Date: 11/12/10 11:04 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Past
Nello poppet is this gonna be updated soon... Remember I left buzznet cos it killed the buzz for me with it's new settings and I am dawning on what is gonna happen. Don't leave me hanging love, been to long!
Date: 09/12/10 03:12 am Title: Chapter 8 - Just change me!
Even tho I have to read this all over again to find out wat happens lol, I still enjoy it can't wait for the later chapters to come on so I can find out wat happens.
Author's Response: Haha awww. I'm sorry I had to quit it on buzznet. I don't like how much the site had changed so I fount it impossible to work and now I have a new programe installed on my computer I can finnaly grammar check it within any mistakes. :)
Date: 09/10/10 06:14 pm Title: Chapter 8 - Just change me!
I really like this story its good I cant wait for more
I wonder what that letter is about? Hmm....
update soon and keep up the great writing :D
Author's Response: Thank you! I was going to update quite quick but I've had to merged 2 chapters into 1 since it was too short. I'll post the next chapter up in a few hours for you all. :)
Date: 09/10/10 04:25 pm Title: Chapter 8 - Just change me!
OMG what's gonna happen next :D can't wait it's really cool :D
Author's Response: Haha you'll just have to wait and see. I'll post the next chapter up today if I am not to busy. :)
Date: 09/04/10 09:57 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Welcome Home Brother
I would love to see a home like that so mysterious, of course curiosity will get the best of him. Can't wait for more, destiny tho I do not like a tricky chick, ha =p
Author's Response: Haha Destiny plays an important part in this story and my aim was for people to hate her. Glad it's working :)
Date: 09/03/10 03:09 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Welcome Home Brother
o.O what's gonna happen can't wait :D it's interesting .
Author's Response: Well, hopefully you will find out tomorrow. I need to grammar check chapter 7 before it goes up. I forgot to do that with this chapter so it's up late. :)
Date: 09/01/10 10:53 am Title: Chapter 1 - Past
I remember readin this on buzznet... But never got to finish it cos buzznet got screwed up for some crappy reason and I left. Thank u so much for being smart and coming on this site, now I can finally kno wat happens. Hope u put ur other work on. Oh god bless THF!!
Date: 09/01/10 10:52 am Title: Chapter 1 - Past
I remember readin this on buzznet... But never got to finish it cos buzznet got screwed up for some crappy reason and I left. Thank u so much for being smart and coming on this site, now I can finally kno wat happens. Hope u put ur other work on. Oh god bless THF!!
Author's Response: Hello! Yes I did put it on buzznet vut I stopped because the site kept changing and it got all confusing. I've only just thought of putting this up on here haha! I will do soon. I am writing another story at the moment since SBM is finished but I won't post the new one until it's compleat. :)
Date: 09/01/10 10:33 am Title: Chapter 3 - Hello again
i dont like how u do Narrator:, Tom:, and Bill: it just annoys me while i read sorry i dont think ill be able to keep reading
Author's Response: Fair enough. In all fairness it's supposed to be like a script. I only did that so people knew who was talking at the time because some stories it is just confusing.
Date: 09/01/10 10:08 am Title: Chapter 5 - A new home?
OMG O.o can't wait :D it's awesome :D
Date: 08/31/10 03:40 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Destiny
OH god it's so cool can't wait :D
Date: 08/30/10 01:42 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Hello again
i don't know whether to feel weirded out my tom or compassionate for him.
and duhh tom, bill's obviously gunna freak out... idiot.
Author's Response: You've read the majority of this already and you're giviing a bit to much out :D haha!
Date: 08/30/10 12:41 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Hello again
OH it so awesome I thought I was gonna cry it's really great can't wait :D
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 08/29/10 03:14 pm Title: Chapter 2 - First encounters
I still think it's creepy that Tom comes back like that, but I love this chapter =]
Author's Response: Hehehehe! It was the only way I could think of it at the time. :)
Date: 08/29/10 01:47 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Past
oh lord i've missed this story :')
this is such a good first chapter.
Author's Response: Haha bless! I can't believe how many mistakes I made in it! Glad I corrected them and I promise I will post this story because it's finished!