Date: 05/13/11 10:58 am Title: No Sympathy For The Dead
that was the best! i dont think bill sshould have gone to jail but oh well..and i HATE the principal...it mad me mad.i wish tom wouldnt have died.but great story though!
Date: 08/28/10 11:54 am Title: No Sympathy For The Dead
This was so realistic and it shows what a horrid race we are as human at times. Frankly I believe they deserved to die, but at the sametime Bill should have let them be. They created a monster out of a already tormented boy who was driven by anger and revenge. It was so painful and it really gets a person thinking. We should never bully anyone. We don't know their background. We could make something snap in them. You did a really great job with this story. This is all so true.
Author's Response: thanx for read/reviewing :)
Date: 08/28/10 10:04 am Title: No Sympathy For The Dead
Wow...That was like really good! O.O So sad, but it was just amazing. I think maybe you should have gotten a beta, there are a few grammatical and punctual errors, but they're easy to see past. That was so painful :/ Poor Bill, it's actually sad that in a way, this story is true. Some people are just terrible creatures, led by greed and power, and this just really speaks out to me in that way, and portays all the bad things humans can be...Seriously amazing, I love it (:
Author's Response: thanx for read/reviewing :)
Date: 08/28/10 03:17 am Title: No Sympathy For The Dead
wow this was excellent ..really well done i love it!!
Author's Response: thanx for read/reviewing :)
Date: 08/28/10 02:42 am Title: No Sympathy For The Dead
wow...sad well detailed and i loved it :)
Author's Response: thanx for read/reviewing :)