Date: 08/02/11 12:27 am Title: Continued Progressions
My thoughts? Rather incoherent at the moment! You write intense, beautiful and loving sex, and I'm a puddle.
I really liked the inclusion of Max. It can really be a life saver for a young gay man to have role models. Good for all of them!
Absolutely lovely chapter. :D
Author's Response: Haha! Thank you so much, you're an absolute angel.
Date: 08/01/11 11:07 pm Title: Continued Progressions
Yum.
Author's Response: :D
Date: 08/01/11 10:07 pm Title: Continued Progressions
worth the wait! I love how Tom's finally accepting things little by little instead of just being stubborn lol. Also, yay to their success! -throws streamers-
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 08/01/11 08:03 pm Title: Continued Progressions
Heh, I'm liking where their relationship is progressing to xD They have both changed for the better :)
Author's Response: Ee, thanks! I'm liking writing it, haha.
Date: 08/01/11 06:09 pm Title: Continued Progressions
Guh! I think the hotness that was this chapter melted my brain. Loved the way this is moving along. Love that you're allowing them the time to make this grow into something bigger with each passing chapter. I adore your descriptions, the way you weave words and I really don't mind waiting when I know the end result will be so satisfying.
Oooh, and I loved the scene with the homophobic bastard, the nice lady and then Max, that was almost as awesome as Bill's speech. :D
Thanks for the wonderful update.
Author's Response: Oh my goodness, thank you so much! You're always so kind n_n
Date: 08/01/11 05:18 pm Title: Continued Progressions
You write some of the most fantastic smut ever. ;_; You're a brilliant writer altogether! I'm sure I've said this before, but I'm a sucker for extensive vocabularies, so your fics just hit the spot, and leave me grinning. You set scenes perfectly, make the characters so believable, so real, so relatable!
I want to be like you when I grow up.
Author's Response: Ahhhh yooooooooooou! You flatter me so! <3 Thank you thank you a million times thank you! I'm seriously grinning like a fool right now, haha!
Date: 08/01/11 05:09 pm Title: Continued Progressions
Perfect update =)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 08/01/11 05:01 pm Title: Rewarded Persistence
ADFdsfhadsfiahfawefawhk that was smokin' hot!
I love that Tom asked Bill out on a date. He didn't really acknowledge it as such, but there was no denying. I'm so proud of him too, just like Bill; Tom's come so far, and is making such great strides forward. =)
Author's Response: YOU ARE THE BEST! Haha :)
Date: 08/01/11 04:31 pm Title: Recurring Hesitations
Eeeek! How in the world did I miss so many updates?! This is one of my favorite fics, and I've been failing to keep up with it? I'm disappointed in myself. u_u
This chapter was so sexy! Tom and Bill just teasing and teasing and teasing each other. Mm! But I get where Tom is coming from; he likes Bill, but even still, he's afraid.
What can I say? Brilliantly done, as usual!
Author's Response: It's all good! Sometimes it can be a pleasant surprise to come back to multiple chapters :) Thanks, as always, for your review! You always brighten my day.
Date: 08/01/11 04:28 pm Title: Continued Progressions
I think I'm going to read this chapter forever. SO MANY MILESTONES ASD;VOKND;VJZDHVLIDSUJBDZ!!!! I love them, I love them, I love THEM.
And Max, because I seriously want to hug that kid right now.
Author's Response: Thank you, oh my! I am beaming right now.rnrnAnd yeah, I hope to have fun with Max!
Date: 08/01/11 04:27 pm Title: Continued Progressions
Who would've thought! Excellent!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 08/01/11 04:12 pm Title: Continued Progressions
Oh wow, that was so hot! And it was very meaningful for the development of their relationship too! I really enjoyed this chapter, thank you so much for this update!
Author's Response: Ah, thank YOU so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: 07/31/11 03:59 am Title: Rewarded Persistence
Hehe, the quality wasn't lowered. This was a lovely chapter.
And that food sounded so delicious.
Author's Response: Thanks so much :)
Date: 07/15/11 10:01 pm Title: Rewarded Persistence
that was amazing! loved it =]
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 06/29/11 03:25 am Title: Rewarded Persistence
I thought this chapter was phenomenal. Better than ever. There are too many great parts to name, but I'll try. I loved the little scene with Bill going in to tell Moon she was still his favorite. I loved Tom calling the puppy 'ours'. I loved the restaurant scene and that last scene was super well done. I loved all of it. =)
Author's Response: Thanks, wow! That means a lot.
Date: 06/28/11 05:11 am Title: Recurring Hesitations
I love seeing how much they have grown and matured through out this story, and this chapter really highlights that.
Author's Response: Thank you.
Date: 06/28/11 04:59 am Title: Anticipated Confessions
Great chapter. I'm so pleased I have another chapter to read too!
Author's Response: Thanks a lot! haha :)
Date: 06/25/11 11:54 am Title: Rewarded Persistence
Hooray! I was happy to see a virtually tension free chapter. I cannot wait until the opening!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 06/22/11 10:50 pm Title: Rewarded Persistence
ooh yay! fast update! mm, sexy time, and doggie! this was very satisfying after all the buildup :)
just a small thing I noticed, there were a few dangling verbs, like in "instead, he slips the chains out from the belt loops in Bill’s pants, then working them down until their waistband is around his creamy thighs." it sounds a little strange, because the "ing" gives the assumption that it is being done while something else happens, but nothing else does happen...well, if you didn't have the "then" it would be okay, as well, but as it is it would be better as "works." yah, not a big deal, just I noticed it a couple times. :) I don't mean to beat you up, I LOVE this story!
Author's Response: Ah, thanks for that! I sometimes forget about the whole dangling verbs rule because it's not usually something I really notice in other people's writing. I'll fix it!
Date: 06/22/11 06:19 pm Title: Recurring Hesitations
OHMYGOD TWO UPDATES?!
This IS exciting :3 And thank fuck I can finally read this in peace. Exams are behind me and for now I'm in the country with a bit of time to myself.
Anyway, this was gorgeous! You already know I'm a total sucker for your writing. It's flawless as far as I'm concerned and I always always enjoy reading it. And I just love the dynamics of these two, often I'm on edge just wondering if they're gonna explode and beat each other up or explode and beat each other ~off~. Oh you are such a tease *___*
But in the best of ways. Definitely in the very best of ways. Please never stop writing, because I think we should get married or summin so I can forever swoon over your works. Or whatever, I can just swoon from afar xD
*luvs all over ths fic*
Author's Response: EEEEEEE! You make me so, so happy! Thank you! I would love to court you, hahaha. Your reviews are the best. Thanks again!