Date: 09/26/10 10:53 pm Title: Chapter 8: The Weight And The Beating Of His Heart
I Love this story
Author's Response: Thank you very much - Sharon <3
Date: 09/26/10 03:31 pm Title: Chapter 8: The Weight And The Beating Of His Heart
Tom really fell head first in love >.< He's hearing bells already XD
Author's Response: He can't help it, he is really romantic x3
Date: 09/26/10 02:35 pm Title: Chapter 8: The Weight And The Beating Of His Heart
i like the quick pace its... different, but i cant get enough of your story!
Author's Response: Thank you gabby, more coming soon <3 xx
Date: 09/15/10 10:30 pm Title: Chapter 7: Dance In The Dark
I was browsing and read your story, omg love it. I can't wait to find out if a baby is thrown in to this story!!
Author's Response: Thank you very much :D next chapter is coming soon, we'll see :)
Date: 09/15/10 08:23 pm Title: Chapter 7: Dance In The Dark
well, and m-preg is always a good thing, I think they're feeling too much too soon but maybe it's their age? which is the condiment of this story too, having a baby at 15...wow, that's trouble. wathever, I'll give it a try
Author's Response: Yesss, it is their age. But just because they are young doesn't mean they aren't sure about it ;) we'll see.
Date: 09/15/10 07:34 pm Title: Chapter 7: Dance In The Dark
Simone will be a young grandma? She's gonna freak out if it happens. But I think they should have used protection the second time. First is a mistake, second time is just silly.
Bill in a dress O.O sexy stuff.
Author's Response: They're being young boys, they don't care, its all about the excitement ;)
Date: 09/15/10 02:39 pm Title: Chapter 7: Dance In The Dark
Can I just say this story rocks my socks its awesome lol can't wait to see what happens next(:
Author's Response: thank you so much! I can't wait to keep writing for you all. I took a little break but I'm getting back into it ;) - xx sharon
Date: 09/15/10 09:26 am Title: Chapter 7: Dance In The Dark
Their having a baby! I have a question. Is male pregnancy common in their world? Besides that I can't wait for you to update!
Author's Response: Yes, its common. In this world being gay and gender is kind of not a big deal, as with pregnancy. Its all shared with everyone, I wanted to make it a nicer world. xx
Date: 09/15/10 08:55 am Title: Chapter 7: Dance In The Dark
I'm in love with this chapter
Author's Response: Thank you very much Jazmyne I'm glad :)xx - love, sharon
Date: 09/12/10 04:08 am Title: Chapter 6: Unlock My Heart
omb!! what if bill gets pregnant lol xD
awesome story btw
Author's Response: thank you, I hope you've been reading so you see what happens :]
Date: 09/11/10 04:25 pm Title: Chapter 6: Unlock My Heart
wow, i liked it! i wonder if Bill is already pregnant or if they end up together a few more times and Tom ends up pregnant... it would rock if they were pregnant together at the same time~
Author's Response: Aww thanks for reading and liking it so far :) We'll see what happens! Next chapter is coming very soon :)
Date: 09/09/10 11:15 am Title: Chapter 3: Clearing My Mind
This story is pretty cute and the way that you write is interesting. Keep writing, this story is entertaining
Author's Response: Thanks very much, chapter 7 is coming soon xx
Date: 09/09/10 10:55 am Title: Chapter 6: Unlock My Heart
Dun dun dun....no condom >.< not smart Mr.Tomi! Cannot wait to see what happen's next! I'm going back to check the warning's again...LOL
Author's Response: I think/hope the warnings are up to date lol, I made sure they were!
Date: 09/08/10 01:14 pm Title: Chapter 5: Take My Breath Away
Just read through and I really like this-it's so typical of high school crap we all go/went through. Adore their character's
Author's Response: Thank you so much, please keep reading :) more coming soon xx
Date: 09/08/10 08:00 am Title: Chapter 5: Take My Breath Away
How old is Bill in this? I'm envisioning him as like older than Tom. I liking this so far. Update soon!
Author's Response: They're the same age :) 15, but that's interesting hmmm, Bill is a little more forward than Tom ;)
Date: 08/31/10 10:32 am Title: Chapter 1: I Don't Like Mondays
Oh more? :D
Author's Response: Yes, there is a new chapter called Color Me Gold :)
Date: 08/27/10 07:09 pm Title: Chapter 2: Just Breath, Tom
Wow, can't believe he just realized that *ironic*
I loved this chapter and I can't wait for the next one!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks Afri :3 please keep reading, my story is still continuing! xx
Date: 08/25/10 11:36 am Title: Chapter 1: I Don't Like Mondays
I can't wait for the next chapter, and this is going to be a very interesting story =P
Author's Response: I hope you've been liking the story, sorry I didn't reply to this til way later :]
Date: 08/25/10 10:28 am Title: Chapter 1: I Don't Like Mondays
I like this. It's crazy and all over the place...just like 15 year old boys thinking patterns!
Author's Response: Thank you very much Jax, I'm catching up on replies. I love writing it, I hope you're still reading :)
Date: 08/25/10 09:56 am Title: Chapter 1: I Don't Like Mondays
:O i love this!
ive never read a story where its tom that is contemplating his sexuality usually its bill.
I really enjoyed this chapter :)
MORE please!!!!
Author's Response: Hi Mandie, checking my reviews, thank you soo much :D I thought it would be interesting, keep reading <3