Date: 07/23/12 12:10 am Title: Chapter 5
i hope u update one day its a really interesting story ^^
Date: 03/19/11 06:52 pm Title: Prologue:" As long as you stay together you will be safe"
Hey,
pleeeeaaaase upload another chapter. Your story is great !!! :D
Date: 02/04/11 07:42 am Title: Chapter 5
will you be updating soon? you said 2 weeks but its been months?
Date: 01/14/11 06:43 pm Title: Chapter 5
Oh, new reader.
Dunno what to say, maybe that I liked the story? Hope you update soon!
Date: 01/12/11 09:51 am Title: Prologue:" As long as you stay together you will be safe"
aaaw poor Bill... Looking forward to read more ! :)
Date: 11/20/10 11:58 am Title: Prologue:" As long as you stay together you will be safe"
:)
That was a great chapter!
Date: 11/17/10 02:51 am Title: Chapter 5
Great story! Looking forward to reading more.
Date: 11/15/10 11:28 pm Title: Chapter 5
*huggles bill*
Date: 11/10/10 12:47 pm Title: Chapter 3: Demian
This was amazing.
Date: 11/01/10 02:51 pm Title: Chapter 3: Demian
“Hi” Billīs heart jumped
“H..h..hi” Bill said not daring to look up
“Are you new?” the stranger asked “Iīve never seen you
before”
“Um… yes!” Bill answered loudly, maybe too loudly. The guy laughed.
“How long have you been working for Diana?”
Bill finally looked up. īDamn, heīs sexier closeī Bill thought.“Three months I guess, just in the mornings. Diana was my motherīs friend thatīs why I got the job, besides I wanted to earn my own money. I mean, I canīt depend of my father all my life and.. I wanted to help her, she has been so nice with my father and me. I…” Demian stopped his speech realizing how much he had talked. “I think… she will be back in a few minutes” The stranger was smiling to him.
īIdiot, idiot, idiotī Demian said to himself in his head.
“Can you tell me your name? if itīs not a problem” his smile grew.
“Itīs Demian, my name is Demian” Bill could fell his cheeks blushing.
“Nice to meet you Demian, Iīm Liam”
actually the entire flashback is wrong XD
Author's Response: wee no dejabas de mamar con tu "ya está listo?" no sabes como te odié ŽŽ
Date: 11/01/10 02:51 pm Title: Chapter 3: Demian
“Hi” Billīs heart jumped
“H..h..hi” Bill said not daring to look up
“Are you new?” the stranger asked “Iīve never seen you
before”
“Um… yes!” Bill answered loudly, maybe too loudly. The guy laughed.
“How long have you been working for Diana?”
Bill finally looked up. īDamn, heīs sexier closeī Bill thought.“Three months I guess, just in the mornings. Diana was my motherīs friend thatīs why I got the job, besides I wanted to earn my own money. I mean, I canīt depend of my father all my life and.. I wanted to help her, she has been so nice with my father and me. I…” Demian stopped his speech realizing how much he had talked. “I think… she will be back in a few minutes” The stranger was smiling to him.
īIdiot, idiot, idiotī Demian said to himself in his head.
“Can you tell me your name? if itīs not a problem” his smile grew.
“Itīs Demian, my name is Demian” Bill could fell his cheeks blushing.
“Nice to meet you Demian, Iīm Liam”
actually the entire flashback is wrong XD
Date: 11/01/10 02:49 pm Title: Chapter 3: Demian
“Itīs Demian, my name is Demian” Bill could fell his cheeks blushing.
hey dude! i found a mistake xD!
Date: 10/26/10 12:20 pm Title: Prologue:" As long as you stay together you will be safe"
I love that movie!
Making it into a fanfic is such a great idea!
When is the next chapter coming?
Date: 10/05/10 11:54 pm Title: Chapter 3: Demian
DUN DUN DUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^_^
Date: 10/05/10 06:04 pm Title: Chapter 3: Demian
Ok.. You're doing great just one little issue. Damian put the subscription documents away not putted. Other than that nice job :)
Author's Response: thanks for telling us..! ^^ itīs already fixed :)
Date: 10/04/10 10:17 pm Title: Chapter 3: Demian
yaaaay!!! i love this chapter!!!! very suspenseful!!! cant wait for the next one!!! -crosses fingers- i hope its soon!!!
Date: 10/04/10 09:05 pm Title: Chapter 3: Demian
i love it!!!!!!!
Date: 10/04/10 12:46 pm Title: Chapter 3: Demian
omg this is soooo good update soon
Date: 10/04/10 09:26 am Title: Chapter 3: Demian
Poor Bill, he has no clue what the hell is happening?! Very anxious for the next chapter. Update soon PLEASE!
Date: 10/04/10 04:13 am Title: Chapter 2: Past and present
more!!!! Please :)