Date: 08/27/10 02:56 pm Title: Understand the pain.
Ugh... they survived, it is important, but that idea scares me. This can happen every day, unfortunately, everyone is vulnerable. Beginning of the story for me was horrible, I saw it live in front of me. But through it all, it was well written, good job. :-) J. :o)
Author's Response:
I have no clue on whether or not to say thanks to this review. Did you mean that it was a vivid beginnig. I think I will go with a thank you. I remember seeing a video against drunk drving that had me cringing so I had to write about it.
Date: 08/22/10 01:37 am Title: Understand the pain.
Interesting. Interesting how you put this under general too, when clearly the beginning suggested a slash.
Otherwise, it was quite good. :) Continue it!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review, although it is complete already. I can't think of any way continuing it. Also, thanks for the notice on Bill's and Gustav's relationship. I didn't even think about it. I think I changed it now.