Date: 07/18/11 01:29 am Title: When They Begin To Notice
I love this story! Update soon please :D
Author's Response: Aww thanks so much :D! I'll try my best to get another chapter out soon.
Date: 06/19/11 03:46 pm Title: When Mika Notices Isolation
Soooooooo good! please update soon! :) wanna know who woke her up!
Date: 03/12/11 03:32 am Title: When Mika Notices The Need For Change
I'm guessing there would be a makeover for mika soon?:DDDD amazing story
Author's Response: You'll just have to wait and see :D Thanks for the review and I'm glad you think so about the story :D Makes me happy
Date: 03/11/11 07:09 pm Title: When Mika Notices The Need For Change
Amazing chapter again, very nicely described with all the feelings.
Hope u write soon again! :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'll get to work on it soon!rn
Date: 02/27/11 11:42 am Title: When Mika Notices Comfort
This chapter was amazing. :D I like that they're getting to know Tom and Mika is oblivious to who he's actually related to. This is really good and I can't wait to read the next chapter! :D
Author's Response: Thank you Princess :D I'll work to get the next one out soon.
Date: 02/25/11 12:16 pm Title: When Mika Notices Comfort
cheer up
Author's Response: I have thankfully. Thanks for the review!
Date: 02/24/11 02:29 pm Title: When Mika Notices Comfort
You should feel proud of yourself! I really enjoyd this one again! Good job :) Good that she finally had positive toughts of herself when se looked at herself in the mirror! Aaaand i'll send u hugs, don't be upset! :)
Author's Response: I know I hated having to write her feeling so horrible about her self, it was time for Nathalie to encourage her some way or another :D And thank you! I'm feeling so much better now :)i'll try to get the new chapter out soon; kinda stuck on ideas for it xD
Date: 02/24/11 05:14 am Title: When Mika Notices Comfort
I think Mika's trust issue is pretty bad XD She should be nicer to Bill, he's just trying to be nice -_-
And, Natalie really likes to talk, doesn't she? :D Also the part with Tom is nice - he's such a nice guy here ;) I understand why she feels safe around him.
Oh, and Mika must look beautiful - especially her eyes ^^ I'm not surprised; Natalie and her hands of magic :D
Looking forward to your next update ^^
And, I mean it about she should be nicer to Bill :p
Author's Response: It all will be explained over time :D And I wish I had Nathalie for friend I would love one her make-overs plus I'm loosely basing her off a mixture of people. And i honestly think Tom is going to be one of my more favourable characters.rnrnThe way I picture her eyes they do look awesome :D
Date: 02/12/11 05:10 pm Title: When Bill Notices A Problem
A very good chapter! It was really nice that you did write from Bill's perspective too! I could rly think this story as a TV-series, it is so good described! But yes thank you for this one and hope you write soon again! :)
Author's Response: Awww thank you so much! That really means a lot. I'm already past 3 thousand words on this new chapter, I'm debating about ending it or making another really long chapter. But I will try to have something new out soon! :D
Date: 02/12/11 02:44 pm Title: When Bill Notices A Problem
Of course I don't mind to see things from Bill's POV ^^ It makes me know him a little better, than just seeing him as a popular cute boy from Mika's perspective *gg*
Interesting idea with Bill's and Tom's dads.
Good job, hun ^^
Author's Response: Awww thank you! It makes me real excited to finish writing this next chapter and Bill's other chapter!
Date: 12/29/10 02:46 pm Title: When Bill Notices A Change
Good chapter again :)They are very nice to read!
Author's Response: thanks!
Date: 12/08/10 04:25 pm Title: When Mika Notices Kindness
What a bitch! I'm glad Natalie was there for her >_<
I can't wait to see more of Mika's past revealed, and also what's going to happen between her and Bill *giggles*
Author's Response: Hehe can't share those details however I've got a lot planned and I am excited to share with you all! However I'll share with you that Mika's full past wont come up or a few more chapters ;) But ja you're right Andrea is a bitch!rnThanks for the review!rnSarah XOXO
Date: 12/07/10 10:21 am Title: When Mika Notices Kindness
it was amazing!! please post another chapter befor going on your short hiatus pleasee!! i check everyday just to see if you updated this story, so please post more soon :)
Author's Response: Aw you're to sweet! I'll try to post soon then, I got started on the new chapter already so hopefully I will ;)rnthanks!rnSarah XOXO
Date: 11/13/10 07:21 pm Title: When Mika Notices Change
Yay, you updated! :D
Gosh, Gray's girl scared me XD
But, I like the moment that Mika had with her mum ^^ it's cute.
And, poor girl for only having one friend XD I'm glad there is Nathalie now, I hope they can be good friends ^^
Author's Response: Yup that I did, I'll work on getting the next chapter out sooner! But glad you like it! Thanks for reviewingrnSarah XOXO
Date: 09/28/10 09:53 pm Title: When Mika Notices The Stars
I like Gray :D And Bill on the swing? How cute!!! XD I like the way Mika always underestimated herself when it comes to Bill ^^ and how she couldn't stop thinking about him :D
Author's Response: Yeah I think I'm going to have a lot of fun with Gray's character and I tend to wonder what it would be like to swing with Bill so ja XD Thanks for the review love <3rnSarah XOXO
Date: 09/14/10 09:53 pm Title: When Mika Notices The Stars
As always, no problem. xP This is a good filler chapter, I think, since you meet Gray and so on. I can't wait until the next chapter is out so I can read and beta it! ;D I'll let you know if I get any ideas for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Haha of course I'll need your help XD Good news is, I have to stay after school for an hour since I have to ride the bus so I can write :DrnSarah XOXO
Date: 08/31/10 07:18 pm Title: When They Begin To Notice
Hehe, okay. I bet he smells good anyway ;)
Author's Response: Probably :]
Date: 08/31/10 09:55 am Title: When They Begin To Notice
I have read it :D I like how Mika sounded a bit sarcastic about herself in her POV. And, who wouldn't want to know how Bill smells? *giggles*
Author's Response: Yeah I love writing her sarcasm. I can be very sarcastic so that was fun to write. But I do and I don't wanna know what he smells like xD But I do wanna huggles him X3 Thanks for the reviews X3rnSarah XOXO
Date: 08/31/10 12:23 am Title: When Bill Notices Her Eyes
Why is Bill being so unsociable towards her today? Grr...
Author's Response: You'll find out ;] Thanks for reviewingrnSarah XOXO
Date: 08/30/10 09:40 pm Title: When Bill Notices Her Eyes
this is really good. cant really say much about it except that you need to update this pronto so i can review some more! :) i love writers who write out what the character is feeling and what they are thinking.
Author's Response: Aw thank you! I'm working on the chapter right now, I already have over 1000 words :D. But thank you for your reviews, I hope I continue to write like you like ;].rnSarah XOXO