Date: 10/18/10 11:55 pm Title: Morgan
Poor Bill--so many mixed emotion's. No wonder Jinx didn't want Bill to come to this club, he feel's about performing this act the way Bill feel's about watching it~can't wait to see how this is resolved! Thank you so much for the update-can't get enough of this story!
Author's Response: Yeah... like I've said before, I feel horrifically guilty for being so cruel to fiction characters. And you'll see how it's resolved in the next chapter. I'm glad you still can't get enough even after this was dead for so long.
Date: 10/18/10 03:52 pm Title: Morgan
Ohhh, I'm so sorry for Jinx he has a really fucked life, and I'm sorry for Bill for seeing his boyfriend doing all those things...I wish Bill could help him, I really do..
Great story, waiting for a new update!:)
Author's Response: Yeah... poor Jinx, and poor Bill. The next chapter, I'll aim to get up quickly, since I disappeared off the face of the earth for a few weeks. And who knows, maybe there'll be some happiness in it?
Date: 10/18/10 08:58 am Title: Morgan
more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more...you get the point
Author's Response: Okay okay okay okay okay... just give me a bit more time. ;)
Date: 09/18/10 01:28 am Title: Morning After
Yay for fluff~got to have it! Bills fallen and fallen hard! Looking forward to the next chapter and to see if Bill goes to the sleazier club to watch after Jinx...hope everything goes ok. Will be anxiously waiting for the next chapter
Author's Response: *nods knowingly* Even the darkest of romance stories should have some fluff. And yes, Bill really has fallen for Jinx. *holds up an 'aww' cue-card* And you shall find out next chapter what happens at the club, and whether Bill goes there or not.
Date: 09/18/10 12:32 am Title: Morning After
Lmfao! Wow Tom is crazy for calling Bill out like that lol!! Omg I love it. So Jinx works two clubs? Is the second one worst then the first? Wow I can't wait to see how you make it worst. Bill is too damn cute for wanting to play dress up with Jinx lol well hun like always hope you can up date soon = ]
Author's Response: Yeah. I figured, if Tom was going to say Bill was a virgin on TV, why not say it to his boyfriend? XD And yes, Jinx works more than one place, and the second club has a very different act. And I had to add in the dressup part- it was too good an oppurtunity to miss. :D
Date: 09/11/10 03:46 am Title: Almost
I'm so happy you could up date! I really love to see an up date from you. It always makes my day!! Love the fact that they did not have sex yet! Its not easy for jinx and I get it. Super happy that bill took him home and was able to keep him safe if just for one night. Anyways love it and can't wait for the next up date!
Author's Response: Aw, I'm glad I can make your day brighter by updating. And I'm also glad you liked that part- I wasn't going to stop them at first, but it seems my imagination had other ideas, and that's just the way it flowed. I'll try and update faster, but I'm back at school now, so I don't have quite as much time to write.
Date: 09/11/10 01:04 am Title: Almost
Wow-their make-out session's are hot-can't wait for the sexy time! I'm really enjoying how Bill is the one telling someone else(other than Tom) they are beautiful. It's sad though that Jinx can only relate pain and anguish with sex. Thank God Bill will show him different! These two make a great couple-so so ready for another chapter.
Author's Response: I am glad you think so. I'm kinda proud of that scene, considering how late it was when I wrote it. And Bill's telling Jinx that he's beautiful because that's the way he sees things. It is sad, yes, but I agree they make a good couple.
Date: 09/02/10 04:36 pm Title: Date
The mystery of Jinx deepen's-what else will Bill discover along the way? Really hope that thing's work out with them-they would make an awesome couple!
Thank's for the update
Author's Response: *blinks* That first sentence was really quite, um... what's the word? Poetic, that's it. Or is is prophetic? Something like that, anyway. In any case, thanks for the review!
Date: 09/02/10 03:58 pm Title: Date
OMG-so happy this is updated-I just had to leave this--*flailing like a fangirl*!! Now I will go back to read and then leave a review!
Author's Response: Whoa, you reviewed without even reading? That's the type of fangirl obsessiveness I like! You did forget to say 'BAM- first comment' though. XD
Date: 08/29/10 01:11 am Title: Scarred
Aww...this chapter was sad!!! God...I just wish Raven would rot in a jail cell. *glares at Raven* That would make my fucking day.
So sorry my comments are the usual long ones...it's getting late her and I'm super tired at the moment..But I wanna keep reading...:/
Author's Response: It's fine- you write such long comments, the occasional short one isn't too bad. And Raven really does deserve that. He's pretty horrible. Probably the most horrible character I've ever created.
Date: 08/29/10 12:28 am Title: Mistake
First off, I need to apologize for not reading this earlier!!
Second off, I must tell you about my mini panic attack. So, today [actually..this happened like three minutes ago] I went to my Tracked Stories, to search for YOUR story. And guess what, I didn't find it. So, I started hyperventilating and began to have a mini panic attack, until I searched 'Jinxed'. Luckily, I found it. Otherwise I'd probably be on the floor hyperventilating and crying my eyes out.
Yes, that really did happen.
Anyway, onto the important part:
ZOMG!! I REMEMBER THIS CHAPTER AND HOW UBER PISSED OFF I WAS AT RAVEN!!! That little shit...how dare he do that too my darling Jinxie...Stupid. :[
WHO IS THE GUY!? IS IT WHO I THINK IT IS!? Maybe...but now I must read on!!!
Author's Response: Oh, wow. Um... you had a panic attack over my story? Well... I'm not sure whether I should be pleased you love it so much, or a little freaked out. Hmm; let's say I'm a bit of both. That's a happy medium, right? And now I want to know who you think it is.
Date: 08/23/10 08:59 am Title: Closer
is it just me or does the same chapters keep coming?
Author's Response: No, I don't think it's you. Like I said, this is a reupload, so all the original chapters have to be put back up before new ones can come.
Date: 08/23/10 12:09 am Title: Closer
Yes, he's had a crappy life, but at least Bill is in the picture now! BTW-are we going to find out who covered Jinx with the blanket?!
Author's Response: Yeah! Bill makes everything better! XD Lol. And maybe we'll find out. I haven't decided yet.
Date: 08/23/10 12:02 am Title: Aftermath
I know now it's not Bill...but OMG, don't tell me it's Seth-what a shock that would be. Can't wait to find out.
Author's Response: Yeah, it's certainly not Bill. But everyone else is open. I'm not sure when, or if, people wil find out though.
Date: 08/22/10 11:58 pm Title: A Revelation
I'm really looking forward to what Bill will do. God I hope someone help's Jinx and give's Raven what he deserve's!
Author's Response: I'm glad you're looking forward to it! And yes, someone needs to help Jinx, and punish Raven.
Date: 08/22/10 11:55 pm Title: Candyland
Don't you dare give up writing on boy/boy makeout's--I loved it...pretty sure it would've been damn hot had it not been interupted. Poor Bill, I know what he is about to witness >.< :( How awful for Jinx, someone has to do something about the abuse. Thank's for the update-i'm lovin' it!!!
Author's Response: Woot! I'm glad you liked it, and that you thought it was hot. I never have much confidence in my makeout scenes. And, yes, anyone who read the old Jinxed knows what Bill is going to see. Jinx really should do something, yeah.
Date: 08/22/10 01:06 pm Title: The Bridge
Yep-Jinx has had a very crappy life, but I think thing's are maybe looking up, at least I hope they are. I'm hoping there is revenge or punishment waiting for Raven somewhere farther along!!!
Author's Response: Yeah, they are looking up now that Bill is here, I guess. And I'm kinda hoping that too, even though I'm writing this- we'll just have to see where it goes, won't we?
Date: 08/22/10 12:55 pm Title: Scarred
Hold on Jinx...better days are coming!!!
Really looking forward to the next chapter-thans for posting new chapters so quickly
Author's Response: Yes, Jinx, they are. Soon, too. And I'm posting the next chapter as soon as the previous one is validated, which is why they're appearing so quickly.