Date: 05/20/11 02:45 am Title: Chapter 22
ASAL KO BIAR DIA MABUK???!!!i want her to experience everything willingly laaaaaa, lol. potong stim btul. and u sngaje buat pendek gila!now all u gonna hear from me is "FASTER WRITE MORE!!!"
Author's Response: SEBAB ITU AKAN MENOLONG STORYLINE???? HAHAHA LAST YEAR, IGT NK TWIST IT SOME MORE BUT THIS YEAR, LAIN PULAK JADIK. =P. K I FAILED <.<
Date: 02/22/11 12:40 am Title: Chapter 1
Loved it!
Author's Response: Danke! maybe i'll continue it.maybe.haha
Date: 10/22/10 09:52 am Title: Chapter 21
U HAVE TO CONTINUE THIS.i completely forgot abt Bill.tehe.
Date: 10/22/10 09:37 am Title: Chapter 20
I VANT MOAR BITCH.mwehee.very2 nice.like a pro ah!mwahahha
Date: 10/21/10 10:13 am Title: Chapter 19
PHUIYOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW.WAT A KISSSSSSSSSSSSSS.WET WET WET WET KISISSESSSSSSSS
Date: 10/21/10 09:40 am Title: Chapter 18
yeahhh.this is wat i've been waiting forrrr.Kissies =* im backkkkkkkkk ;DDD
Date: 09/20/10 11:41 pm Title: Chapter 21
HAHAHAHAHAHAH! You turned us all on and flipped out! PFFFFFFTTTT YOU BACK! i was waiting for that ahhhh moment (LOL) and u gave it NOT! I like it when tom pointed at his dick with his mouth, i totally imagined it! lawak siott! hey, eventhough u CHICKENED out, it's still amazing! i read it with precision and care, laughing at almost all the parts!
Author's Response: Indeed I have failed. LMAO. OH WELLS! we'll see what i will cook for the next one.
Date: 09/18/10 03:04 am Title: Chapter 20
WOI! its damn porno man! you made me inagine everything! HAHAHAHAHAHHA! So much for not being able todo this, i think its perfect! and i think, you're just leaving us hungry for more durtttyyyyy! continue!!! u get my green light for the red light district!
Date: 09/18/10 02:26 am Title: Chapter 20
Cool! Do NOT pornify this story so much that it can be categorize in porn stories collection. Keep it simple and romantic and light. That will do! Can't wait for Chapter 21. I will read it after PMR(if I can't resist). Good Luck writing it or should I say Glück? =D
Date: 09/17/10 07:17 pm Title: Chapter 20
*jaw on the floor* yay! Happeh dance. Tom is to adorable in this I'm going to kidnap him and keep him as my pet =D. I say pornify it! Hehe update!
Date: 09/16/10 12:20 pm Title: Chapter 19
very, very confused but i guess i can kinda see why she need to kiss Tom. maybe to see what could've been before she commited herself to Bill? idk but now i feel bad for Tom since he is in the delusion that she's going to dump Bill for him. or is she? again idk but i cant wait to find out.
Date: 09/15/10 02:56 am Title: Chapter 19
Everything is nice here! Chap 18 and 19 cool! Love it.
Date: 09/14/10 10:50 pm Title: Chapter 19
woiiiii....i love it la! but when they kiss, i feel like im kissing tomi! XD I totally put myself in her shoes and im feeling the love, i am. im glad they kissed. but dont make her two time bill! BILL IS FCKIN WAITING ON HER!
Date: 09/14/10 12:45 pm Title: Chapter 18
AHHH WHAT HPPENED??? are they together?? wahhhh~!!! KONFIUS!
Date: 09/14/10 12:10 pm Title: Chapter 17
Look at those cornrows! What was he thinking? That his parents could be black or something?
wahahaha~!!
OHMIGOSH, SHOWDOWN HOEDOWN!!! *JIGGLES*
Date: 09/14/10 12:05 pm Title: Chapter 16
f-f-fantasy world is niiiiiiiiice :D Felt like i was really there watching the whole scene with MA EYEBAWL.
Date: 09/14/10 11:16 am Title: Chapter 1
HELLOOOO! HERES MY REVIEW! DAPAT X???!!! I FCKIN LOVE UR STORY! WHY ARENT U FEATURED!
Author's Response: BABE, U SO DID NOT CLICK THE SUBMIT BUTTON PROPERLY. =/
Date: 09/14/10 01:52 am Title: Chapter 18
Aw I do heart this chapter!!! I really do but now I don't know who to root for! Billa or Tomi damnit you what you did! Ah still don't like Justine( as you can tell) I cant even be bothered to spell her name right. Update soon! *favorites*
Author's Response: thank you <3
Date: 09/12/10 03:48 pm Title: Chapter 17
heck yea,this story bcome more n more interestingg..n mystrious Tom n Bill rltionship mkes me a lil puzzled.....gut job n i love muh birthday present =)
Date: 09/12/10 11:22 am Title: Chapter 17
oh ma god. so tomi is bills bro from the same hoe! IKNEW IT!!! lol, im so happy u updated. but now i gotta know more abt this date!