Date: 12/12/10 04:53 am Title: Cold Welcomes
Another great chapter! This is really shaping up to be an amazing story. *goes to next chapter*
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 12/12/10 04:34 am Title: Prologue: Going Home
I'm kicking myself right now for never taking the time to read this story. If this chapter is anything to go by then this is going to be amazing! Congrats on the feature, and I am off to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Haha, thanks for reading it now! The feature will come back after the twelve days of Christmas, thank you so much! I'm in awe that it was featured. <3
Date: 12/12/10 04:07 am Title: Awaited Apologies
I love this story, It's really fucking good. Just saying! I like how you wrote it and all, you did an exellent job! Can't wait for the next chapter! :)
Author's Response: Thank you endlessly :') <3
Date: 11/30/10 01:00 am Title: Awaited Apologies
I don't care how long it's been! I love this story and I will wait for however long it takes!
xoxox
Author's Response: Awh, thanks! The new chapter will be out tonight!!!
Date: 11/26/10 11:56 pm Title: Awaited Apologies
I can tell you that since I started reading this fic, I always hope your update, is amazing!
Author's Response: Oh my gosh, thanks so much!
Date: 11/26/10 07:02 pm Title: Awaited Apologies
wow. good to see some progress with Tom. Bill has just been too good to him. Thanks for the update!
Author's Response: Aah, right?! Finally. Thank you for reading!!!
Date: 11/26/10 06:25 pm Title: Awaited Apologies
well, i guess i just have to say that i loved it, just like every other chapter, because you're amazing. im so jealous of your little in-the-moment details, all that stuff we take for granted in daily life but really make a story come to life when one takes the time to weave them in :) a month is okay, as long as you never abandon the story for good! that i couldn't deal with!
Author's Response: Ahh, thank you so much! I'm glad you are enjoying it. I definitely won't abandon this story; it's taken over my mind! Haha.
Date: 11/26/10 05:35 pm Title: Awaited Apologies
AWW PLZZZZ I NEED MORE OF THIS GURLY
Author's Response: ASAP! I will I will!
Date: 11/26/10 04:12 pm Title: Awaited Apologies
But if we kill you, then this story will never get finished! And hey, there's nothing wrong with long chapters, and I think lots of readers will agree; longer chapters means more of this glorious story to read. That plus, I love reading, so the longer the better! ;)
This story reads just like a really good book; I just want to print it out, bind it, and curl up in a corner with a mug of tea and my mp3.
I love the slow progression of Bill and Tom's relationship; it would seem we've reached a turning point of some sort, but it may be too soon to say. But, hopefully, Tom will slowly begin to change for the better.
Tom said something that made me raise an eyebrow; he said his father was critical and judgemental, and earlier, Tom was checking Bill out after covering him with the blanket. I wonder if that's why Tom's so homophobic? He's self loathing, and had to hide it because of how his dad was, and it's become something that he hates in himself, thus, hates in others as well. I GUES WE'LL BE FINDING OUT~~ right? =)
Can't wait to read more of this, darling, it's so wonderfully good! It actually inspires me to write; whenever I read really good fics, they make me want to go work on my own projects, and yours has definitely inspired me! (I'll be putting that motivation to use to finish up my secret santa fic, lol).
Sorry for the ramble, and again, can't wait for more! You're such a talented author, and honestly, I think you should consider getting this published. I'd totally buy it! ♥
Author's Response: AH GOD. Can I tell you how happy your reviews make me? No. I can't. There aren't words. ^^ <3 Tom sure is a complex guy - since his dad was the only one he really had in his life to look up to, he picked up on many of his traits, even the negative ones, and is scared to let them go. We certainly will delve deeper, though!~ Thank you SO SO SO much for your very kind reviews! They motivate me so much - I'm writing more right now!
Date: 11/26/10 04:06 pm Title: Awaited Apologies
Hope to see the next one up soon. I love this story. It has depth.
Author's Response: Thank you very much (:
Date: 11/26/10 03:00 pm Title: Awaited Apologies
*stabbity stab* At least you haven't abandoned this story, which is always my greatest fear for one this well written. :) I love this chapter, and the way the story is progressing - beautiful work. You bring out the emotions very well, and I'm excited to see this story through. :3 Thank you for updating!
Author's Response: Haha! AAAH NOOO! Stab wounds! I need Bill to drive me to the hospital. Haha. XD Thank you very much for your review! <3 I'll never abandon it.
Date: 11/26/10 02:25 pm Title: Awaited Apologies
It's about time Tom apologized. I really hope it's sincere this time, although something tells me it's not going to be all roses and candy just yet.
Author's Response: We'll find out, though, won't we! :) Thanks for your review.
Date: 11/26/10 01:18 pm Title: Awaited Apologies
Tom could have so laid into Bill for what he said, but he actually took it to heart, so good for him! The end of this was really great, seeing them getting along for a bit. I hope it lasts. :)
Author's Response: I know, perhaps he's finally softening and opening up a bit...! We'll see! ;)
Date: 11/26/10 12:36 pm Title: Awaited Apologies
Ouch! Wow Tom has to be more careful on the farm but even with one good arm he isn't useless =)
Author's Response: Ah, I know! But everyone's klutzy sometimes. Thanks :)
Date: 11/26/10 11:36 am Title: Awaited Apologies
Ewww for some reason that made me really squeamish! Poor Tom, that would've been both painful and scary. Bill held it together well I thought.
I loved their talk, it sheds some more light on Tom's behaviour. I was so emotional when he apologised, it was so sweet.
Really loooking forward to more and I certainly won't be killing you. *huggles*
Author's Response: Ah, I know, it would be so painful. >< But Tom of all people can handle it - and don't worry, a certain someone will nurse and care for him... Thank you very much for aaalllll of your reviews! They made me smile so much.
Date: 11/26/10 11:34 am Title: Awaited Apologies
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY, UPDATE!!!!!!!! lol
i loved this chapter, and i'm really enjoying watching the dynamics between bill and tom shifting.... it's very realistic and the timing's great!!!!! keep your muse and DON'T TAKE A MONTH TO UPDATE AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD
Author's Response: XD! Thank you. Sorry I took so long to update - real life is killing me. So much work all the time!
Date: 11/26/10 11:16 am Title: Unwanted Complications
Oh hell, this is not good. Tom is such a stubborn man!!! Seriously, I can't help but want to smack him right now and tell him to man up. It's amazing how in denial he is. I wonder what it's going to take for him to finally come out with the truth? Great chapter honey, you don't give yourself enough credit. *hugs*
Author's Response: He certainly is quite the stubborn bastard, isn't he. The truth always comes out, though, doesn't it... ;) <3
Date: 11/26/10 11:00 am Title: Imminent Shifts
Oh god, you had me in tears with this chapter. Bill's realisation was heartbreaking, yet it comes with a glimmer of hope that maybe things can be mended between them before Gordan dies.
I love Tom in this chapter, his actions no matter how slight speak of an underlying positive 'feeling' towards Bill, and that makes me giddy.
I loved this chapter particularly. *smooshes*
Author's Response: Awh, I'm sorry! <3 Thank you (again) for your review!
Date: 11/26/10 10:53 am Title: Awaited Apologies
That chapter was worth the month long wait. First I love Moon. She is a great little character and I enjoy when an animal can really become an intergral part of the cast.
When I first read Tom begging for Bill to open the door my heart stopped and I held my breath. I don't think I breathed again until the very end. Even after they talked and apologized I was afraid, like Bill, That Tom might not be feeling as positive about their heart to heart like Bill was. I really hoped he was and continues to be.
I really, really enjoyed this chapter. I understand what it's like to have so many things to do that it's hard to find time to write. Remember that real life is more important and that anyone who abandons this amazing story because of slow updates is a fool! Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Thank you, aaahhhh. The fact that you're a regular reviewer means more than I can say. Thanks for your constant feedback! <3
Date: 11/26/10 10:51 am Title: Awaited Apologies
Really good update, love the turn in their relationship. Can't wait to see what's next for these two!
Author's Response: Thank you! I appreciate your reviews.
