Date: 02/17/08 03:23 pm Title: Chapter 6
What happens at the party?
Author's Response: You'll find out ;P
Date: 02/17/08 12:02 pm Title: Chapter 6
eg elska det!! xD
lat meg gjette: ho går inn i feil rom på festen og enda opp med å se bill sitte på senga si mens han prøva å underholde seg sjøl? =P
(du kan bare si det visst eg tar heilt feil altså ;P)
og du spurte kass dialekt eg skreiv på?
det er nok florø dialekten det =)
men eg er egentli nederlandsk, så det hoppa inn litt bokmål her og der =P
håpa du skrive meir snart (A)
Author's Response: Du tar helt feil der, er jeg redd :P Oooh, Dutch! Ye, det er et... fint språk... Neida :P Tusen takk for din... Review? Må finne et fint ord for det på norsk :P
Date: 02/16/08 06:29 pm Title: Chapter 6
ooh.!
please update as soon as possible.!
I'm dying here to find out what is going to happen in that party.!
There is right.? o__0
Author's Response: Thank you! I will :) Winterholiday here and I got nothing planned :P
Date: 02/16/08 02:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
thank you! and i didn't mean as in making Bill the main character, but saying something more about him. Tom and Livia are the main characters, ok, but just a littel, little, tiny bitty more of Bill wouldn't hurt, right?
Author's Response: It could. He is a very bi-character and I intend to keep him that way for now, and MAYBE he will get more time later on. I got like 10 other fics where he is the main character. Tom needs his het-time in the sun too, yeno.
Date: 02/16/08 02:02 pm Title: Chapter 6
ok, so what are you trying to do? wanna kill me with cliches here?!
BILLBILLBILLBILLBILLBILLBILLBILLBILLBILLBILLBILLBILBILLBILLBILLBILLBILLBILLBILLBILLBILLBILLBILLBILLBILLBILLBILLBILLBILLBILLBILLBILLBILLBILLBILLBILLBILLBILLBILLBILLBILLBILL
ah, that should tell you what i want more :)
i'm not gonna rate as i wish this time, don't wanna be blamed for the low rating after.
oh, and one more thing! it's good THAT YOU GOT TOM AND LIVIA SEPARATED A BIT. i'd hate for them to be too close. i prefer when it's Bill who Tom is close to. but, yeah, this is not that kind of a fic. still GOOD THAT YOU MADE THEM NOT THAT CLOSE AS IN THE FIRST FEW CHAPTERS.
just to tell you why i like Bill so much. he is as un-Mario-Sue-like as he can be. i like that.
yeah, and one more thing: i won't stop talking to you if you call me BTB in the SB, but as i've done before, i ask you PLEASE not to. it insults me and i don't like it. it also brings back the memories i don't want to talk about. so, PLEASE don't call me that. i won't be mad if you do, but PLEASE don't.
Author's Response: I can already tell you now that it won't be like you want. And OK, Tinkalinka. No more BTB :)
Date: 02/16/08 12:04 pm Title: Chapter 6
good goooooooood
Author's Response: Thanks thaaaaaanks :)
Date: 02/16/08 11:54 am Title: Chapter 6
oooooh, parties = sex! xD (and/or secrets revealed, bring it on sister!)
Author's Response: Hehe, a party is soooo clichè, so I just had to have one ;D
Date: 02/16/08 10:44 am Title: Chapter 6
oohhh Party!! :O
Im excited to see whats gonna happen at this Party :D:DD
eekk
another great chapter :)
Author's Response: Thank you! :D :D Lobaloba!
Date: 02/16/08 10:41 am Title: Chapter 6
Aww!!
you can totaly tell they nwant eachother!!
please more!
Author's Response: I wish one could tell things that easily in real life too. Thanks! :P
Date: 02/15/08 04:31 am Title: Chapter 5
omg! =0
so jævla bra altså! xP
du bør faen meg skrive meir snart for eg kan bare se for meg kossen bill kjem til å reagere på å bli banka opp igjen! =0
eg syns ikkje det va forvirrandes eg! =D
men eg e ganske rar då... så man veit jo aldri om eg kanskje har forstått nokke feil... ^o)
likte livia's måte å ta igjen på tom på ;P
Author's Response: Hehe, joda :P Men vi alle er vel rare på vår egen rare måte. Hvilken dialekt skriver du på, forresten? Tusen takk!
Date: 02/14/08 03:04 pm Title: Chapter 5
No I, still, think it´s great!:D
Author's Response: Thank you ;D
Date: 02/14/08 01:24 pm Title: Chapter 5
i am not forbidding you to write anything, i'm just telling you what i make of it. and i told you, delete any review you find too nasty or that disturbs you. there is something i like in the story, though. BILL
Author's Response: Yaya. I'm not going to delete reviews. You are entitled to your oppinion, strange as it may be..
Date: 02/14/08 01:58 am Title: Chapter 1
argh, damn, it's my rating that left the story with 4.5 stars............
Author's Response: Hehe ;P Tisk, tisk.
Date: 02/14/08 01:57 am Title: Chapter 1
*i didn't point out she was MS in that review. but i am going to point that out in each and every review i leave, always in the same way.
and as for the last part of the previous review:
when one of my favorite authors writes het, that is unforgivable.
and you're probably right, you're gonna have a hard time making me like het. i normally never do. the only character i like here is Bill. i wish there was more of him.
you might wanna get used to me being here and telling you not-so-nice things... i won't be mad if you delete any of the reviews, i'm aware that they tend to be a bit mean. sorry for that, it's just the fact that i don't read this kind of stories. as soon as i find something i like (even if it's just a bit), i swear i'll point that out. IN CAPITAL LETTERS
Author's Response: Why? Why do you have to do that? Wow, than you for that, but let me write what I wish. Some of us gotta drea, of the boys being straight, right? Haha, I'll be hoping for the capitals, then. And since I see none here, then it means you liked nothing? :O GAH! But I got some new plots going on in my head, so a new twincest will come your way some time ;P
Date: 02/13/08 09:41 pm Title: Chapter 5
Ok? So Bill is happy for Tom, Yet he try's to get close to Livia?
So both Bill and Tom like livia?
Or Bill just wants to check to see if shes right for tom?
Um just continue!
Author's Response: DrAmA! It will all be explained somehow.... ;P
Date: 02/13/08 04:19 pm Title: Chapter 5
oooh Bill's a bitch :P
lol I like the way you IMPLY that Bill's doing this on purpose :) is heee?
oh wow. im sooo in love with this story!
Author's Response: Hehe, I'm not answering that :P Thank you!
Date: 02/13/08 04:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
OMG, i left the bitchiest review in history of reviewing! :O
do excuse that, i was a bit off at that moment. though i stay behind what i said. now, you make me change my mind on this fic!
Author's Response: Speak your mind, btb. This is a free world. Or at least it should be. And how to make you change your mind about this fic is a mystery, seeing as you originally wouldn't read het. They are so different generes to write. I feel like I have to reset my mind completely, and after nine other twincests, then het can be difficult. And once again; stop pointing out how she is so MS. She is just like I want her to be. Loba, though ;P
Date: 02/13/08 03:58 pm Title: Chapter 5
D: oh noes.
maor soon please
Author's Response: Soon ^^ <3
Date: 02/13/08 03:56 pm Title: Chapter 5
Ou I understood the Norwegian part *feels proud* I'll write something for you in Swedish,
Denna historien är verkligen mycket bra och jag älskar den! Perefkt !
Hehe, just felt like writing something Swedish lol., Hope you understood^^
Well I love how you described Tom's feelings after he got home from Livia's and Bill is really lurking around..I wonder what he's up too..I feel really thorn here, I don't know who I think Tom should be with: Bill or Livia Lol and that's wierd because I never liked an OFC before *_* I like this very much (:
Author's Response: I did! Thank you! Loba, loba.
Date: 02/13/08 03:52 pm Title: Chapter 5
if your head isn't working properly then neither is mine, for i understood everything.
now, as for the chapter:
coughcoughMarycoughSuecoughcough
you started it as a cliche het fic with a few juicy details about Bill and Tom and now you're getting further and further away from the good twincest part and leaning more into the boring het part of the story.
sorry i gotta tell you this, but this most certainly isn't one of my favorites. especially because i know you can do so much better.
also, i apologize for leaving a low rating, but that's what i make of it.
and that was my so far the bitchiest review, but you gotta try harder to make me like a story. ESPECIALLY YOU! if it were someone else, i could forgive, but not you.
Author's Response: Stop saying that! I know she is MS, and she is supposed to. And the twincest is just because I can't stay away from it. Het is hard to write and I know myself that this isn't my best work, but thanks for pointing that out. So encouraging! Yeah, the low rating is a kick in the nuts, but whatever. And what do you mean by that last part? If I were someone else, you could forgive me?