Date: 09/05/10 02:54 am Title: o1 • Destiny and a Heaven-Sent Nightmare
Lol Tom .... The silent one XD
Author's Response: Indeed. ^^ Thanks for reading~
Date: 08/31/10 07:12 am Title: Prologue • First Kisses and Dire Punishment
this sounds reaaaal interesting=)
Author's Response: Glad you think so! ^^ Thanks for reading~~
Date: 08/30/10 01:06 pm Title: Prologue • First Kisses and Dire Punishment
Interesting consept! You can go so many ways with this!
The way you've opened it paints a perfect picture of the other realm. I dont think you could have described it better.
And the old romantic love story will be so beautiful when you develope it, (angst and all, *loveee*) I cannot wait because I know you will make this story amazing!
Cant wait for the next chapter to see how it all plans out!
Author's Response: It is, so very big. xD Heee, I'm so glad you've liked it, and I can't wait to present the next chapter soon! <3333
Date: 08/26/10 08:09 pm Title: Prologue • First Kisses and Dire Punishment
What a creative and involved story! You've really created such a rich world, and wonderful characters. I so can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Aw, wow, thank you so much! Your praise has not gone unappreciated, and I'll be looking forward to presenting the next chapter. ^^
Date: 08/26/10 06:36 pm Title: Prologue • First Kisses and Dire Punishment
ooh i loved this, completely. cant wait to see what's next. so damn imaginative! goodness...aaaaaaaaaw, poor babies! punished for so long for only liking each other and sharing childish kisses :(
Author's Response: Hello again! Oooh, you did? Terribly happy! :D I really took my time crafting this world and its laws so it's wonderful to hear good feedback. I know, poor babies. D: Good times are not far away though! ^^ Thanks for reading and reviewing! <3
Date: 08/26/10 05:46 pm Title: Prologue • First Kisses and Dire Punishment
THIS IS JUST AMAZING!!
that was one hell of a prologue (no pun intended)
I love this idea....incredible & very interesting!
i like the banner
& i'm already hooked on this story!
*tracking*
because i can tell this is going to be an epic story...i honestly cant wait for the next chapter, so please update soon X
Author's Response: Wow! You're 'AMAZING' for reading and reviewing! Thank you~ ^^
You say no pun intended, but -because- you said that, I laughed aloud anyway. Haha! Aww! I worked really hard on that banner. It doesn't look special, but i had to do a lot of cutting and colouring and stupid things like that. It was a lot of fun, though tedious!
So glad you're hooked! 'Epic' may be a strong word, but I appreciate your praise and enthusiasm. Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'll do my best! ♥
Date: 08/26/10 03:28 pm Title: Prologue • First Kisses and Dire Punishment
Wow, holy hell this is massive! And by that I don't mean the length of the prologue (though that's also true), I mean the entire situation and world you've set up.
Just a couple errors. Where it says "The sun was washing over the vast bridge" seems like it's supposed to be a new paragraph.
Also, you say "gon'na" and "wan'na". Unless you're set on that, can I request you spell them as "gonna" and "wanna"? I really noticed that in B, A.
Author's Response: It -is- massive. O.o In both meanings of the word. *dizzy* Well, massive or not, I do hope you enjoyed it? :)
Oh, thanks for pointing that out. I'm proofreading a little less than before (perhaps only 9 times as opposed to 10, LOL), but only because my times is heavily booked now more than before. I appreciate that.
As for my abuse of the apostrophe, it's a very, very old habit. I realise it's not the common spelling, but I usually spell it like that sub-consciously, and rarely remember to take it out. Technically, it is not really incorrect, it's just obsolete in an age that 'wanna', kinda' and even words like 'okay' are mainstream and acceptable. I'll try and remember to spell it like everyone else, but it might be a while. XD Thanks for reading! ^----^
Date: 08/26/10 01:57 pm Title: Prologue • First Kisses and Dire Punishment
Awww poor Bill and Tom :(
I can't wait to read more !!!Its seems like a really good story O_O
*Heart* :D
Author's Response: D: Poor lovelies, but good things await!
I'm glad you think it will be a good story. O.o *hearts back* Thanks for reading! <3
Date: 08/26/10 01:26 pm Title: Prologue • First Kisses and Dire Punishment
Oh wow, this is a fantastic start. So many things happening. I love this 'world' you're creating, the idea of Heaven and Hell and that the Angels and Hellions coexist somewhat pacifically and even spend time together, even if it's every six months. Loved that Tom spends his time waiting for this get-togethers so he can see Bill and the kissing was so sweet!
I'm very intrigued over how it will play out and what will happen now that Tom and Bill have been punished for liking each other. *pets them both* Poor babies.
I'll be looking forward to more. *smooches*
Author's Response: Aww, I'm so glad you like it! ^--^ I thought they would make the cutest little Angel-Devil pair myself. *sniffs* I agree, poor babies.
Thanks for you review darling! *huggles*
Date: 08/26/10 10:23 am Title: Prologue • First Kisses and Dire Punishment
I like it! More!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. =) I'll try and update soon.
Date: 08/26/10 10:20 am Title: Prologue • First Kisses and Dire Punishment
more please?
Author's Response: Um, soon? Thanks for reading. =)
Date: 08/26/10 08:37 am Title: Prologue • First Kisses and Dire Punishment
Well you definitely have me intrigued. I seriously think Bill got the worst punishment out of both of them, spending 100 years doing the opposite of your real purpose would be a horrible exsistance. Looking forward to reading more honey. *hugs*
Author's Response: *sniffle* Yahuh. T^T I know~ It won't be all bad n the end though. ^--^ Oh, thank you for reading and reviewing! You're too kind. ^^
Date: 08/26/10 08:36 am Title: Prologue • First Kisses and Dire Punishment
This is so good! Simply amazing! Oh my god! This is probably going to get featured and I'm adding it to my favorites
Author's Response: *__* Oh my, thank you for your praise! Oh gee, predicting a feature is getting a little ahead of ourselves huh? XD No, no, I'm not worthy of such things yet. I appreciate your enthusiasm nonetheless. Thank you very much!
Date: 08/26/10 07:12 am Title: Prologue • First Kisses and Dire Punishment
Omg, this looks like it's going to be very promising *_* So sad, though...those poor boys.
I'm really looking forward to reading more of this! =] Awesome start so far ;) ♥
Author's Response: Aww, thank you! I'm really looking forward to presenting future chapters to you! Thanks for reading and reviewing. ^--^