Date: 02/08/08 04:27 am Title: Conclusion
Oh Tink, you're seriously killing me here. This was beautifully written, I loved it.
*sobs*
And I just did my make-up now I have to redo it, but I don't mind, this was so sad and emotional. I'm glad Tom made the decision he made. I hope it makes Bill happy.
I could be here forever writing a review, there are so many things I lvoe about the way you write so it would take forever to write all things down, but to summarize it, I can't say anything I don't like here. It's perfect really. Jeez, I loved it!
Thanks for an awesome story hun ! (L)
Author's Response: :DDD thank you very much, i always love reading your reviews! and you're welcome, i'm also always willing to write a story for someone if they want me to :)
Date: 02/08/08 01:02 am Title: Conclusion
beautiful
Author's Response: thank you :)
Date: 02/07/08 07:49 pm Title: Conclusion
this has just become my new favorite very good job
Author's Response: omg, you've read raspberry season and you said that THIS is your favorite?! i mean, you like it more that RS?! *faints* *wakes up half an hour later* even if you're lying, i'm so happy now! *goes hyperactive*
Date: 02/07/08 07:48 pm Title: Conclusion
i loved it :)
Author's Response: thanks :)
Date: 02/07/08 06:50 pm Title: Conclusion
I loved this. I think you really captured Bill's emotions really well... Although I must admit some of what he was feeling struck a little close to home for me.
I liked how you left the ending open as well... I know how I imagine the story ending ;D
Author's Response: aw, i'm so sorry you don't have a Tomi to help you... Thank you! :)
