Date: 05/01/11 06:27 pm Title: Six
Looking forward to reading about the party. Great chapter! :D
Date: 05/01/11 06:06 pm Title: Five
Yay for kisses XD I hope that Tom's telling the truth and not trying to pull anything on Bill. Great chapter :)
Date: 05/01/11 06:01 pm Title: Thirteen: Final
Is Skyler seriously that upset about a broken clipboard? And what does Mr. Holden mean with "Your grade will reflect."? A broken clipboard can't be that bad, can it?
It's good that you decided to give your readers somewhat of an ending instead of just abandoning the story. It wasn't a very eventful story, but it got Bill and Tom together and that's always a good thing. :)
Author's Response: LOL it said at the end that Skyler might've been just a little over-dramatic about the whole thing, but that's his and Bill's thing, being over-dramatic. And what he means is that Skyler's grade will reflect. It's another thing my ag. teacher would do. You asked him almost anything, "Your grade will reflect." It doesn't really mean all that much. It just psychs you out, and considering the teacher buys the clipboards and stuff with his own money? Yeah, it can be that bad. XD
Date: 05/01/11 05:57 pm Title: Four and a Half
I was pretty confused by this, thinking it may have been a dream or something, but then I read the end notes. This was definetly entertaining, lol.
Date: 05/01/11 05:55 pm Title: Twelve
They don't seem to get enough of kissing each other. :P
Sounds like a fun day.
Date: 05/01/11 05:51 pm Title: Four
Another great chapter! I'm really enjoying this story so far :D
Date: 05/01/11 05:49 pm Title: Eleven
It's always scary when all of a sudden someone's in your room when your music is playing loudly.
-“if you have sex, you will get pregnant and die.”- Bahahha xD Linda is hilarious!
“I’m on top.” xD xD xD It's your mother you're talking to! Oh boy.
Did Skyler just walk into a glass door? Stuff like that happens in real life as well. Neverhappenedtomethough :P
Date: 05/01/11 05:41 pm Title: Three
A Lord of the Rings marathon, what a fantastic idea! I'm going to have to try that one day XD Also, great chapter! I'm excited to see where this goes.
Date: 05/01/11 05:40 pm Title: Ten
-I like kissing him.- I guess that reason is good enough.
Bill's knickers. xD I hope he wears something a little more boyish. :P
Woah, great comeback, Bill!
Date: 05/01/11 05:32 pm Title: Nine
Be afraid of Skyler, Tom. :P
That breakfast must've been awkward, and why is Skyler there all the time? *wondering*
Bill and Tom are SO together. :D
Date: 05/01/11 05:23 pm Title: Eight
I hate how nasty some people can be to others. *shakes head disapprovingly*
Aww, both of them falling asleep against each other.
Date: 05/01/11 05:20 pm Title: Two
Man, I haven't read this in forever! And I see I got quite a bit of catching up to do XD Great chapter!
Date: 05/01/11 05:14 pm Title: Seven
-“How about, I don’t give you details on my night and you don’t give me details on yours?”- it's not saying anything but horrifying non-the-less. :P
I love how Tom stands up for Bill and that he shows everyone around them that he wants to be at that party with him. :)
Date: 05/01/11 05:04 pm Title: Six
I can imagine Tom being a good kisser, those full lips...
I like it when people get yanked into a room like that. :P
Date: 05/01/11 03:34 pm Title: Five
They've been making out. *flails*
Tom's seriously falling for Bill. :)
Date: 05/01/11 03:24 pm Title: Four and a Half
Those chapter end notes are very useful.
I was like: WTF just happened? Maybe one of the characters was dreaming or they were part of a play or something.
I understand that being pushed to update is annoying and won't help you write faster, more like the opposite. If my muse could be pushed, I would've finished all my unfinished works a long time ago.
Date: 05/01/11 02:59 pm Title: Four
What's wrong with the word "dirt"? And are Bill and Skyler tripping or something? :P
Of course Bill and Tom had to pair up during that class, stuff like that always happens when you don't want it to.
-Or maybe he gets some sick thrill from trying to make the “gay kid” hard.- Hahaha xD
Lol, Bill wet Tom. :P
Author's Response: LOl, the "dirt" thing is a personal experience from my agriculture classes in high school. It's not dirt. It's soil. ^^
Date: 05/01/11 02:47 pm Title: Three
I was already wondering where Gustav was, but there he is. :)
Haha, Bill and Skyler are supporting the other team. In your face, Tom. xD
Date: 05/01/11 02:30 pm Title: Two
Tom's starting to be affected by Bill already, a not just a little bit it appears, can't blame him, though.
Is it just me, or is Skyler a bit weird? :P