Date: 11/26/10 10:44 am Title: Concealed Matters
I love the name 'Moon' so sweet. The water incident is interesting, and Tom's report to Gordan is intriuging.
Yay we have a form of admittance on Tom's behalf that he 'feels' something for Bill. Progress I hope.
Loved it honey *hugs*
Author's Response: Thank you very much! <3
Date: 11/26/10 10:28 am Title: Awaited Apologies
Don't worry, it was worth the wait ! I like how they relationship is developing! This chapter was really interesting, especially when we learned more about Tom's past and his dad. And I'm so glad he finally apologized to Bill for being a jerk all these years! I can't wait to see where they're gonna go from this point!
Author's Response: Ah, thank you very much! Your reviews always make me smile.
Date: 11/26/10 10:14 am Title: Slow Changes
Awww Bill with the calf is sadly adorable. Interesting to note Tom's reaction when overhearing Bill, maybe there's hope yet.
Ahhhh Bill and his boots, a sight I'd love to see. Tom's 'first' sounds awfully like a certain person lol. Tom's in denial? That would certainly explain a few things. Loved it honey *hugs*
Author's Response: Thank you very much. Perhaps Tom's in denial... we'll see... ;) <3
Date: 11/26/10 09:54 am Title: Cold Welcomes
Oh the anguish in this is palpable, it's just heartbreaking that both Gordan and Tom treat Bill that way. It's certainly understandable why he left. Great chapter, my heart aches. *hugs*
Author's Response: Ah, yes. Bill is quite tortured :/ <3
Date: 11/26/10 09:43 am Title: Prologue: Going Home
Oh poor Bill, what a way to find out. I admire his strength to actually agree go home.
It seems as though he's got a rather low opinion of himself. That being the cheap thrill is all he's good for.
Maybe I'm reading too much into it, I don't know. Anyway, loved it. *skips off for more*
Author's Response: Thank you for reading! I enjoy your responses :)
Date: 11/26/10 07:52 am Title: Awaited Apologies
Your are forgiven :P
Holy Hell that must have hurt O_O Poor Tom...
At least they're getting along better.. Hopefully it'll last :D
Author's Response: XD Thank you! And yes, quite a harsh injury. I know someone who something similar happened to... ouch ouch ouch.
Date: 11/26/10 04:36 am Title: Awaited Apologies
Aww =)
I'm glad things are getting better between the two of them! I feel sorry for Tom =(
Author's Response: <3 Tom will be okay - they both will.
Date: 10/27/10 10:14 am Title: Unwanted Complications
*sighs* Tom is so stubborn.
Great chapter =D
Author's Response: Ahh, I know. >< Don't worry, he comes around...!~ Thanks!
Date: 10/27/10 02:51 am Title: Unwanted Complications
new reader!!
Awesome story i am really caught!! Update soon im really anxious to know what will happen. (;
Author's Response: Thank you for reading! ^^
Date: 10/27/10 01:01 am Title: Unwanted Complications
i thought it was pretty good actually :)
Author's Response: Thanks. Haha :)
Date: 10/26/10 11:27 pm Title: Unwanted Complications
Oh Tom, man up and admit it! I really feel for Bill in this story, hope thing's turn around for him soon. Thank you for the update!
Author's Response: Awh, thank you for reading!
Date: 10/26/10 09:19 pm Title: Unwanted Complications
Tom is a half used douche XD So cold and bitchy :/
Author's Response: XD
Date: 10/26/10 09:10 pm Title: Unwanted Complications
hehe, art school...... XD but, yeah, i love this story, update as soon as school lets you!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Yep, art school. Hard as hell!
Date: 10/26/10 08:37 pm Title: Unwanted Complications
I have no words for how much I love this! I'm so glad I found this now and had six chapters to read through. The mood, the atmosphere, the characters, GOD, the characters! Oh, everything is so astoundingly perfect. Every action that the characters do, and the reasons for their doing it... it's all so realistic!
I love this fic with all of my heart, and goodness. I'm supposed to be finishing a major fic because it has to be done by the 31st, but lol, I've gotten thoroughly distracted and swept off of my feet!
This, ma'am, is one of the most enjoyable stories I've had the pleasure of reading on this site. And now, I'm going to see if you've written anything else. I MEAN NO I'M GOING TO WRITE AND BE RESPONSIBLE. >_>
♥
Author's Response: Oh my god! Do you know how much that means to me?!! You're an absolute doll! Thank you SO much for that review; it made my night. <3
Date: 10/26/10 07:48 pm Title: Unwanted Complications
Tom's such a silly little ass =/ He's gonna have to get a handle on those emotions of his. I'm really glad Bill stood up to him, though :)
And omg...the kitchen scene? That was great *_* I'm lovin' this so much.
Author's Response: I know, ahah. Thank you!
Date: 10/26/10 06:10 pm Title: Unwanted Complications
I'm glad Bill stood up to Tom and yelled at him for being hypocritical. he is being super immature and Bill's right, he needs to act like an adult. Thanks for the update, can't wait for more!!
Author's Response: Right? Tom, Tom, Tom. Be a man. Thank you!
Date: 10/26/10 04:52 pm Title: Unwanted Complications
godddd, 'nothing too good"??? you are like...a fanfiction goddess. every word is somehow better than it would be had someone else written it...omggg, that was so.....detailed and....descriptive. i really loved when you mentioned the play of light on tom as he approached bill. dude, tom is infuriating. but that's okay...he's...ugh, it has to get better someday.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, oh my god. I love you. XD
Date: 10/26/10 02:10 pm Title: Unwanted Complications
I was so happy to see an update on this fic! Thank for this chapter! It was very intense and sexy. Unfortunately, Tom is in deep denial. It was so sad at the end, poor Bill :( Can't wait to read the next chapter!
Author's Response: Awh, thank you! <3
Date: 10/26/10 01:06 pm Title: Unwanted Complications
*scoff* Lying to self, indeed.
@long wait: Hehe, it's okay. I was getting restless, but it was worth it.
Author's Response: haha, thanks!
Date: 10/26/10 12:19 pm Title: Unwanted Complications
just woow!!! this was a great start for this fic!!! i absolutely love it, please update soon and thank you XD
Author's Response: thanks :)