Date: 08/30/10 03:01 pm Title: Ch. 1: The monkey chased the Weasel
Oh dear. The petting zoo does not sound good. "Also, I intend on playing with you" Sounds really scary now!
Looking forward to more! :D
Date: 08/30/10 12:35 am Title: Ch. 1: The monkey chased the Weasel
Wow-what the hell is poor Bill gonna do?! Hope he get's out of this mess real quick.
Author's Response: I'm afraid Bill will be finding some more trouble before he gets out of any of this. But it should be quite an interesting journey!! XD thanks for reviewing!
Date: 08/29/10 07:37 pm Title: Intro: All around the Mulberry Bush.
Oh wow! I really like this fic. I can't wait till you up date again I really want to know what the hell this "Zoo" is. So is nobody looking for him? Like his friend or people at school?
Author's Response: *zips lips* don't worry it'll all be explained soon!! ;) I'm glad you like it!
Date: 08/29/10 06:13 pm Title: Ch. 1: The monkey chased the Weasel
Ah! I wonder what the Zoo is, and what will happen to Bill when he goes there. :/ *waits for an update*
Author's Response: *zips lips* In due time, in due time!! :D I'll get right back to writing this one!!
Date: 08/29/10 06:07 pm Title: Intro: All around the Mulberry Bush.
Great start!
Author's Response: thanks!
Date: 08/23/10 04:54 pm Title: Intro: All around the Mulberry Bush.
Hmmm...bill gets bought by tom i assume who thinks hes a female at first...thats all i got so far, but i like this story.its edgy
Author's Response: Actually, you're half right. So I guess you'll have to be surprised. I'm glad you like it so far! :D
Date: 08/16/10 12:11 am Title: Intro: All around the Mulberry Bush.
Oh, very good start! I don't know what add to the plot since I dont know where this is going. But I love when Bill is sumussive/abused or whatever and then someone comes save him! (Tom) from a pervy moment. If you know what I mean ;)
There will be more rough Jost it seems? I hope! haha
Also, not trying to be rude, but you shoulnd't wait until your story gets a certain number of reviews, some people, read it, likes it and wait until more chapters are posted to read or even comment, that doesnt mean your story is not liked! So you shoulnd't worry about that!
Author's Response: Thanks, I know it was a short into but I wanted to see if the idea would catch. I'm not sure that Tom's going to live up to your expectations....maybe he'll have a change of heart...i dunno. Yes, Jost will still be in the fic, just not all up on Bill, so to speak. And I didn't find it rude, but it is what I'm doing for the first chapter here. It gives me time to absorb the comments and fix what needs to be tweaked.
Date: 08/15/10 05:57 am Title: Intro: All around the Mulberry Bush.
please write more :D
awesome start btw :]
Author's Response: Lol, more has been written just waiting on comments. :) thanks for reviewing!!!
Date: 08/15/10 02:58 am Title: Intro: All around the Mulberry Bush.
Wow! Great first chapter! Definately looking forward to reading more. :]
Author's Response: Awww thanks as soon as this makes 12 (10) comments I'll post chapter one!! I'm glad you liked it and thanks for the review! :D
Date: 08/14/10 09:37 pm Title: Intro: All around the Mulberry Bush.
I love mein Biu.
Author's Response: Awww tomi ily!!!!!!
Date: 08/14/10 07:56 pm Title: Intro: All around the Mulberry Bush.
BillKaulitzLove483 is perfectly fine (:
{Not to mention, that it might as well be my real name anyways XD}
{& sorry for leaving yet another comment. i feel a bit bad whenever i leave more than one that doesn't pertain to the chapter :o}
Author's Response: Its ok! Thanks so much for this, and I hope you enjoyed the story as wellyou know, so far....if this makes 10 reviews (besides your extras) I'll post sooner.
Date: 08/14/10 07:46 pm Title: Intro: All around the Mulberry Bush.
I wasn't sure if your, "can I use this?"
was a rhetorical question so I figured I would go ahead and leave another comment telling you:
O F . C O U R S E (:
-Samantha
Author's Response: LOL, I just did and gave you credit, is BillKaulitzLove483 right or would you prefer Sammi?
Date: 08/14/10 07:31 pm Title: Intro: All around the Mulberry Bush.
Awe, I feel a bit bad for Bill.
{hopefully some good will come down his road in the future. maybe in the form of a sexy man named tom xD}
I have one thing to say about Bill's father: He is one piece of work.
{*s a r c a s t i c*}
-which of course makes me go back to feeling sympathy for Bill-
I'll definitely be keeping watch for another chapter (:
Oh & btw, I threw this together.
I wasn't sure if you needed one or not, but oh well (:
{& as you can see, I'm by far not the best at editing, but I tried ^^}
-Samantha
Author's Response: HOLY PANTS!!! Can I use this? Thanks for the review but I'm in awe by your banner!!!! Thanks so much!
Date: 08/14/10 07:10 pm Title: Intro: All around the Mulberry Bush.
D:
Poor Bill.
Yay, Caqtus!
♥
Author's Response: Lol, thanks Wepwah!!! I b29; you too!!!! I hope you likes this!
Date: 08/14/10 06:44 pm Title: Intro: All around the Mulberry Bush.
LOLOL.. I lurve me some good ol' Bill sucking Jost scenes. XDD
Great job! Like I said, I like the wording in the first paragraph.. Reminds me of those southern books that doesn't annoy me half the time. That's a compliment btw XDD *is fail at giving compliments*
I'll be waiting for more!! *tracks*
-- JillyBilly
Author's Response: So, its not absolute fail? That's good. I hope I don't disappoint! Thanks for being my first review Jillybilly! :D Loves Aya-Papaya!