Date: 04/30/23 11:24 pm Title: Part I: Don't Drown Your Sorrows
I've mentioned this on other reviews: I came into the TH / THF fandom in Jan’22. The vast majority of fics I've read are quite old and I'm sure the authors have moved on (and probably wont even see new reviews), BUT I figure why not leave one anyway… I enjoyed this fic and wanted to say thank you for writing and sharing it!
Date: 03/16/12 10:12 am Title: Part III: Just Make Everything Right Again
omg, i love it!! :'')
Author's Response: thanks, glad you enjoyed it!! :)
Date: 07/05/11 04:11 pm Title: Part III: Just Make Everything Right Again
this was really good!!!
Author's Response: Thank you. One of my fucked up favorites. :)
Date: 11/08/10 06:17 am Title: Part III: Just Make Everything Right Again
This was quite beautiful, really. I loved it to bits, though you might want to fix a couple of spelling mistakes here and there. Apart from that, I cannot complain about anything.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. Yes, I caught those mistakes when I was reading it last night and plan to repost it soon. :)
Date: 10/26/10 08:02 pm Title: Part III: Just Make Everything Right Again
Tom was seriously making me worry... no more booze for him is what i has to say *nod nod nod*
Yay for happy endings. gotta love when it starts out rocky and ends up perfectly.. but you know, just think of how much Bill could make on ebay if he did in face tear off one of Tomi's family jewels XDDD
Author's Response: :* I agree! -nods-rnrnAnd this just popped into my head after reading that saying and bugged the crap out of me until I wrote it ALL down! :D You know, it's pretty sad but Bill would probably make a crapload of money doing that. XDXDXD Tokio Hotel fans truly are completely insane... -nods- :D And I'm one of them!
Date: 08/31/10 07:48 pm Title: Part III: Just Make Everything Right Again
Ooh, I loved this. It was the perfect amount of betrayal, angst and happy ending. great great job. I can't wait to see what else you are working on. =)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Mind if I use your review in the summary? :D
Date: 08/31/10 04:12 pm Title: Part III: Just Make Everything Right Again
Wow, it's amazing! I love happy endings, so I'm glad that you ended it like that :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad that you're satisfied. :)
Date: 08/31/10 08:26 am Title: Part I: Don't Drown Your Sorrows
Oh well, I don't know what I was expecting on part 2, but it wasn't for Tom to atone from what he did by... hmmm, I want to say force himself on Bill, but it wasn't quite like that. It was different and at the same time, I can see him doing this, trying to give his twin what he thinks he's been wanting all this time, even if he'll end up hurt like he did. Which was why I loved part 3 so much, Bill stepped back and allowed his brother to choose and when he did, it was a give and take, it was them healing and getting closer than before in equal terms, which was what Bill made sure Tom realized when he impaled himself on his brother, only he had the good sense to come prepared. ;) Hope that makes sense. :)
Author's Response: Oh yes. That makes perfect sense. Yes.. the scene with Tom in the second part came to mind a while ago but I didn't want to make a one shot JUST for that and there was no place in any of my current fics. So when the opportunity popped up for this idea I just sat back and thought 'yeah, that could work'. And it looks like it worked better than I thought it would. :D
Date: 08/30/10 10:20 pm Title: Part III: Just Make Everything Right Again
I absolutely adored that they came full circle like this. That Bill got his man and that Tom realized he loved his brother as more than just that. I wasn't expecting Bill to do that, to turn the tables on Tom and reenact the scene from the last chapter, minus the pain, of course. It was a wonderful way to get them both to heal and get even closer.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! :) This story came together in the end far better than I thought it would and thank you for noticing the little connections. :) Makes me feel that it's worth putting them there.
Date: 08/30/10 09:46 pm Title: Part III: Just Make Everything Right Again
well i really like it, it almost made me cry. Well done!
Author's Response: Thank you. I was on the verge of tears the entire time I was writing it. :,) Okay, maybe not the third part. :P
Date: 08/30/10 09:23 pm Title: Part III: Just Make Everything Right Again
Eeekk what a beautiful ending. ^________^
The sex was brilliant, and so sweet :3
When Tom was playing with Bill's fingers in his lap I melted. *____* Oh, my, GOD. So adorable and I DIEDZ. xD
then came secksy teimz... Tom is so sweet when he bottoms. :333333 Dominant Bill is so... still trying to get it through my head, I think this fic did the best with it. You portrayed him so nicely! :) And how Tom complies with his character, wonderful.
Happy endings can only be played out by the best authors. You. Did. Beautifully.
I love. :D
It wasn't an insane fic :p Haha, it's sweet, but ch. 2 was my favorite. The angst efffffffff *hearts*
YOU UPDATE TOO FAST I DIDNT HAVE MUCH TIME FOR THE BANNER XD
you don't need to use it.. seriously.
But here you go for having such a lovely fic :)
http://i477.photobucket.com/albums/rr140/InterRose/sorrowcanswimcopy.png
I will read/review your other fics btw. You have so many though. :p I'll try. (:
Thanks for entertaining us with such a fantastic fiction. ;D
Author's Response: Seriously. Leave shorter reviews. My writer's ego is about to explode! Thank you so much for all the praise! I'm so glad that you enjoyed it to the very end. And it's rare for me to update this fast. It's just because it was all already written. As for the banner, I think I'm going to keep my own but this is going to get posted in the author's notes or something. I freaking love it! Beautiful work! :DrnrnAnyway, happy reading and reviewing! I hope to hear from you another time!! :) <3
Date: 08/30/10 09:22 pm Title: Part II: They Can Freaking Swim
Oh, this was heartbreaking and so not what I was expecting. It's so sad and poignant that Tom felt the need to atone for what he did this way, and still understandable in some way. I love how sweet Bill was with him, too.
Author's Response: Thank you. :) Out of curiosity, what WERE you expecting? However, I'm glad that you enjoyed the story anyway. :)
Date: 08/30/10 04:28 pm Title: Part II: They Can Freaking Swim
ermm... *keeps hand down* Totally fucked. o.o sorry XD
Oh my God, this chapter was ah-mazing. Seriously.
I've been looking for a good fic like this for some time.
Tom keeps beating himself up.. *shakes head* and picturing Bill hitting Tom after Tom asks him too is LOL in my head, well, at least it didn't happen. XD
I'm not a fan of Top!Bill on Bottom!Tom, but this is beyond acceptable. Because it had a reason, a plot, and it was so amazing... How Bill wanted Tom so bad to fuck him.... then Tom aches, I loved that. Nearly got me on the verge of tears which is a WIN for any author that can put enough emotion into a fic that the reader(s) will cry! :) Excellent job~
Tom goes to the shower... he bled, aww. Really, really amazing there. I adored the violence, tears and blood. :p Only because you managed it perfectly and beautifully...
Bill didn't seem so sorry to me, idk why, I think he could've been more sincere. Does he know he hurt Tom? (physically and emotionally) Mm.. really brilliant.
I can't wait to see where this will go!
I'm tracking this :D
It has so much potential and such an impressive story line.
Love it.
:)
P.S what attracted me to this story was the "Non con/Rape" warning. XD I would've never clicked it without it LMFAO.
Author's Response: Ummm. Okay. Brain malfunction... I like to reply to reviews in the same form which I received them, often matching them for length as well. But I've got no clue what to say that I haven't already said. You know, if you enjoyed this, you might want to check out some of my other short stories... I've got a couple G on G ones as well as Shadow Brother (another battle of internal abuse (not quite as dark as this one in violence)) and Frustration, Desperation, and Satisfaction which is like... sex meets crack with incest that isn't really incest.. o.O lolz! Anyway, like I said. I'll probably break and post the final part of this story in the next hour or two. Once I have something written, I can't not post it. I'm still not so sure I like how I wrapped it up... Maybe I'll tweak it, maybe you'll review with some fixes. Either way, I can't wait to hear what you think! :D
Date: 08/30/10 04:14 pm Title: Part I: Don't Drown Your Sorrows
AH MY GOD. FINALLY A GOOD FIC WORTHD DAMN READING AND REVIEWING! O_O
Anyways, really really adore this concept. :) I love what it has so far, and how you are managing Tom's point of view, or, anyone's point of view for a matter of fact. But the story is wonderful. I love how Tom is against Bill's sexuality, and I'm guessing that man is Tom anyways. xD Calm down Tomi....
When Tom hurt Bill, and he left to Andreas, I like that. I wonder what will happen when Bill returns.
Love this so far will read chapter two.
Would you like a banner btw? :)
Lovely story! < 3
Author's Response: Holy crap. o.o I LOVE READERS LIKE YOU!!! Someone who actually talks about the aspects they like rather than "great story. post more". I love all reviews, but this kind of review always makes my day!! :DrnrnYes, the main POV is Tom's. The whole story is. Managing POV is something I've always worked to perfect so I love hearing that I'm succeeding. :) Chapter two is now up and chapter three, due to my impatience, will be up today at some point. I would love to hear your opinion on the complete story! I will warn you, Tom loses his fucking mind in chapter two. But I personally think his insanity has logic. rnrnAs for a banner, I have one but if you would like to make another one, I would love to still post it with the story! :D (Has always made own banners (doesn't like bare stories) and has never had someone offer before). I'm officially the happiest writer on THF right now. :D rnrnAgain, thank you so much for your in-depth review, for reading, and for making me smile. :) <3
Date: 08/30/10 10:22 am Title: Part I: Don't Drown Your Sorrows
Oh, this is so sad. I really hope Tom has the chance to make it better. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Well... I give nothing away but writing this made me cry... Thanks for reading! More posted today.
Date: 08/30/10 10:15 am Title: Part I: Don't Drown Your Sorrows
MORE-please, and soon!
Author's Response: More will be posted today. Actually, the whole thing will probably posted by tonight.
Date: 08/30/10 08:30 am Title: Part I: Don't Drown Your Sorrows
more please?
Author's Response: more up today.
Date: 08/30/10 07:58 am Title: Part I: Don't Drown Your Sorrows
*hits Track Story*. Love it. Well written. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thank you! There are only two more chapters though and they should all be up today or by tomorrow. This was supposed to be a one shot but then it just got longer... and longer... and longer. And I said 'Fuck it. Three chapters!' Anyway, thanks for reading! :)