Date: 03/27/25 02:54 pm Title: Kissing it Better
I wish you wrote a sequel when Tom rims Bill also ehehe ;) Even if it’s been many years, I’m sure you still write amazing!
Date: 01/05/25 04:15 am Title: Kissing it Better
I am a Chinese fan who came a bit late. Discovering this website is the happiest thing for me in recent years. I used to use bookmarking as commenting. I must say that I have read and bookmarked this story. Reading this story is undoubtedly a pleasure! Today I plan to leave a comment. Thank you for your story. You are an amazing writer.
Date: 04/30/23 11:17 pm Title: Kissing it Better
I've mentioned this on other reviews: I came into the TH / THF fandom in Jan’22. The vast majority of fics I've read are quite old and I'm sure the authors have moved on (and probably wont even see new reviews), BUT I figure why not leave one anyway… I enjoyed this fic and wanted to say thank you for writing and sharing it!
Author's Response: Thank you for commenting! It's always lovely to get comments, even on older fics. I hope you have a blast reading these older stories!
Date: 11/14/19 08:12 am Title: Kissing it Better
i love this story!
Date: 06/03/15 02:29 pm Title: Kissing it Better
There was this one part: "Finally Tom put Bill's cock where it belonged, in his mouth,..."
And all I could think about was "Tom, do your fucking job! You're my assistant!"
Date: 08/01/13 02:37 pm Title: Kissing it Better
That was the hottest thing I've ever read in my entire life.
Author's Response: Wow! High praise! Thank you! And I'm glad you enjoyed it and thought it was hot.
Date: 01/21/13 10:28 pm Title: Kissing it Better
interesting indeed xD great job darlin! :D
Date: 07/08/11 06:20 am Title: Kissing it Better
This should be renamed INSTANT ORGASM.
Author's Response: Hee, really? That's great. :D Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 11/13/10 11:06 am Title: Kissing it Better
"Felt like magic to me, all right," ZOMG, I LOVE that! It's so goofy and naughty all at the same time!
LOVED this!
XD
Author's Response: I'm so happy you liked this -- "goofy and naughty," hee! Thanks for all of your wonderful comments. ♥
Date: 09/09/10 12:55 pm Title: Kissing it Better
Wow ! I love this fic, so cute ! You're a really good author, I look forward to read more from you in the future !
Author's Response: Thank you; I'm flattered! Thanks for all the lovely comments. :)
Date: 08/16/10 02:48 am Title: Kissing it Better
amazing story, really beautiful job. smut is definitely your thing!
Author's Response: Hee, thank you! I love reading smut; I'm glad you liked what I'm written! Thanks for reviewing, too. :)
Date: 08/15/10 05:35 pm Title: Kissing it Better
Great story with a super hot ending!
"And you are so not going to come first next time," Pretty sure Bill is thinking Yay! There's going to be a next time!
Loved it!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm happy to hear you enjoyed it! And yes, Bill definitely wasn't sorry when Tom said that. ;)
Date: 08/15/10 01:20 pm Title: Kissing it Better
Awww, that was so sappy and sweet, awwww. There was a nagging feeling of the whole idea being a bit far fetched, and there were some words which you repeated too much IMO, but somehow you pulled off this story pretty darn well. It was so cute to see Bill hurting himself and Tom being caring, which is a role I can never get tired of for Tom. I loved how they teased eachother and how you built up the chemistry between them, how Bill becomes more aware of what he's feeling. Hehe, and Tom giving a BJ is gold. Very well done. I enjoyed reading this and it was HOT! lol. The last line was particularily endearing. :)
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it! It might be far fetched but I think the idea is so delicious that I want to believe it anyway. ;) I never get tired of a caring Tom either! It makes me very happy that you enjoyed their teasing and the build-up. Thanks for a detailed review!
Date: 08/15/10 12:58 pm Title: Kissing it Better
Fuckin' A... I adore this. You did an amazing job!! This is one I will be coming back to read multiple times. ;)
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm thrilled you liked it and that you plan to read it again! I found the idea of Tom licking Bill (oh so innocently) just irresistible. I'm very happy you think I did it justice. :)
Date: 08/14/10 10:54 pm Title: Kissing it Better
Loved this! Very hot scenario with Tom licking Bill like this! *fans self*
Author's Response: I'm so happy you enjoyed it! Thanks for letting me know! :) When I saw the prompt I just had to write it, the idea of Tom licking Bill was too irresistible.
Date: 08/14/10 05:03 pm Title: Kissing it Better
Cute and oh so hot!!!
Author's Response: Hee, thanks! I'm thrilled it's worth three exclamation marks. :D
Date: 08/14/10 04:30 pm Title: Kissing it Better
*adores, adores, adores* I'm terrible at leaving lovely reviews like yours, but this was a bright spot in my morning. ♥
Author's Response: But this is a lovely review. :) I'm so happy it brightened your morning!
Date: 08/14/10 04:18 pm Title: Kissing it Better
Ohmygod. Loved it :D
Author's Response: Yay, I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)
Date: 08/14/10 03:58 pm Title: Kissing it Better
Huzzah for the kinkmeme! Very hot story, and I loved the last line...it's always nice to end on such a sweet note!
Author's Response: The kinkmeme has been amazing! Both the prompts and the stories. I'm happy to hear that you found this one hot. :) Thanks for the comment!
Date: 08/14/10 03:41 pm Title: Kissing it Better
I read this already in kinkmemes and I really liked this. Original in a positive way. And HOT! It was interesting to follow how it built up in them without never popping into consiousness. Nice one :)
Author's Response: I'm thrilled that you think this is original in a good way! And that you think it's hot, of course. It's fun to imagine them doing things like licking each other without realising (at first) how sexy it is. :) Thanks!