Date: 04/24/12 09:10 pm Title: Newfound Emotions
I loved the imagery of butterfly. Both sex scenes were really hot, but the one in the dark was so sweet and tender too. Great chapter. Thank you.
Date: 04/24/12 09:02 pm Title: Welcomed Occurences
This was perfectly done. I loved it!!
Date: 04/16/12 11:38 pm Title: Newfound Emotions
AMAZING!!!
Date: 04/16/12 04:37 pm Title: Newfound Emotions
Thx for new (yummy) chapi :D I love it and will be waiting for more!
Date: 04/16/12 12:51 am Title: Newfound Emotions
Okay, so, WOW. This has been a lovely, amazing story so far. I just started this a few dayss ago, and I am so upset I hadn't read it sooner. I really like Max, and I was really wprried when he showed up the day he wasn't supposed to, I was worried Aleks had done something of a very bad nature. Keep up the great workM I can't wait to see more!
Date: 04/14/12 03:25 pm Title: Newfound Emotions
I am so happy with the developments of this chapter. They have had a chance to really talk about their feelings and they seem to be on the same page i their relationship. I LOVED the line "you feel better than anything I've ever know" OMG YES! This is the quintessential line of all lines. I've tried to express the same sentiment but it's never come out so well. LOVE IT! I really hope that they bond they've formed in this chapter will get them through whatever test is coming their way. They have had it a bit rough and I just want them to be happy, and whole and in love. I just hope that they can weather the storm together. Can't wait for the next update, and I'm waiting on pins and needles for the next update of Muse as well. This is not me pushing you (cause I hate when people do this to me) I'm just telling you that I love your writing and I want/NEED more. haha. All caught up now.
Date: 04/14/12 01:12 pm Title: Welcomed Occurences
Things in the kitchen started so hot, only to be interrupted with bad news resulting. Poor Bill losing his horse. He grew up with her and loved her, but I'm happy Tom was there to take care of Bill and Kelly. I'm happy they could finally have their moment. It's been building between them for so long. Excited for the next chapter. I'm happy I have another one to read.
Date: 04/14/12 03:14 am Title: Newfound Emotions
Great chapter!
Date: 04/14/12 02:46 am Title: Unexpected Encounters
Ok, so I was going to go to bed and instead I sat here and read this. OMG I was so anxious this whole chapter. At first I thought Bill would be in an accident, or they would both go to take Max home and that asshole from the first day the shop was open would burn down the bard. I never thought Aleks would come back, but since he didn't hurt Bill I'm kind of happy he did. Tom has opened up, and said the things he's been feeling for Bill. I think this is a real turning point for them and for that I am glad. I'm really going to bed this time. I'm all bleary eyed.
Date: 04/14/12 02:13 am Title: Continued Progressions
I'm a few chapters behind but I'm excited to catch up LOVED this chapter. I like the progress they are making though I feel bad for Bill that he has to kind of walk on eggshells when it comes to the status of their relationship, but it seems that Tom is adjusting amazingly and that they are making a lot of progress. Excited to catch up on the rest tomorrow. Can't wait.
Date: 04/13/12 11:53 pm Title: Newfound Emotions
I love the lazy, rainy-day feel to this chapter. My daydreams always lead me to a house in the countryside on a gray, rainy day and the day is spent cuddling with a lover or doing other things. Ahem >__>
Date: 04/13/12 08:08 pm Title: Newfound Emotions
Fantastic update!
Date: 04/13/12 07:00 pm Title: Newfound Emotions
Hi.
No complaints about chapterswith intimate activities... they so deserve to have this sexy moments and we are just happy to read about them. XD
It's a good this they sort things out, a misunderstanding might have probably brought a lot of trouble into their relation.
See you next chapter ^^
hugs!
PS. I will go and check your new story.
Date: 04/13/12 06:03 pm Title: Newfound Emotions
You're evil, what with saying that the next chapter is not going to be nearly as pleasant, but I'll forgive you because this chapter was amazing (and I love a little angst here and there)! I loved that even though Tom left without a word again, he came back and was actually willing to make it all better and what a way to make up for leaving. *fans self* Really loving the progression in this love story, nothing has been rushed, it's been just right. I'll be looking forward to more!
Date: 04/13/12 05:53 pm Title: Newfound Emotions
Perfect. Great. Wow. Love it.
Date: 04/13/12 12:46 pm Title: Newfound Emotions
Aww Tom really cares how sweet =D
Date: 04/13/12 12:28 pm Title: Newfound Emotions
Not nearly as pleasant? D: Oh what does that mean. ;___; *le sigh*
In any event, I am not opposed to the excess intimate activities (lol) They had a long time coming! Tom is just so...omg he breaks my heart, seeing him go through the changes and accept his love for Bill. Because they are nothing but in /love/ at this point, whether he can voice the words or not. It's so sweet. So happy to see you updated sooner then expected! :D
Date: 04/12/12 11:48 pm Title: Welcomed Occurences
aaah, lovely! one of the best 'first's I've read in a really long time. i kind of wanted them to tell Max about Aleks, but really it's better they didn't...i can't wait to see how this story will end up. are we close to the end?
Date: 04/09/12 01:32 am Title: Prologue: Going Home
Oh god I really wish I could like reply to a reply or something on here but I'm just leaving you another review anyway because I want to answer you so my apologies that this isn't another review on your update. But YOU DO? Oh god I'm flattered! Since when am I even READ by anyone? I wish I knew when I was relevant to writers I like because oh my god yes absolutely I read your stuff, I've got this tracked and Shiver in my favorites and Muse is in my tbr list except it's like unfinished and I hate reading unfinished things and waiting and I've read Dirty Picture and YES GURL I READ YOU okay. You can totally holla at me if you want to because I like making friends with mutual readers and stuff.
Author's Response: Haha aawh you're a doll! I have read (some of) your stories! Cochlea and the one about Bill dying from licking his brushes (a phenomenon which I know well of, going to art school... crazy stuff!) And I loved both. Your big bang fic has been on my to-read list for forever now but I have no time, haha - once summer rolls around I'll be sure to read it! And yeah I'd love to be friends! Haha :) you can email me at beerbee@live.com :)
Date: 04/08/12 04:58 am Title: Welcomed Occurences
Hi!
Waiting for this chapter was definitely worth it.
I adored the way Tom has surrendered to his feelings and needs. Lusting over Bill.
Tom is so kind that it makes me want to cry. Thoughtful at all times.
Thank you for making time among your responsabilities to write this chapter. It was great.
I'll see you next chapter.
Hugs!
Author's Response: Ah, yes, thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Your review means a lot.