Date: 02/02/11 06:47 pm Title: Soon
i love thiiiis...you need to update it though! i miss it :(
Date: 11/20/10 02:30 pm Title: Soon
Awesome ass story, can't wait for the next chapter. :D
Date: 11/02/10 02:03 am Title: Soon
I hadn't even thought of them being connected, though that seems silly now.
I love that Georg is in love with Gustav, the G's are my faves!
LOVED this!
XD
Date: 10/31/10 06:39 pm Title: Soon
Ohh *heart breaks* That's so sad, the whole thing about Georg. And Bill really only turning humans just before they take their own life? I like that idea. :) It's like he's saving them, in a way.
And Bill and Tom and Bill and Tom and--*happy sigh* You know how much I enjoy their relationship here, or at least I hope you do. It's a lovely thing they've got going. ;)
"And the sound of your heartbeat. It’s fascinating.” I love that. :3 Just the image of Bill treating Tom with such... such fascination and awe and ineffable interest, I love it.
And Tom. ;) "Cocky bastard" probably is the best way to describe him now, hmm? He's getting comfortable, and I like that. A lot. But he's sweet, too, and that makes me want to hug him to pieces. :3
Thanks for the surprise update on Halloween!! Love you, sis!
Date: 10/12/10 01:45 pm Title: Know You
Oh man, I don't think Bushido or Andreas would be very happy if Bill showed up with Tom.
Also, what Bill said about something changing Tom and changing the way he smells is very intriguing! I wonder what it was!
Bet Tom had a random girl in his apartment, naughty boy!
Who was Georg in love with? Gusti maybe:
LOVED this, can't wait for more!
XD
Date: 10/12/10 09:29 am Title: Know You
you're so mean!! that was a mean... damn you gril.
I'm all excited to know how Tom is feeling and that He's thinking. Bill looks so in love with his human Tomi
Date: 10/12/10 12:22 am Title: Know You
i know you only posted this chapter today but.... could you update again please???? haha
Date: 10/11/10 09:11 pm Title: Feeding
Noo!! lol Its fine :D
Author's Response: *sigh* Good! :D
Date: 10/11/10 08:58 pm Title: Know You
OH MY FUCKING GOD, I LOVE YOU. :3 But you know that. *flails* This chapter was so good! I loved it. And ohh, Tom's want to touch Bill... the desire was killing me. So much sexual tension, omg. And Bill's attraction to Tom and his warmth... ohhh, the sensations. I'm all smiles and giggles and bouncy now! I know you've got other stuff filling up your plate, but I can't wait until you get around to the next chapter of this. Seems like my yelling in reply to that teasing preview of this chapter you sent me was actually, erm, closer to right than wrong? YAY.
Okay, you made my night. I totally wasn't expecting an update of THIS today and now, eeee, so happy. :DD Now I'll sit and wait quietly for the next chapter. :D Ahh, this is so exciting!
Author's Response: I LOVE YOU TOO. ;) I'm so glad you liked it. :3 I was actually nervous that it wouldn't be quite right. D: You were right. ;) Just, I took it for a little twist. I had to!rnrnI honestly didn't feel like waiting any longer. I felt like I had waited long enough anyways. ;)
Date: 10/11/10 08:37 pm Title: Know You
Every time Bill says children I get the image of Bill and loads of little kids running around him XD
Author's Response: Oh nooo. D: Should I have use a different word? D:
Date: 10/11/10 08:32 pm Title: Know You
Progress is such a wonderful thing XD
Author's Response: If this were Facebook, I'd like this. xD ♥
Date: 09/19/10 06:09 pm Title: Almost, But Not Quite
I couldn't read this until now, and I've been waiting to read this since wed.
This chapter is probably the best one you've written so far in this story. I LOVE IT. Tom and Bill's encounter was exactly how I wanted it to be. I didn't want them to hit it off right at the get-go, like how all the other fics usually describe Tom and Bill's first meet. That is what excited me the most.
Also Bill and Felix's relationship is quite interesting. I find that Bill could persuade Felix to do his bidding, which ultimately could be a good thing or a bad one.
I want to see Bill getting mad and taking out his anger on someone infront of Tom. I don't know why, but it'd be really hot to show human emotions on Bill infront of Tom. I guess what I'm saying is that I want Bill to show himself to Tom and become somewhat soft.
I want Tom to learn Bill's ways. Let his see into Bill's life. How he lives, how he does things (feeds, takes care of his "children", his relationship with them) Maybe eventually a Tom/Bill/*one of Bill's children" scene? lol
Alright, I'll stop writing, but I can't seem to...I dont' know why :P
PS: It's like 3 am while I'm writing this, and I'm so exhausted, so I apologize for any mistakes and the stupidity of my words xD oh and I didn;t read this over. ahaha. Probably should...meh too tired. night! xDDD
good luck writing! <3
Author's Response: Tom/Bill/Child? Hmmmmmm. Maybe. ;)
Date: 09/16/10 03:21 pm Title: Almost, But Not Quite
Tom's grand entrance, hell yeah! Except. Well. It wasn't too grand in Bill's perspective. :( Which is a pity, but I don't expect you to let a Bill/Tom pairing go in a story like this. Plus, Tom smells too good for Bill to stay away from for too long, yes? Anywayyyy, I kinda really love this little story. ^_^ It's not always super detailed, but that works. And the moments that are detailed are beautiful and tender, like describing Felix' knuckles across Bill's skin. And huzzah for some Bushido here, even if it didn't get very far. Again. Great chapter! :D
Author's Response: Bill couldn't stay away if Tom has silver blades sticking out of his fingers. xD
Date: 09/15/10 10:10 pm Title: Almost, But Not Quite
I like this. The writing is almost too literal, almost too amateur, but somehow it comes across as just really blunt instead. And that's nice with a vampire fic you know? Vampire stories are always being built up and made super mystical and romantic and stuff, but this one isn't. I like that.
Here are some things I noticed and liked: 1. Bill's relationships with his "children." He's not super in-love committed to them, but he takes care of them. And they're all different and he has different relationships with each. 2. Bill's creation story. It wasn't super romanticized, and was rather practical in an Anne Rice sort of way with the shaving of Bill's sideburns and all. 3. Bill's not defined as strictly gay or straight, feminine or masculine, and he feeds from both sexes. 4. Bill killed the little boy Nikolaus.
Anyway, I love the way you're telling this story. It's structured very nicely, well written, and not cliched at all. Even I use cliches in my writing, and I'm quite impressed that you've managed to avoid them all without seeming like a pretentious usurper (Stephanie Meyers anyone?). Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: This is by far the best review that I could have gotten. This makes me feel like I've actually done something right with this story and I like that feeling. Thank you so much, I really appreciate it. ♥
Date: 09/15/10 01:01 pm Title: Almost, But Not Quite
At last they actually meet! And dang, that didn't turn out too well :O But I have a feeling they'll be seeing each other again soon ;)
Author's Response: Yes, at last. ;) Oooh, you smarty pants. ;)
Date: 09/15/10 07:51 am Title: Almost, But Not Quite
Wow Bill is really frustrated >.> But he has such epic control over his hunger. Tom is lucky that Bill is as caring as he is. I hope we get into Tom's mind soon.
Author's Response: He's SO frustrated it isn't even funny. He's starting to get bitchy to write. xD
Date: 09/13/10 12:36 am Title: Day Travel
.....this is all good and nice but....I want Tom! Haha update soon please!!
Author's Response: He's making his big entrance soon! ;)
Date: 09/09/10 06:12 pm Title: Day Travel
I don't understand why there aren't more reviews for this! =(
I really do like Felix along with his puppy. Puppies are so cute! Miriam seems like an interesting person.. I wonder why Bill seems to hate her so much.... Hmmmm.
I'm very interested in the abilities vampires will be able to have in this universe... Can't wait for more! =)
Author's Response: You're too nice. :x I'll have more as soon as possible! :) Thanks for reviewing! :D
Date: 09/08/10 07:06 pm Title: Day Travel
I like Felix :)
and his puppy XD
Author's Response: I'm glad you do because I love Felix's character as well. He's fun to write. :3