Date: 02/01/24 09:51 am Title: Chapter 27
I LOVEEEEEDDDDD THIS OML ITS A PREFECT STORY I LOVE YOU I SEARCHED SO LONG FOR A STORY LIKE THIS ITS SO SAD AND WONDERFUL !!
Date: 03/31/15 04:02 pm Title: Chapter 27
great even the end was great
Date: 01/31/13 02:29 am Title: Chapter 27
Tom took too long
Date: 01/30/13 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 14
ow my god.you are amasing.
Date: 09/22/12 01:52 pm Title: Chapter 27
I literally started crying. I so sad, angry, and upset D:
The ending was just too heartbreaking :'c
Date: 07/17/12 05:55 am Title: Chapter 5
the first five chapters make up 36 pages on a word document o.O
36 x 5 = 180 + another 15 or so im guessing or the last two chaps. that makes almost 200 pages, YOU COULD PUBLISH THIS INTO A BOOK!!!!!!
Date: 07/13/12 04:53 am Title: Chapter 1
now that i know how it ends, im like "I NEED TO STOP READING, IT GETS SO SAD" and then im like "its too good, i cant stop reading" .___.
Date: 06/29/12 08:23 pm Title: Chapter 27
such a sad story but its still so good ;-;
Date: 05/06/12 12:04 pm Title: Chapter 27
I am literally sobbing like there's no tomorrow. Oh my god.
Date: 03/10/12 09:33 am Title: Chapter 27
I still got goose bumps and chills while reading this!
Date: 03/06/12 03:55 pm Title: Chapter 27
i totally agree that not every story has a happy ending. life doesn't have happy endings either. as much as you would love for life to have a fairy tale ending once in a while, it never, ever does. all we're left with is disappointment. so yea, i think this story has a bitter sweet ending to it. the way i look at it, at least now they can be together
Date: 02/24/12 07:49 pm Title: Chapter 27
OMG i had like a baby heart-attack at the ending.... VERY well done my dear.... really excellent... ur right it's bittersweet and so lovely..... great job :)
Date: 08/05/11 08:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
I hate this story.. I really do.. I almost fainted at the ending oh fuck I regret reading this.. Don't get me wrong, it was an amazing story, amazing writing and exactly what I was looking for when I searched, but it was too much for me to handle.. Gotta go read a PWP fluff story now if i'll ever be able to sleep tonight
Date: 07/12/11 08:40 pm Title: Chapter 27
Oh my god!!! IM CRYING!! This is one of my favorite stories right now!Gosh. I am seriously crying. Great. Outstanding. Amazing story (:
Date: 07/11/11 05:39 pm Title: Chapter 27
this story is so sad!
it made me cry at the end!
but it is all so a good story!
Date: 06/29/11 05:04 pm Title: Chapter 27
I'm afraid I can't give you an amazing review... there were some things that were distracting and stood out as unrealistic and just not good writing. I'm sorry. :( The twins are way too emotional, and they flip-flop too much, and I can't believe Bill would go to those lengths. The way his life fell apart just sounds like a little emo kid- it's just not realistic. People are a little deeper than that, they have more self-control and are more logical. Oh, and Simone too... that is just not the portrayal of a level-headed adult. Your characters need to not flip-flop emotions and be so sensitive to every single sentence. I know you're trying show people what they're feeling, and that's a good thing, but lighten up a bit.
Also- money doesn't grow on trees... the way they just cancel shows on a whim and there's no Jost or anyone else theyre responsible to... that's just not the way life works.
However, there were some concepts in this fic that I liked- the idea of the Truth-or-Dare and the mutual suicide at the end being my favs. There's so much potential there. :) It's all the stuff in the middle that made the story hard to read at times. I don't want to go into too much more detail, so I'm gonna ask that you write your next fic with a fixed plot in mind, because in this fic it felt like you threw a new idea into every chapter and squished everything together into one story, whether it belonged or not.
I'm sorry this isn't a very good review. Keep writing and one day I know I'll love it! :)
Date: 05/18/11 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 8
I CANNNOTTTT believe that he did that!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! He didn't even consider the effect that would have on his and Tom's relationship!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 02/22/11 11:23 am Title: Chapter 27
"I consider it to be a bitter sweet ending, and after all, not every story can have a happy ending, right?"
There has been nothing sweet about this story from page one. I give this 2 of a possible 10 but I'll forego all the reasons why.
Author's Response: Oh boo hoo, my heart bleeds for you. Go cry to mommy about it.
Date: 02/16/11 09:28 pm Title: Chapter 27
OMG! You killed them! You evil evil author! How could you they finally professed their love for one another! How could you!?? ugh!!
But this was an AMAZING story :) Very well written.
Author's Response: Sorry. I just wanted it to be 'different' to other stories. ;)