 10:25 am Title: Chapter 1: This Isn't Real...
I especially like the ending, it's sad but in the same time it's sweet :)
Author's Response: That's what I was going for, so I'm glad it came across that way. :) Thank you. :D
Date: 09/01/10 07:44 am Title: Chapter 1: This Isn't Real...
Wow, I liked this story a lot. You shouldn't doubt yourself. It was just perfect. Write more, pretty please!
I am fairly new to the whole THF and so far I have been mostly reading a lot of sexiness and fluffiness BUT deep inside I have a really tender spot for angst and all different bizarre themes. Your story is the first one I felt like I had to review on.
You depicted perfectly the pain of loss but also the pain of knowing that it would never get better. I can't imagine how it must feel if one identical twin loses another one...like seriously....is it even possible to carry on?
What I liked a lot about your fiction was that you kept it rather "clean, short, crisp and simple", by which I mean you described the simplicity of their love, loss and pain in straight forward simplistic manner. Sometimes it is tempting and easy to slip into excessive drama and never-ending dwelling in pain depiction when dealing with sad subjects. Don't get me wrong, you definitely delivered punch in a stomach. Sometimes writing in direct and clean manner has bigger effect that overly wordly pieces.
Dream sequences were really lovely and the dialogues were great too.
The ending....just perfect. I totally hoped it would go the way you chose for it. Sad but happy at the same time (at least as I would see it).
Great work.....I hope to see more coming from you soon:-)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :D I feel much better about this fic now. :) I was wondering if I'd left too much out, if I should have added more or described other things better, but I'm glad to know that you think I did a good job. Thank you! And I'll definitely try and get another story up soon--hopefully something longer than a one-shot. X)
Date: 08/31/10 07:37 pm Title: Chapter 1: This Isn't Real...
So sweet. Stories like these always get to me. It just pulls at the heart strings and really makes you think. Great fic.
Author's Response: Thank you. :) Glad you liked it. :D
Date: 08/31/10 05:20 pm Title: Chapter 1: This Isn't Real...
Aww that was lovely! ^_^ I adored the concept and how they met in dreams yet was still not enough..
I didn't catch any mistakes I believe.
In all it was a gorgeous and lovely fiction I did highly enjoy it. :D
Made my heart hurt and made me aww :3
Amazing job!
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Author's Response: Thank you very much! :) I didn't think I did a very good job on it, so I was kind of worried about posting it, but your review makes me feel better. Thank you! :D