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Reviewer: liulibai Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/20/25 09:29 pm Title: Tourbus Twister

I am a Chinese fan who came a bit late. Discovering this website is the happiest thing for me in recent years. I used to use bookmarking as commenting. I must say that I have read and bookmarked this story. Reading this story is undoubtedly a pleasure! Today I plan to leave a comment. Thank you for your story. You are an amazing writer.

Reviewer: kireinayorudakara Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/30/11 09:25 pm Title: Tourbus Twister

well. that's one way to do it. lol, loved all the littl 'bill's world' comments. aww, funny and cute with a hint of sexy thoughts at the end.

Reviewer: writtenaengel Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/27/11 12:17 am Title: Tourbus Twister

Oh my god, I was laughing so hard when I was reading this that I cried! I haven't laughed that hard in a while lol

Ah I'm adding this to my favs =)

Reviewer: zkmmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/05/11 10:58 am Title: Tourbus Twister

Oh wow.. That made me smile so much. Picturing what Bill did to Trivial Pursuit was hilarious. I suck at the sports questions too. And I totally wholeheartedly believe Twister is a sex game ;-)

Reviewer: muggle Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/28/11 06:09 pm Title: Tourbus Twister

Haha I have to say, when Bill threw out the Trivial Pursuit game, I laughed my ass off.

Author's Response: Glad I could make you laugh!

Reviewer: ChunyGurl Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/26/11 12:22 pm Title: Tourbus Twister

LoL I love how Bill says he gets to go first in everything since Tom was born first :D And Tom thinking its unfair.

Author's Response: I can so see Bill saying that, lol! It just sounds so much like him. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: EmilyExorsist Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/17/10 01:41 pm Title: Tourbus Twister

Ah, so perfectly wonderful! And my first read abroad haha. I'm in sunny California :D Although not so sunny as of now. Aw this was truly adorable! I love your Bill like this, all bubbly and lovely :)

Author's Response: Ooh, enjoy your holiday! ANd I'm glad you liked the story!

Reviewer: mischadevi Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/17/10 12:19 am Title: Tourbus Twister

LOL. How come I've never had a game of twister go so well? This was adorable!

Author's Response: If I was playing with Bill or Tom, this is definitely how I'd want it to go!

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/15/10 06:05 pm Title: Tourbus Twister

I love this fic! So fun and cute :)
This sentence was brilliant: “Sure we did!” Bill chirped,rewriting their entire childhood with that one statement.`` Seems like something Bill would say! And trying to paint the dogs’ toenails is so something I can picture him do!
Love this sentence too! ``Bill always went first. He said it was to make up for the fact that Tom had gotten to go first when they were born.``
I could continue with my favourite parts but it would take too long, basically I adore your writing!
I really enjoyed reading this, you’re awesome at writing funny and sweet little fic!

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it! (And I totally believe Bill paints the dogs' toenails.)

Reviewer: gryffin_draco Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/15/10 03:29 pm Title: Tourbus Twister

/ Awesome. Bill always knows what's best for Tom.

Author's Response: Too true. Especially when it involves pantslessness. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Kyaraa Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/15/10 12:52 pm Title: Tourbus Twister

O_____O
Twister is suddenly my favorite game!

Author's Response: Me too! How strange.

Reviewer: Ema21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/15/10 12:15 pm Title: Tourbus Twister

First off, I almost died laughing at

>>All he had to do was smile and nod and say things were “avant garde” (which apparently meant claiming women’s clothing was gender neutral) and Bill would be satisfied.

ROFL. I was laughing and snorting into my bicep to keep from waking my bf... I was reading this in bed. lol.

OMG, and

>>Just like Bill had never gotten veneers, despite the fact that there was ample photographic evidence to contradict him.

HAHAHAHHAHAHAHA!!!

OMG, there were SO MANY good parts! I can't even quote them without turning this review into an essay. lol. I havnt laughed that hard in a while. I absolutely love your writing. It's so funny, but at the same so real cuz you add in all their real life quirks and brotherlyness. Ok, so the ending probs wasn't part of the realness I mentioned, but I totally get that this was Humor and it was brilliant!!! Very good work. I'm in love with this fic, as well as many of your others. :)

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm so glad I could make you laugh!

Reviewer: Tassu Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/15/10 10:20 am Title: Tourbus Twister

Hahaha, I knew someone would turn the twister and other board games in a tourbus scenario into a fic, was just waiting for it! This was fun.

Author's Response: Tom was asking for it, really. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Billsexxxual Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/15/10 01:53 am Title: Tourbus Twister

Loooved it!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: i_is_anonymous Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/15/10 01:26 am Title: Tourbus Twister

That was so not PG you just didn't put in the sex bit. You little editor you! LOL

Author's Response: Haha...you caught me! Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Blue Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/14/10 11:42 pm Title: Tourbus Twister

This story was positively hilarious, and so cute. X) I love your funny twin stories. :D Now I want to watch that interview, but I can't find it. D:

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it! You can watch the interview here: http://www.dailymotion.com/video/xefku2_bravo-de-tom-reebok-photoshooting-i_lifestyle

Reviewer: Macbeth Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/14/10 10:03 pm Title: Tourbus Twister

This is amazing. It really is. It makes me incredibly happy.

Author's Response: Aw, I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: bobbit Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/14/10 08:48 pm Title: Tourbus Twister

I LOVE YOUR STORIES! NEVER STOP WRITING PLEASE!

Author's Response: Aw, thank you! As long as the twins keep being ridiculous/adorable, I don't think I'll be able to stop myself from writing.

Reviewer: AbnormalKidd Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/14/10 08:28 pm Title: Tourbus Twister

This made me very happy. Very happy indeed ^^

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: FairyCelt Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/14/10 06:37 pm Title: Tourbus Twister

After Tom's Reebok interview, I was hoping for some "Twister" fics, and this was just great! I really do love Bill's character is this, how he's both dramatic and cute as hell. And of course Tom's ever-suffering character was a great contrast. Loved this!

Author's Response: I think it's funny that I write Tom as ever-suffering, because I suspect that in real life he's much harder to put up with than Bill, lol! But I do love writing them this way. Thanks so much for reading!

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