Date: 08/14/10 03:39 pm Title: Kissing it Better
That was so sweet. xDD It was very long, but I highly enjoyed it for that reason. I love the cute innocent finger licking in the beginning all the way to the cock. xD Your descriptions are impressive and so vividly written and helps the reader picture it perfectly. Without that excellent writing style I don't think your story would have come out so amazing as it did. ;D The plot made me smile, and melt... Tom does have gorgeous lips, Bill's lucky to have those }:3
Lovely fic. :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the, um, length *g* and that you thought the progression from innocence to cock was all right! Hee. I'm flattered by you saying all those nice things about my writing! Thank you! Bill is totally lucky to have Tom's lips... *smirks* Thanks for your lovely comment!
Date: 08/14/10 03:19 pm Title: Kissing it Better
hot hot hot sumty hotness! I loved it. and the end was very sweet, awww magic hehe ^^
Author's Response: I'm glad you found it hot! Sometimes I also think Tom's tongue is magical... *g* Thanks for commenting!
Date: 08/14/10 02:59 pm Title: Kissing it Better
... *giggles* :D
Woah, an amazing balance of sweetness and seduction!
Author's Response: I'm pleased to hear that you think so! Sweet and seductive is such a great combination for the twins, isn't it? :)
Date: 08/14/10 02:51 pm Title: Kissing it Better
wow *_* loved this
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed! :) Thanks for the comment!