Date: 12/29/23 08:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
SOOOOOO CUTE I DEF NEEDED A FLUFF RN :3
Date: 12/06/13 06:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
this deserves more reads and reviews then it got! Very well written.
Date: 09/12/10 08:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was such a sweet, sweet story. Danke.
Date: 09/05/10 07:03 am Title: Chapter 1
Awww... that was so sweet. 8)
Very well written.
Date: 09/01/10 09:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
oh, super sweet. i love it.
Date: 08/31/10 08:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
So sweet and I absolutely love it-thank you for a wonderful, cute story! Thank you for sharing your talent with us
Date: 08/31/10 12:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awwwww, sappy sweetness!! I loved it!
Although I have to say that I think this cute little story deserves another proof-reading... it's just little things like repeating certain adjectives or "I don’t think that coffee doesn’t sound too bad right now” which is a double negative... just small things.
The story itself was so whimsical.. it made me think of 101 Dalmations for some reason. The scene where Scotty jumps onto Bill and then Bill falls over onto Tom also, that felt like it came out of a Disney movie. hehe. I don't go for twincest-unrelated often, but I had a feeling this would be a lovely story. It just put a smile on my face. Thanks for writing. :)
Author's Response: I'm sorry if the grammar isn't up to par. Truth is I was dog tired when I posted this and it honestly took me two weeks to write it. So sure there would be grammatical errors I don't catch.
To say I didn't get some ideas from that movie would be a lie. I thought about it some when I wrote that part and nearly pee'd my pants laughing.
Date: 08/31/10 08:23 am Title: Chapter 1
brilliant!! I loved this so much! i hope you gain more inspiration and start writing again!
Thanks for sharing!
take care X
Date: 08/31/10 05:59 am Title: Chapter 1
*squeal* I loved this :D
xx Chi ^^
Date: 08/31/10 01:17 am Title: Chapter 1
Well worth the two weeks it took to write. I really enjoyed it. I'm happy Bill changed his mind and went to have coffee with Tom after all. Great new one. I hope the reviews help propel you back into writing.
Author's Response: Hm, thank you sweetie. I'm working on Royally Fucked at the moment. That one will most likely come with a long explanation if you read it. I'm not sure if you do.
Date: 08/31/10 01:15 am Title: Chapter 1
So very cute!
Love how Scotty helped introduce Tom to Bill. I love stories where one of their dogs is a main character.
Great story! Love it! :D
Author's Response: Thank you so very much for the review. ^-^
I think Scotty is amazing to say the least.