Date: 08/22/10 07:19 am Title: Chapter 4
awwww.ME LOVEEE.i feel lose 4 secs without Tom in the band.hahaha.YEA!!BILL IN DA HOUSEEE xDDD
Date: 08/22/10 01:50 am Title: Chapter 5
Feeling sad for Tom. He's wounded. Bill, I am sure he'll feel better. Can't wait.
Author's Response: Thank you eira for the review. As I write it hours ago, I also felt sad.
Date: 08/21/10 11:10 am Title: Chapter 1
OK! From now on, every new chapter will be beta-ed. So I hope no more GLARING GRAMMAR MISTAKES! ^^
Date: 08/21/10 09:38 am Title: Chapter 4
ohhhhh scheissse HE thinks she's unavailable!! Nice way to play this out! MMMM HMmmm. :9
LOL so Bill plays guitar and sings.
What a HOT image.
For that babe you get like 10 stars out of ten for this chapt!!
I'mmmm loving it~!
Author's Response: McD for me? I'll take dat as a promise! XD
Date: 08/20/10 10:17 pm Title: Chapter 4
HAHAHAHHAHAHA NOW THEY WANNA PUT THAT OUT AS THEIR SONG! HAHAH! OMG.... Liz went to hug Tom
Author's Response: it's the hormones i tell ya.
Date: 08/20/10 04:16 pm Title: Chapter 3
Oh c'mon Tomi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!win her heart!!!B a man la tomi..hahahaha.ehh.Oooverrr :pp
Author's Response: hahahahaahahahahah we'll see.
Date: 08/20/10 10:44 am Title: Chapter 3
naisssss. can't wait for chap 4 !!!! :D
Author's Response: :)
Date: 08/20/10 08:35 am Title: Chapter 3
Bernard!!! hahaha! And the humaoid CD thing. Awh Tom's sho sweet :) :) and..yeah, Bill IS bald there. lol never noticed!
OH!! I WANNA KILL YOU FOR THE SUSPENSE!
But hey, now i know what goes on when she's preparing and Tom gets more air time~ So i'm not complaining. :)
YAY. Bring the nxt chapt onnnnn babe.
and fan service the BOYS!!
Author's Response: Indeed!
Date: 08/20/10 02:30 am Title: Chapter 3
oh dang, n now how do I write chapter 4? :S
Date: 08/19/10 11:49 pm Title: Chapter 3
DANG! I LOVE IT! Imagine if i didnt tell you to writeee! :DDD You so can write, PULL URSELF TOGETHER! :)))
Love this chapter. Mostly, i love the way you portray TOM in here! and Liz is like, Naughttttyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!and tom is like smitten, always thinking about Liz in his headdddd!
Author's Response: justwin yeah thanks to you for showing me thf and telling me to write! giving me some let out of this loveeeeeee steam in me for bill n tom dat i cudnt contain anymore! at least even if i cudn't be with any of em in real life, i cud imagine i am in fiction right? hahah lame but yeah it makes me happy to write! ^^
Date: 08/19/10 11:38 pm Title: Chapter 2
HeyDjLiz! XDDD
I loveddddddddddddddd it! i honestly DID! i now know why its so long, thank God for that too. I hate anticipating next chapters so thank u for penning a super duper long one. Like the whole Tom and Liz flirtation on the bed! OAO Also, like the slapsticks you insert in this story.Its entertaining.Liz doesnt like the whole boyband idea but she likes Billlyyy!
Author's Response: LOL. No, Liz doesnt think THEY are boybands, Tom does. But she malas to squabble with him and just went along.
Date: 08/19/10 01:42 pm Title: Chapter 2
I like the punch Liz gave Tom :)
And the little fan service there abt the abs~
AND the pick up lines! hahahahaha
Author's Response: fan service?
Date: 08/19/10 01:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
Fuyooo, that made me think of my M&G and what i DIDNT do, which was plan stuff.
ANTICIPATION. I wonder what Liz will do!
And the part where she does her thang on Tom's grave is funnny :D
Reading nxt chapt now~
It's Pa-no Renee btw!! :)
Author's Response: she is feisty =p
Date: 08/19/10 12:52 pm Title: Chapter 2
yay! cnt wait 4 d nxt one! the postparty!n Bill !!!!!!!! xDDDD
Author's Response: hahahahaahahaahaha =p
Date: 08/18/10 03:38 am Title: Chapter 1
MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE.HAHAHAHAH:3
Author's Response: Chapter 2 otw ;)
Date: 08/18/10 02:17 am Title: Chapter 1
Hey, i like it, how the story developed. Way different from the draft you sent me. :)
I like it, i really like it! At least this is something diff, a DJ, and DJ TOMI( I CAN TOTALLY IMAGINE ITTT!!!). With his cute smile whizzing the music. Phooohhhhhh.....But isn't Tom from THAT band as well? I cant wait to see how they're related, or non related!
Author's Response: haha for that tom part, it was actually meant for another original character. But i thot heh why not put this playa as the main too huh? and yes im considering who is gonna replace tom in THAT BAND. haha.