Date: 10/21/10 06:42 pm Title: Chapter 20
YAY. Ahem, not about THAT. I'm just, not confused anymore.
I loved this, it was so intense, so dark so AMAZING.
Author's Response: Thanks! ^_^
Date: 10/21/10 05:44 pm Title: Chapter 20
OMFBATK! U NOW MUST UPDATE SOON! DO NOT LEAVE ME HANGING ON THIS!
Author's Response: I'll try. =)
Date: 10/20/10 02:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
A lot of stories get a bit boring after a while... this is definitely not one of them.. With every chapter it gets more exciting and with every chapter it improves. In the beginning I didnt really like all the puking stuff - bit too much - and bill being way too pushy - also a bit too much, i think bill has better selfcontrol -.. But the last couple of chapters are wow
Author's Response: Thank you! ^_^
Date: 10/18/10 07:32 pm Title: Chapter 19
cant wait for the next chapter
Iv been reading this story for the last 3 days. I love it...although, this is all GEORG's fault
Author's Response: Haha, yeah technically it is, but I'm sure those feeling were buried inside of Bill long before the dare. ;)
Date: 10/18/10 05:35 pm Title: Chapter 16
Bill never learns, does he
LOL
Date: 10/18/10 02:55 pm Title: Chapter 13
YAY im glad they made up
Date: 10/18/10 01:26 pm Title: Chapter 19
Awesome chapter! I'm so excited to see what happens next :D
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 10/17/10 04:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
Because in the trailer and such there's mention of suicide and Bill dying because Tom doesn't love him back but now Bill is seeing that Tom does care about him so... Yeah.
Author's Response: Well Tom doesn't want to admit his feelings, so who knows what way this will go..
Date: 10/17/10 08:35 am Title: Chapter 1
"Author's Response: Just so you know, there are 100's of other stories on this site that deal with sex between the twins. This is not one of them. I wanted to make a story that could almost relate to reality rather than fantasy. And to me, this is how they would act if a situation like this ever did occur."
^_______^ yes you're right for that reason i like your story ^_^
i like this chapter and i can't wait until the next one
i'm happy that bill began to express himself to tom ^^ and what he felt ^_^
like it like it ^_^
Author's Response: Thank you! ^_^
Date: 10/17/10 04:36 am Title: Chapter 19
"Author's Response: Just so you know, there are 100's of other stories on this site that deal with sex between the twins. This is not one of them. I wanted to make a story that could almost relate to reality rather than fantasy. And to me, this is how they would act if a situation like this ever did occur."
I totally agree with you, in reality it's takes a lot of time to resolve this probleme....So keep writing, like it so much...
Author's Response: Thanks. =)
Date: 10/17/10 03:23 am Title: Chapter 19
Bill have to stop pushing tom! try to move on, wait for Tom to come to him. I'm getting so annoyed with bill
Author's Response: It's a hard situation for both of them!
Date: 10/16/10 10:12 pm Title: Chapter 19
oh, quick question. please tell me that the suicide/character death warning isn't Bill nor Tom? I will DIE if it is D:
Author's Response: Sorry, can't give anything away!
Date: 10/16/10 07:20 pm Title: Chapter 19
I don't review often, and I really like this story, but it's a bit annoying when you change from writing in past, to writing in presence.
Fx:
One thing he did know for sure though, was that Tom was beginning to have feelings for him. He can deny it all he wants, but in the end, those feelings will emerge.
It's just a bit confusing at times, but I really enjoy the story, nonetheless.
Author's Response: I can't see the problem with that sentence. Bill already knows how Tom is feeling, but he understands that Tom doesn't yet realize the same thing. I don't think I jump back and forth at all.
Date: 10/16/10 07:14 pm Title: Chapter 19
stupid Tom. *kicks him* thanks for the updaaate!
Author's Response: Hehe
Date: 10/16/10 06:52 pm Title: Chapter 19
Please stop the suspense and just put them together. No more angst.
Author's Response: Just so you know, there are 100's of other stories on this site that deal with sex between the twins. This is not one of them. I wanted to make a story that could almost relate to reality rather than fantasy. And to me, this is how they would act if a situation like this ever did occur.
Date: 10/16/10 06:13 pm Title: Chapter 19
Very nice chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you. =)
Date: 10/16/10 05:50 pm Title: Chapter 19
I'm confussssed.
But that's fine. I loved this :D
... But that may because it involved my two favourite things to hear in a sentence together... Tom, and erection.
:D
Author's Response: What part are you confused about?