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Reviewer: liulibai Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/25 03:26 am Title: Chapter 1

perfect

Reviewer: Zuzu21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/30/14 04:20 pm Title: Chapter 1

Great! But a little bit sad...

Reviewer: zkmmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/29/11 01:41 am Title: Chapter 1

Oh lord... Lol. Naughty naughty twins. Makes me wonder..... ;-)

Author's Response: Thank you for reading =)

Reviewer: HPFoxxwell Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/27/11 02:50 am Title: Chapter 1

holybloodycrimsonFECKINhellthatmademehorny! you should warn people of these things! xD

Author's Response: whoops, sorry? :P haha. Thanks for reading! =)

Reviewer: ChunyGurl Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/22/11 10:16 pm Title: Chapter 1

God that was so fricken hot and at the same time so sad.

Author's Response: Thank you:) glad you liked! And yes, ended it on a slightly sad note but the ending is sort of open hah:)

Reviewer: EmilyExorsist Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/17/10 10:24 am Title: Chapter 1

Oh that was sexy! Poor twins, wish they could be together properly and not just on the line. Wow this was really well written, I loved it! :D

Author's Response: Thank you :) I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: XcannotscreamX Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/17/10 08:17 pm Title: Chapter 1

Aw. = That's really sweet and really sad and sexy at the same time. It'd be nice if there was a sequel where they act on it. But then again, the fact that they don't is part of the hotness.

Author's Response: Thank you=) I don't think there'll be a sequel, though.

Reviewer: Saiisuke Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 02:23 pm Title: Chapter 1

It's hot :) I wish they hung up and did it for real in the end^^ eh, but it's probably better the way you wrote it.

Author's Response: Thank you=)) well, that's the way the story wrote itself, haha, honestly, I could not write a different ending.

Reviewer: xXfaithXx Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/27/10 11:08 pm Title: Chapter 1

Fuck...this is hot...

brilliant!

i know it was meant as a one shot how about writing more chapters to this whenever you have some free time or gain some inspiration? I would love more!

Author's Response: Thank you=D I'm glad you liked this! Hmmm, honestly, I don't know. I have so many other fics/ideas lined up to work on, haha, and the list keeps getting longer! But, never say never ;)

Reviewer: Jamie625 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/27/10 03:40 am Title: Chapter 1

So close, yet so far. *sad*

Author's Response: =/ I know hah, I didn't plan to make it bittersweet, yet somehow it turned out that way! Thanks for reading=)

Reviewer: LieThroughYourTeeth Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/10 06:42 pm Title: Chapter 1

Sorry for any confusion. I meant writing my own story, completely seperate from this.
I would simply write a note saying this story was what started my imagination, therefore others should read it, if they wish.
I wouldn't steal =)

Author's Response: omg sorry if I offended you, I didn't mean to! I was a bit confused, thanks for clearing it up=)) good luck with your story, but honestly, credit/a note isn't necessary at all! I am happy you enjoyed the story so much it inspired you =D thank you.

Reviewer: liveeverysecond Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/25/10 07:07 pm Title: Chapter 1

Amazing fic, loved every word. :>

Author's Response: I'm glad to hear that, thank you so much =))

Reviewer: frkostad Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/25/10 04:18 pm Title: Chapter 1

SO HOT.

Author's Response: Thank you=D

Reviewer: DaveyDel1Cious Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/25/10 03:30 pm Title: Chapter 1

Win. I don't think I've read one where the twins view their relationship this way before. I liked it a lot.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad to hear you liked it =))

Reviewer: AndeinerSeitenureineWeile Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/24/10 10:27 pm Title: Chapter 1

Alright.

So while I was reading this, I was also chatting with a friend on messenger. I kept thinking to myself, "God, I hope she doesn't ask me what I'm doing right now..." because honestly, how do you tell someone that you're reading the wonders of twincest phone sex at the moment? Then I had the horrible thought: what if I accidently sent her my review for this story in an im?!

Needless to say, I closed that chat with her very quickly...

I think that I fell in love with this story at the words, "So close, yet so far. So terribly far." I half expected Tom to burst into Bill's room and fuck the stuffing out of him, you know. Part of me thinks he should of, and the other part requests a sequel to this story where he does. So... please?

This is such a great fic!! *favorites*

Author's Response: Lol, maybe she'd come over to the dark side? We have...PWPs? Hahaha, that's why I never chat with people when I read/write, because I'd def. mess up ;)) Hmm, I don't know about a sequel, I sort of wanted to keep a slight bittersweet undertone to this, but who knows? I might write one, with them together this time:)) I'm glad you enjoyed the story, thank you! =D

Reviewer: LieThroughYourTeeth Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/24/10 03:51 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is so amazing, haha.
Very sexy. It actually really inspired me.
I think I might write a full lengh phone sex story, but if I post it, I'll credit this as my inspiration, okay?
Great job xD

Author's Response: Thank you=)) I'm not sure how you mean? Haha, I def. didn't come up with the phone-sex idea so I don't think I deserve any credit there. But if you mean you want to take the concept/idea of my fic and turn that into a full length story...well, honestly, I'm not sure I'd appreciate that at all, credit or not. Thanks for reading, glad you liked it =D

Reviewer: xLolloboll Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/24/10 03:46 pm Title: Chapter 1

wow,
(thats a wow of I LOVED IT)

Author's Response: Glad to hear that=)) thanks for reading!

Reviewer: dusty273 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/24/10 03:22 pm Title: Chapter 1

Guh, so very hot! And I really, really shouldn't be reading things like this at work, not that I could stop myself. *blushes*



Author's Response: omg, at work? Baaad :P I'm glad you liked the story, thank you for reading!=D

Reviewer: Atlantis Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/24/10 02:55 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow! Loved every word of it! So hot and sexy.
Phone sex is such an awesome compromise. Especially when we get to read it. :D
Great story!

Author's Response: Thank you=D Hah, isn't it? ;)) I'm glad you liked this little fic!

Reviewer: Paceus Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/24/10 02:22 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is so amazing! Thanks for posting here. *favorites* I love dirty talk and this is written so well.

Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, I posted all my fills to my LJ, but figured I could post a few here as well =)) I'm glad you liked the story!

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