Date: 03/06/08 07:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
Whoa, this story is AWESOME!
I really hope Bill and Tom don't get separated, though. I think there should be more emphasis on their relationship, y'know? If a stranger to TH was reading this, they'd want to know wtf was up with them.
But, yes, a great story!!
Author's Response: Heh, OK. Thanks :)
Date: 03/06/08 11:38 am Title: Chapter 1
er du norsk? da skriver du i alle fall veldig bra engelsk :D fortsett :DD can't wait ;P
Author's Response: Haha! Takk! Jeg bodde i USA et år, så kan ha noe med det å gjøre ;) Thanks! Again :P
Date: 03/05/08 10:33 am Title: Chapter 7
more... LOVE IT ^^
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 03/02/08 09:27 am Title: Chapter 7
Love the story! looking forward to the next chapter ;D
hope Bill and Tom don't drift away from each other though, want more twincest x))
Author's Response: Hehe, thanks ;)
Date: 02/28/08 02:45 pm Title: Chapter 7
OMG I love Livia, she's really cool :D Great story, keep it up! update soon please? ^^
Author's Response: Ah, thank you! :D I will do my best on the updating thingy ^^
Date: 02/27/08 03:00 pm Title: Chapter 7
i like this story i didnt no it had ben updated so yey i like it hah the iddnt fink she was a teahcer any more fank fuk i would h8 tht the christian camp bit gets me hugz kisses xx
Author's Response: I've never been to a christian camp, just so that's said :P Thank you :)
Date: 02/24/08 03:16 pm Title: Chapter 7
omg, bill is so left out! I'm not talking about the sex, perfer to keep from the 3sums, i'm talking about the whole seen, what was he doing at his bfs home? Hm...
Author's Response: Oh, in this story, Bill is more like a bi-character, so he doesn't get his "time in the sun" as much. But he will get more alater on. And I am no fan of threesomes myself :P
Date: 02/24/08 02:29 pm Title: Chapter 2
whoa, was NOT expecting that...
Author's Response: Happy I'm not predictable, then <3 :)
Date: 02/24/08 12:41 pm Title: Chapter 7
I love this story,
good job^^!
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 02/23/08 02:22 pm Title: Chapter 7
aww =)
eg elska det =)
du e skikkeli flink til ditta du! =0
gleda meg seriøst til neste updet =P
og i responsen din til min forrige review sa du vi måtte finne et norsk ord for review... så eg skjekka på tritrans og ditta va det som kom opp: anmelde, anmeldelse, gjennomgå, kritikk, repetisjon, revy, tilbakeblikk =P
c anythink u like? =P
ikkje egentli sant? =S eg gjor i allefall ikkje =0
Author's Response: Hm, tilbakemelding tar jeg :P Ikke på lista, men jaja. Tusen takk! Åh, blir litt sånn giddy jeg nå ;P
Date: 02/23/08 12:57 pm Title: Chapter 3
whoho awesome story :D
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 02/21/08 06:38 pm Title: Chapter 7
ooo really good!
Im so glad she ended up with Tom! yey for tominess!
P.s. it almost makes me sad when i see you have updated because then i know i will have to wait again for the next one...lol
Author's Response: Haha! That's so sweet! :P Thanks <3
Date: 02/20/08 12:26 pm Title: Chapter 7
Aww, well i certainly liked the scene lol! It was both romantic and sexy, so all good! I'm glad that Livia changed herself up a bit and was more dominant, lol, that was a shock! Anyways, great work again, thanks for the chapter! Already can't wait for the next one lol!
Author's Response: Thank you! Ah, believe me, writing het was weird, so I'm really glad you liked it :)
Date: 02/19/08 11:46 pm Title: Chapter 7
twincest will haunt you for the rest of your life xD:
around her and pulled *him* close to his chest.
the sex scene (ew het sex) was well done. though nothing ever tops twincest sex.
if you were wondering about my opinion (i'm sure you weren't but whatever) i still don't like. no, wait, i like it even less. i only liked THE BEGINNING OF THIS CHAPTER
Author's Response: Ye, I will edit today. Yesterday was just too weird. Thanks for reading a fic you don't like on purpose! <3 I love low ratings.
Date: 02/19/08 05:34 pm Title: Chapter 7
Well, I must say, for a first het scene you did an absolutely fabulous Job! I love how it all happened, how she was suddenly this amazing confident and sexy character. You should do Het more often, it works for you! :D
And thank You for the dedication :)
loveyou!
xxx
Author's Response: Thank you for the encouragement! And for your review. Loba! ;D
Date: 02/19/08 05:32 pm Title: Chapter 7
*eyebrow wiggle*
Author's Response: Haha! That's sweet ;P
Date: 02/19/08 05:00 pm Title: Chapter 6
the story is actually great!
not a clishe at all!
love it...pliz continue :]
Author's Response: A new chapter just came! Thank you ;D
Date: 02/19/08 03:55 pm Title: Chapter 6
awww, this is such a good story!
I really hope something happens with Tom and Livia.
Ooo, and who is Bill's boyfriend???
Author's Response: I imagined it would be my cousin's best friend's brother.. No, my humor is terrible... Thank you! ;D
Date: 02/19/08 12:53 pm Title: Chapter 6
Hey, just started reading this story, and I love it! It's one of my favourites, you are a really talented writer, I feel like I am in every scene with the characters! Please update soon, i can't wait for the party scene!
Author's Response: Oh, you just made my day! And I was in lack of inspiration to get on with the chapter, but now I am all giddy and ready! Thank you! :D
Date: 02/17/08 05:22 pm Title: Chapter 6
omg that is a really good story! you are very good at writing! please say you are continuing it! im dying to read more of it! xx
Author's Response: It is going to be continued, yes :) Thank you!