Date: 02/12/26 09:29 pm Title: Said he'd take a look at my palm
Unghhh the “lick you out” part *lipbite* Tom rimming Bill is only the hottest thing that exists next to him bending him over / taking him from behind so this was a home run especially with the excellent electrical tension as a cherry on top AND the fact that there IS a porny sequel posted living up to expectations- oh yeah!
Date: 09/29/24 10:38 pm Title: Said he'd take a look at my palm
I am a Chinese fan who came a bit late. Discovering this website is the happiest thing for me in recent years. Reading this story is undoubtedly a pleasure! Thank you for your story. d84;a039;
Date: 02/13/16 01:18 pm Title: Said he'd take a look at my palm
The first time I read this I thought Tom was just distracted because it's Bill and honestly how many of us wouldn't be. Now reading it and knowing the ending it's like so very obvious. Thanks for a great story.
Date: 05/14/15 04:48 pm Title: Said he'd take a look at my palm
omg it was amazing I just ajsjshhsgsfsbshs
Date: 01/13/14 04:51 am Title: Said he'd take a look at my palm
Aww damn this is soooo good!! i giggled the whole time!
Date: 08/26/13 05:26 pm Title: Said he'd take a look at my palm
Hahaha, that was hilarious and mischievous in a great way!! Love your characters, and the way Tom answers Bill's thoughts. Lol. Great little fic!! :)
Date: 08/16/12 10:02 am Title: Said he'd take a look at my palm
Why did this never get a porny sequel?!?! I swear I would've noticed it.
Author's Response: It got one! ;D I'm not sure links work in review replies but uh, there's my best shot at it.
Date: 07/06/12 10:03 pm Title: Said he'd take a look at my palm
omfg *dies*
Date: 05/09/12 03:16 am Title: Said he'd take a look at my palm
Great story! Makes things so much more fun when Tom can read Bill's mind. What a great talent to have during sexy times. ;D
Date: 02/27/12 05:45 am Title: Said he'd take a look at my palm
nice!
u should make a sequel to this!
Date: 01/05/12 11:36 am Title: Said he'd take a look at my palm
Omg! This is so great! Lol. Awesome job!
Date: 12/30/11 11:33 pm Title: Said he'd take a look at my palm
Porny sequal, deffinitely
Date: 11/17/11 08:04 am Title: Said he'd take a look at my palm
SEQUEL PLEASE!! Psychic Tom is epic! :D And I love Bill's dirty little mind
Date: 11/08/11 08:06 pm Title: Said he'd take a look at my palm
delicious! I Love it! and continuing would be great ;)
Date: 11/08/11 08:06 pm Title: Said he'd take a look at my palm
delicious! I Love it! and continuing would be great ;)
Date: 08/13/11 12:45 am Title: Said he'd take a look at my palm
SEQUEL OH GOD PLEASE
Date: 08/04/11 05:59 pm Title: Said he'd take a look at my palm
At last, a story that puts psychics in a positive light. This saucy little fic is a delight!
Date: 08/01/11 11:01 am Title: Said he'd take a look at my palm
SEQUEL! That was really awesome!
Date: 04/11/11 06:17 pm Title: Said he'd take a look at my palm
PORNY SEQUEL!!!!
Date: 01/16/11 05:04 pm Title: Said he'd take a look at my palm
i just find this story so cute! what if you make this a sort of series where theres lots of smut and stuff. there could be a plot line where tom is in a traveling circus type thing and he takes bill with him on tour without asking because he knows bill will be fine but bill is board all day so he jacks off himself and tom sences it and gets angry aand punished will by either not letting him cum or makeing him cum so much that it stops comeing out and he's delirous with the pleasure/pain of it all. you could also have some fun with vibrators... update soon!
