Date: 09/30/10 01:23 pm Title: Chapter 4
wow!!! this was very good! it's a little short but good nonetheless. i can't wait for the next chap, who was the poor blond? oh i feel sorry for him!
and the dead girl? that was awesome. well, see ya!
Author's Response: thanks,, glad your enjoying (:
Date: 09/28/10 06:46 am Title: Chapter 4
lirtk,fzsmecnyrhiM!!! DAY-UM! -die- You kinda scared me, I don't read het sex scenes o.o' You did good though, it was like...nice? Is that the word? I'm sorry, these scare me ._. Anyways~ Georg looks dodgy. Like, very dodgy. Extreme dodgyness right there! Well, you were right about the intensity xD HE WAS THINKING OF BILL!! Even more DAY-UM! Look what you did, got me typing in a way I don't type! -huff- More please :3
Author's Response: ohh thank god. i was so worried about writing the sex scene. especially considering it was het, but i knew i wanted him to be thinking of Bill so i just got it over and done with.rnand im glad geo is giving off the dodgy vibes. thats what i was hoping for x3 lol at the fact that i scared you hahahaaa
Date: 09/26/10 07:37 am Title: Chapter 1
The stupid thing cut off my review -.- Mmkay, well I was saying that there were many epic line I could quote :3 Like the rape family xD And when Tom adds, "We live together" to the end of that sentence, I dunno why but I died laughing >.< It's like, wow Tom, I'm so happy for you? xD Anyways~ I'm still loving this, so I will stalk this story from now on :3 Ohh, and I think it could use more commas, they are just wonderful~
Author's Response: hahaa more commas ehh? very well then,, dually noted
Date: 09/26/10 06:35 am Title: Chapter 3
You are pure EVIL D: Fair enough you apologized in advance...but evil! What the fuck?! Seriously?! D: -stops raging- Georg seems so mysterious~ [That translates to sexy in my mind >.
Author's Response: hahaa i was going for sexy and mysterious d:
Date: 09/26/10 03:05 am Title: Chapter 3
oh it's like one of those Law & Order SVU chapters that i super like. o_o but i can't see what's happenin' forward, you got me so interested!
hope u can update soon!
Author's Response: hahaa i was totally thinking of law & order when i was writing. ill try update asap (:
Date: 09/25/10 01:17 pm Title: Chapter 3
dundundun.
more hard work. ahahha
Date: 09/25/10 03:48 am Title: Chapter 2
It's not slow, it's really good :3 Rushing into things is lame and annoying anyways, it's nice to see some background happeneings as well. The winning quote of the chapter is~ "He didn't smell too bad" xD Epic win! Tom and his girlfriend are pretty cute :3 But Bill's prettyfulness shall win! >:3 I hope...>.>' I can't wait to see his suprise! =D This is so awesome~ I can't wait for moreee! :3 Take your time, it's always better when you have to wait for it (even though I am impatient >.>'), and when you take your time writing it comes out better >:3 -heart-
Author's Response: hahahaa glad youre enjoyind. i didnt wanna rush it coz i hate reading rushed stories so i dont wanna write one. ill post more soon (:
Date: 09/24/10 09:45 am Title: Chapter 2
take your time, luv. there's noyhing worse than a story where the characters meet, fall in love, have sex, argue, break up, make up etc all in the first chap. Like the writer is on a double dose of Prozac. I applaud your decision to NOT rush this, i'm seriously looking forward to reading more, seeing how your characters develop and grow with the story, and giving you cookies. *offers cookie
Author's Response: ooh yummy cookies!! -eats- nomnomnom. and yeah i hate when stories are rushed so im forcing myself to take it slow and do this properly (:
Date: 08/29/10 10:52 am Title: Chapter 1
You left me hanging on the edge XD Why is little Bill nervous O.O
Author's Response: ohh youll find out soon enough (:
Date: 08/29/10 02:18 am Title: Chapter 1
Ohhh I likey~ (: I cracked up laughing at the part about the suspect not definately being male, and him talking about the bruising xD Chief Gustav, that is so major DROOL!! x3 Is it bad that I'm going to sit here begging for Bill to be the crazy lunatic? Too bad if it is, because I shall pray silently for it >:3 Well, I'm tracking this so I can see what comes out of it ^^ Good job, I kinda heart the prison/police fics, so I'm setting a high expectation ;D
Please post more soon~
Author's Response: haha thanks. oh great, high expectations. PRESSURE!! hahaa kidding. and you want bill to be the crazy lunatic? well theres an idea, but i already have a plan for the lunatic... *evil grin*