Date: 02/08/08 05:55 pm Title: Chapter 2
wow..nice..continue please!
Author's Response: Thanks ^^
Date: 02/08/08 02:05 pm Title: Chapter 2
OMG =0
this was SO gd XP
and i liked the part where they have norwegian =P
u should write more of those lessons =D
og inkluder litt norsk sann at det blir morsommare å lese =P eg elska det når de snakka eller læra eit språk eg snakka anna enn engelsk (A)
du er en skikkeli god forfatter og og håpa at du oppdatera snart!=D
dinna ficen va urtuli! =0 (og det kjem fra en som vanlivis ikkje e så gla i hverken het eller cest! =0)
hope u don't mind long reviews (A)
Author's Response: I love long reviews! Og jeg tror jeg skal prøve å inkludere litt at Tom snakker norsk. Det hadde vært så morsomt! Tusen takk! Det er så snilt at du sier det der og du aner ikke hvor mye det betyr! :O Thank you! :D
Date: 02/08/08 01:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
OMG! =0
i have those shoes =P
haven't read the fic yet, but just had to write this when i saw them (A)
anw... i'm gonna read it now =D
i'll tell u what i thought when i'm done ;)
Author's Response: Oh, I want those shoes so bad!! I get so weird ankels in them, so I can't wear them... *sob*
Date: 02/08/08 01:02 pm Title: Chapter 2
:D update soon please
Author's Response: I will, loba :)
Date: 02/08/08 12:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
haha i love this so far XD t-bag rofl
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 02/08/08 12:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
sorry, i'm not reading. maybe one day, but not now. i'm just trying to help.
make her perfection that changes. make her perfect now, but when the twins get to know her better, make her different from what you see when you first look at her
Author's Response: Oh, that is where I'm going! So this gotta be deleted :P Thank you!
Date: 02/08/08 12:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
perfect with flaws. make her a hypocrite
Author's Response: I have to have her like a perfect ball. Maybe she has one flaw that Tom can elaborate... I dunno.. You'll see where I'm going later on :) Maybe.
Date: 02/08/08 12:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
make her un-perfect. she doesn't have to care about everyone, doesn't have to be the most beautiful, the smartest, the one that is a friend to everyone, the one everybody likes, she can be left without words, snap at people, be mean, be something other girls are not. in one word, she has to be different. from everyone, even herself. she has to hate and not only love and be a bit bad instead of being nice all the time.
Author's Response: Oh, but it is relevant to the plot that she is ms. Perfection. And this was what I was going to ask. How to make her like Ms. Perfection, but still no Mary Sue.
Date: 02/08/08 10:47 am Title: Chapter 2
OOOHHH, I like it. It's a great plot, and I love you're language!
Can't wait for the next chapter! :)
Author's Response: After all thos kicks, you come with a smile! Thank you so much! ;D
Date: 02/08/08 10:16 am Title: Chapter 2
she is mary sue :( but bill/tom is interesting
Author's Response: She is actually Martine from my History class. She is perfect in every way and drives me crazy. Tell me about Mary Sue! What can I do to not make a cliche-girl?
Date: 02/08/08 10:14 am Title: Chapter 2
O__O
omg omg.!
this is your best story ever I think.!
Great.! I'm trully amazed
It's like wow.!
and omg..just...wow.
and I just realised I've said that over 7 times so..just wow.
*trully speechless*
Author's Response: Haha! Thank you! That means I've become better! I hope... And that is what I am looking for. Thanks again :D
Date: 02/08/08 09:55 am Title: Chapter 2
wow I actually like this despite there's a OFC in it ! :D Great great !
Author's Response: Hehe, I actually like writing this, despite the OFC xD Thanks!
Date: 02/08/08 09:40 am Title: Chapter 2
WHOAHHH! SEXY SEXY!
XXXX MORE BITTE!
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you! ;D
Date: 02/08/08 09:29 am Title: Chapter 2
OMG! Bill and Tom are! Yaaaaaay! *clap*
Author's Response: I can't get away from Twincest. It's almost who I am :P
Date: 02/08/08 09:15 am Title: Chapter 1
Yays, her name is VALO! Like VILLE VALO! *claps hands* I like highschool fics ^^
Author's Response: I loba that name! Valo, that is ;D Thanks!
Date: 02/08/08 06:37 am Title: Chapter 1
loba, loba... :)
Author's Response: Liebe loba.
Date: 02/07/08 05:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
nice nice...continue!
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 02/07/08 04:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
omg.!
this is juuust great.! loba* hihihi
how did you come with loba anyway.?
it's one of the coolest words ever.!
Author's Response: Yaay! Loba is spreading! All credit to my wifie; DieLetzteHoffnung. It's her word, and I just started using it. Loba, loba! Thank you! ;D
Date: 02/07/08 02:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
Sounds interesting..
Update coming soon?
Author's Response: As soon as I can type without passing out ;) Thanks! :D
Date: 02/07/08 02:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
Me like :D
Author's Response: Me happy! ;D