Date: 10/04/10 12:47 am Title: Chapter 3: Demian
can`t wait to find our what happens next!
Author's Response: me too :D
Date: 09/22/10 10:48 pm Title: Chapter 2: Past and present
hurry up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!plz...this story made me cry!!!and u left it on a cliffhanger!!!!damn it D: but its a great story!
Date: 09/21/10 03:16 pm Title: Chapter 2: Past and present
oh my god! he showed up! bill came.. and and,, i just can't wait for him to meet tom!
Date: 09/20/10 08:36 pm Title: Chapter 2: Past and present
Poor Simone!!! I want Bill ( Demian to meet TOm) Im excited and worried about how this will play out. I can't wait for more.
Date: 09/20/10 04:42 pm Title: Chapter 2: Past and present
I love it!
Date: 09/20/10 02:26 pm Title: Chapter 2: Past and present
MOOORE! : D
Date: 09/20/10 01:21 pm Title: Chapter 2: Past and present
Ver good! more...
Date: 09/20/10 08:52 am Title: Chapter 2: Past and present
You can't stop here! I can't wait to read about the twins reactions when they meet each other !
Oh no, that sucks, I would be sad to loose my music, especially Muse !
Can't wait to read the next chapter !
Author's Response: can't wait to write it xD
Date: 09/20/10 08:47 am Title: Chapter 1: Happy Birthday
This story is very good! Poor Tomi, I really feel sad for him... The twins need to find each other again :(
Date: 09/20/10 08:41 am Title: Chapter 2: Past and present
*whee* How ironic that your long lost son comes up to your door XD
I'm all excited now :)
Date: 09/20/10 08:40 am Title: Prologue:" As long as you stay together you will be safe"
Oh no ! Such a sad first chapter! But it was very interesting, young twins are SO cute!
Date: 09/20/10 01:28 am Title: Chapter 2: Past and present
THE PAPER BOY! HAHAHAHA! OMG! Update quick!
Date: 09/20/10 12:25 am Title: Chapter 2: Past and present
NO WAY!!!!! how could you leave it there!!! i screamed so loud that my brother nearly fell from his spot (no wonder if he hates me XD)
omg! I just can't wait for the next chap! you made my heart rushes with the last scene oh pleeeeeeease update sooner and don't have more problems with grounded laptops, software malfunctions or bad basketball balls ha-ha! (i hope she's totally fine btw) well, see ya!
Date: 09/20/10 12:23 am Title: Chapter 2: Past and present
NO WAY!!!!! how could you leave it there!!! i screamed so loud that my brother nearly fell from his spot (no wonder if he hates me XD)
omg! I just can't wait for the next chap! you made my heart rushes with the last scene oh pleeeeeeease update sooner and don't have more problems with grounded laptops, software malfunctions or bad basketball balls ha-ha! (i hope she's totally fine btw) well, see ya!
Author's Response: i can't, i have a life and 8 subjects xD
Date: 09/20/10 12:20 am Title: Chapter 2: Past and present
Gahhhhh....how long you going to leave us hangin'? Im on the edge of my seat!!
Thank's for updating!
Date: 09/15/10 03:39 am Title: Chapter 1: Happy Birthday
please post more soon xD
Date: 09/11/10 05:16 am Title: Chapter 1: Happy Birthday
You must right more. This pulled at my heart strings and made me cry. Beautiful write. Please, continue?
Date: 08/22/10 04:44 pm Title: Chapter 1: Happy Birthday
aw, this is so sad and cute! really hope Tom will find Bill soon! :')
Date: 08/20/10 10:40 pm Title: Chapter 1: Happy Birthday
oh yay!!!! this is such a sad story!!! i love it!!! please let bill come back into the picture soon!!!! i cant wait till tom and bill find eachother again! hope its with in the coming chapters!!! more soon pleasy-pumpkins!!!
Date: 08/20/10 09:55 pm Title: Chapter 1: Happy Birthday
aww,how sweet, yet so sad...
UPDATE!