Date: 08/30/10 07:07 pm Title: When Bill Notices Her Eyes
I like this. keep going.
Author's Response: Thank you :] I'm part way through the new chapter :3rnSarah XOXO
Date: 08/30/10 11:51 am Title: When Bill Notices Her Eyes
Aww no Bill don't ignore her now! D: Ideas you request.. hmm.. Perhaps she should change classes again since now there's a strange distracting tension around Bill even when he ignores her, only to find that he changes his to be around her yet again? He stops her in the new class and asks her why she left and.. dunno from there but maybe Tom can approach her at some point and explain Bill's behavior? Or.. maybe Bill decides to ask for some tutoring. :P
Author's Response: Yeah I know stupid Bill DX But thank you for your ideas :D I like the idea of them switching classes but I think that would just get a little to insane but I love the idea of her tutoring him! I'm defiantly going to use it. But as for Tom he actually is going to be a very minor character in this story, but I'll explain that later on ;] Thanks so much!rnSarah XOXO
Date: 08/30/10 09:05 am Title: When They Begin To Notice
Looking forward to it, Sarah ;) xxx
Author's Response: The new chapter is up and out! Hope I don't disappoint you X3rnSarah XOXO
Date: 08/30/10 08:03 am Title: When Bill Notices Her Eyes
You know I love this chapter. I told you after I beta'd it. xP Seeing you get these chapters out so quickly gives me inspiration to get mine done too. XDD But anywho, good chappie, and can't wait until the next one. >w
Author's Response: Well you shouldn't have to wait to much longer love :D I'm past 1000 words now X3 But thanks!rnSarah XOXO
Date: 08/29/10 07:21 pm Title: When They Begin To Notice
I like the prologue ^^ And it'll be interesting to see the next chapter in third person POV.
Author's Response: Well I hope I don't disappoint! I'm about half way through the new chapter :D So keep your eye peeled ;3 Thanks for reading and reviewing!rnSarah XOXO
Date: 08/29/10 12:26 am Title: When They Begin To Notice
Oh wow, I love this, Sarah! First person always throws me off, so I'm not gonna hold that against you, but I really like how this is going. Mika's really relateable, and it's like a breath of fresh air to have a protagonist who ISN'T Bill or Tom or anyone else from the band. xP Near the end, it sadly made me think of Twilight, but hey, I really like it. I hope you continue this! ^-^ I'll kick your ass if you'll kick mine. XD
Author's Response: Woot woot thank you Rebekah love! But yeah it threw me off to, I'm so use to writing/ reading in third person but I needed to explain about her mom and her thoughts of her self X3 But God you're right it did go all twilight at the end XD I didn't even think about that, I just picked a hard class and seeing how I suck at chem um yeah XD Danke for the review love! And I shall continue this now! Now lets kick ass :DrnSarah XOXO
Date: 08/28/10 10:48 pm Title: When They Begin To Notice
I LIKE this!! I can relate to Mika so much already. Now if only I'd had a Billa when I was in high school, lol. More soon please!
Author's Response: I'm so happy I was able to write a relate-able character! <3 I'm thankful there isn't a Billa in my high school. I'd be screwed XD Thanks for reading and reviewing!rnSarah XOXO
Date: 08/28/10 09:29 pm Title: When They Begin To Notice
Well, I like it.. It's not...... Phoney.
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it but what do you mean by phoney? x3 Thanks for reading and reviewing! <3rnSarah XOXO