Date: 03/20/12 11:55 am Title: Chapter 1
this was a good story!
Date: 11/20/10 04:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
..... *-* Um.... I LOVE THIS !! :D ITS TOO CUTE AND THE END JUST MADE ME LAUGH OUTLOUD MY MOM SAID I HAD GONE CRAZY :^) I LOVE HOW YOU WRITE AND CAN YOU WRITE MORE THANKS
Author's Response: Haha thank you!! <3
Date: 10/29/10 03:48 am Title: Chapter 1
*giggle snort* oh oh oh... oh my *clutches sides* ooooh that was just too adorable! that made my night
Author's Response: haha thank you miss gigglesnort!!
Date: 10/28/10 12:28 am Title: Chapter 1
Indeed, it was rushed. But so sweet and quite funny ay the end! :D
Good job, I look forward to getting chapters from you! :)
Author's Response: thank you so very much :) im working on a story now.i just posted the first chapter as soon as they acept it you should read it its calle two boys one heart its kinda like a re-write of this but longer and way more detailed and its gonna have a bunch of chaps!
Date: 10/26/10 05:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really like this, even if it was rushed. Especially when they got caught by Simone at the kitchen table. That made me laugh so hard! ^.^
And the beginning was really sweet, too. I went "awww" throughout the whole first part. ^.^ You did a good job!
Author's Response: haha thank you!
Date: 10/17/10 09:44 am Title: Chapter 1
haha omg the end was funny you should write another!!
Author's Response: i think im gonna re-write this one first(:
Date: 08/30/10 04:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
It is definitely rushed, I think that you could make it a lot longer, add some descriptions (I don't mean only to the sex scenes xD ). Hmm, plot has potential, maybe in the future you could read it and rewrite it.
Author's Response: *dramatic sigh* yeah i know i was in a rush i had to fly to tennesse and i was trying to finish it before i left sorry.