Date: 06/02/25 03:08 pm Title: age 20
”Tom had never thought he would find gratification in pleasuring his own twin brother, and as fucked up as that sounded, he enjoyed hearing little whimpers coming from Bill's mouth. He squeezed and pumped and teased.” - Did they both forget what happened when they where 13 in Toms bed or what..? In more parts of the chapters after that one it seams like they forgot about it in the way they were thinking and talking about things? Which also was surprising since in that part when they were 13 it seemed like they were gonna continue pleasuring each other sometimes or wanted to with how they talked.. Anyway the whole fic and it’s chapters are beautiful in so many ways! I love it :,)
Date: 06/02/25 03:40 am Title: age 20
”Tom had never thought he would find gratification in pleasuring his own twin brother, and as fucked up as that sounded, he enjoyed hearing little whimpers coming from Bill's mouth. He squeezed and pumped and teased.” - Did they both forget what happened when they where 13 in Toms bed or what..? In more parts of the chapters after that one it seams like they forgot about it in the way they were thinking and talking about things? Which also was surprising since in that part when they were 13 it seemed like they were gonna continue pleasuring each other sometimes or wanted to with how they talked.. Anyway the whole fic and it’s chapters are beautiful in so many ways! I love it :,)
Date: 06/02/25 03:40 am Title: age 20
”Tom had never thought he would find gratification in pleasuring his own twin brother, and as fucked up as that sounded, he enjoyed hearing little whimpers coming from Bill's mouth. He squeezed and pumped and teased.” - Did they both forget what happened when they where 13 in Toms bed or what..? In more parts of the chapters after that one it seams like they forgot about it in the way they were thinking and talking about things? Which also was surprising since in that part when they were 13 it seemed like they were gonna continue pleasuring each other sometimes or wanted to with how they talked.. Anyway the whole fic and it’s chapters are beautiful in so many ways! I love it :,)
Date: 06/11/23 04:05 pm Title: age 8
I've mentioned this on other reviews: I came into the TH / THF fandom in Jan’22. The vast majority of fics I've read are quite old and I'm sure the authors have moved on (and probably wont even see new reviews), BUT I figure why not leave one anyway… I enjoyed this fic and wanted to say thank you for writing and sharing it!
Date: 10/15/15 08:03 am Title: age 20
Real,so dayum real!!!! *_*
Date: 02/28/12 12:30 am Title: age 20
This was really sweet =') I especially liked when Simone found them touching each other in the bath, because that really was just innocent and them wondering whether or not they were completely identical. It wasn't sexual at all, and the scene showed just how dangerous and easy it is to cross the line from acceptable in the eyes of society to unacceptable in the eyes of society. This entire thing was very well done, and I can't wait to read more of your stuff (if I haven't already XD) ^-^
Date: 06/15/11 11:31 am Title: age 20
this was a really good story!!
good job!
Date: 05/01/11 06:11 pm Title: age 20
I have no idea why I didn't read this before, what a mistake! Wow. This was so enjoyable, beautiful, touching, especially the last chapter. I actually had tears in my eyes. I love how patient you were building it all up, and the climax was perfect.
Date: 11/15/10 03:07 pm Title: age 20
Such a beautiful end to such a cute love story. I think you made the classic twin love story so much right with this. The flood of emotions and angst in a last chapter and very good dialogue made this a pleasure to read. It is sad to see this ending, but you ended this with the best possible way.
So bgeautiful, so much twin love. :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your sweet words! <3 Twin love is so beautiful and pure and that's why I love writing it :)
Date: 11/14/10 07:48 pm Title: age 20
i loved it
great fic
i hope for a sequel
Author's Response: I don't really know what I would write in a sequel... xD But thank you! <3
Date: 11/14/10 01:34 am Title: age 17
awww
the end of this chapter is soo cute
Author's Response: Thank you ;-)
Date: 11/13/10 01:21 am Title: age 20
OMG it was really awesome can't waut great job :D
Author's Response: Thank you!!
Date: 11/12/10 06:32 am Title: age 20
Awwww, sappy goodness in the end. :)
I really liked this story. I'm a really big fan of the twincest-thru-the-ages type fic, and this one delivered all the usual forbidden feelings, experimental twins, and "i've loved u for so long" etc etc that I absolutely love.
One unique part in this fic was when the twins started making out in public while drunk and the G's were like WTF?!... fabulous!!!! (Best part, hands down!) I also thought the part in the last chapter where the twins fall into a natural knack for kissing felt very natural and believable, that was another of my fav bits. Actually, I also liked the twins sharing a bath at the beginning, and the Tom-giving-Bill-handjob when they were 13. Not much else stuck out for me as "extraordinary" (sorry) but it was very good. Solid, good writing, and nothing to knock. Good flow, kept up the tension and intregue, kept me hooked. (Maybe could have used another proof-read: a handful of times sounded like the word u used was substituted wrong by your spellchecker, just fyi, no biggie tho. lol.)
Yeah, this was a solid twincest fic. Well done. :)
Author's Response: Thank you for being totally honest :) This fic wasn't really intended to be extraordinary, but I tried adding a few quirks like the underwater kissing :D And yeah, after writing 7000 words I just wanted to post it and get it off my shoulders, so I apologize for any errors :$ I'm glad you enjoyed it though! Thanks for the amazing review!! <3333
Date: 11/11/10 02:22 pm Title: age 20
That was such a good fic! This final chapter was perfect, you did an amazing job with it. Their first time was so beautiful and full of love. I really enjoyed the kiss under water scene too! Really great fic, I love it :)
Author's Response: Thank you for reading darling! :D <333
Date: 11/11/10 10:46 am Title: age 20
I really, really enjoyed reading! This was just too sweet and I LOVED it, darling! GREAT JOB :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :D I'm glad you loved it :)
Date: 11/11/10 01:51 am Title: age 20
Resistance + twincest angst and drama = PERFECTION! I truly LOVE this fic!! *screams*
Author's Response: *screams with you* Thank you! <3
Date: 11/11/10 01:35 am Title: age 17
I think I wanna eat Bill!! He's so cute!! x3
Author's Response: Bill is irresistible, he's like human candy ;)
Date: 11/11/10 01:30 am Title: age 16
Poor Tom...but I do understand him. Who wouldn't be infected with Bill in his kisses? That should be addictive! ;)
Author's Response: I'm surprised Tom didn't completely freak out, he's getting sucked into Bill's adorable kisses! Oh noesssss! :O
Date: 11/11/10 01:21 am Title: age 13
Reading this and listening to Resistance is quite a thing! I really like this fic! :D
Author's Response: Love is our resiiiiiiistance! <3 Gah, I love that song & thanks again!
Date: 11/11/10 01:15 am Title: age 8
OMFG!! I think I love you!! If there is something I love more than twincest I think it's MUSE!! Even though I find the whole twilight connection annoying, I LOVE THEM!! *w*
Author's Response: Lol I don't even care for twilight, I've loved Muse waaay before :DD I'm glad you enjoyed it! <3