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Reviewer: schlampe Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/14/10 05:38 pm Title: Tourbus Twister

AHHH, I wish you would have wrote out the sex! Would have been so yummy!

But this was funny, and I love the picture. Bill looks so ridiculous. @_@

Author's Response: Yeah, I wanted to keep it light and funny, instead of smutty. Ah, well...I'm glad you enjoyed it, and thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: elvisfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/14/10 05:06 pm Title: Tourbus Twister

i loved this! especially when bill threw trivial pursuit in the trash without a word.

Author's Response: That's what I fee like doing every time I land on the sports category, lol! Glad you enjoyed the story, and thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: lovemykaila Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/14/10 04:32 pm Title: Tourbus Twister

Aaahah I love it :D
What interview was it?

Author's Response: You can see it here: http://www.dailymotion.com/video/xefku2_bravo-de-tom-reebok-photoshooting-i_lifestyle

Reviewer: xalisonbx Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/14/10 02:21 pm Title: Tourbus Twister

Quick question, you spelt coloured in two different ways thoughout the story. I was just wondering if you were actually British or not...

Great story though, I found the ending very sweet. It made me smile :]

Author's Response: Haha...I didn't even notice! I'm American, but I like in the UK, and I've set my spellcheck on Word to British spellings (because I need to use them for school). Normally when I'm writing these stories I stick with the American spellings, though. Spellcheck must have snuck in and changed some on me! I'm glad you liked the story, despite my wonky spelling!

Reviewer: Lady Tiadalma Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/14/10 02:15 pm Title: Tourbus Twister

I haven't played Twister in ages, but I think I may just go buy it. I have a certain "friend" that I wouldn't mind playing with, and if it turns out anything like this, it'll certainly be worth the few dollars spent. Thanks for the inspiration!



Author's Response: LOL, good luck with that! And thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Atlantis Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/14/10 01:52 pm Title: Tourbus Twister

Love this! So cute and funny! Love how you wrote their relationship.
So many great lines, I don't have enough room to quote them all. :p

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: shimmery Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/14/10 01:48 pm Title: Tourbus Twister

Yay for having this idea written in fanfic. Seriously, 2 boys exclusively sharing their bus and play twister, what else can happen?
I love cheery bill with tom wrapped around his little finger. Great job!

Author's Response: I see no other possible outcome. Thanks so much for reading!

Reviewer: Melluransa Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/14/10 01:23 pm Title: Tourbus Twister

You're one of my favorite authors because you take all the opportunities the twins give and make fics out of them. I just watched the interview with Tom that inspired this story and I'd thought, "Hm, someone's gonna make a fic of this..." And you did! That's why I love you.

I laughed at several lines in this story! The best part was when Bill threw Trivial Pursuit away. There are a lot of other funny lines too, I liked them all. The humorous way you depict Bill's little eccentricities and quirks is highly entertaining!

Author's Response: Aw, I'm glad you enjoyed it! I definitely can't help myself with some of the things the twins say...this one in particular was impossible to resist. I actually had a dream about it last night! (obviously I'm obsessed)

Reviewer: Katanasai Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/14/10 01:14 pm Title: Tourbus Twister

Absolutely cute. :) Good job! I needed a small laugh today, and I certainly got it from this! Thank you.

Author's Response: Glad I could make you laugh!

Reviewer: Amdee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/14/10 01:04 pm Title: Tourbus Twister

I knew I could count on you!!! Oh my, this was so hysterical and cute. "Looks like a sex game" made me crack up so bad. I wonder if there was a single twincester who didn't think the same at the moment they heard the word Twister from Tom's mouth. I knew this was going to happen. Thank you for making my day! :)

Author's Response: I don't think there's any way to interpret 'I play twister with my brother when we're alone on our candlelit tourbus' that ISN'T dirty. So glad you enjoyed the story, and thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: fyredancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/14/10 01:03 pm Title: Tourbus Twister

This? Is priceless. And what a perfect photo for the banner. >:D Bendy Bill!

Author's Response: Before I even started on the story, I knew I had to use that picture for the banner. I don't even really understand the way his leg is bending in it, and yet he looks irresistible! Thus is the power of Bill, I suppose.

Reviewer: SephoraChise Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/14/10 12:46 pm Title: Tourbus Twister

I love that picture. It's like Bill is saying, "Excuse me while I twist my supermodel legs into the most alluring pose possible while I have the most nonchalant expression on my face!"

Author's Response: That picture is amazing--I'm so glad I finally wrote a story I could use it for!

Reviewer: dubistheilig Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/14/10 12:40 pm Title: Tourbus Twister

I'd love to see them play that *___*

But isn't it meant to be Tourbus Twister? xD it's called Toubus ^^ or have I misunerstood xD

Author's Response: Haha, thanks for catching that! I always have a typo or two, but man! It's embarrassing to have it right there in the title!

Reviewer: LuneBleue Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/14/10 12:09 pm Title: Tourbus Twister

Haha Billa is always right =D

Author's Response: Poor Tom...thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Annalas Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/14/10 11:23 am Title: Tourbus Twister

*giggles* Is this for the kinkmeme? It's wonderful! ^^

Author's Response: It wasn't actually...just inspired by some random discussion of this interview over on th_apex. Thanks for reading, and I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Ladite Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/14/10 11:21 am Title: Tourbus Twister

xD Loved it!

xx

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: xXfaithXx Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/14/10 10:46 am Title: Tourbus Twister

i just commented on your LJ about this, but i'll say it again...

THIS IS AMAZING!
i loved it so much!
thank you for writing this! *hugs*

Author's Response: Ooh, double comments are always appreciated! I'm so glad you enjoyed the story!

Reviewer: Maria Dane-Edwards Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/14/10 10:40 am Title: Tourbus Twister

Oh, the little devil planned this :) Good job, and thanks for taking up the Twister hint *GGG* When I heard Tom mention it, I thought there would no challenge for the twins to play that game, but even long limbs can get helplessly/deliciously entangled :D *Maria

Author's Response: I just couldn't resist myself when I heard Tom say that! Thanks so much for reading, and reviewing!

Reviewer: MicroNinjaMonkey Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/14/10 09:25 am Title: Tourbus Twister

You, are awesome! (: It's funny I was telling a friend a week or so ago that I'd write one for her about playing twister xD But you have now done it, and done such an amazing job that I think I'll put it out of my mind. So anyways, that was like, awesome! :D Bill's so cute, all enthusiastic and changing their childhood xD Also, sexy sexy ending ;D

Author's Response: Oh, you should still write yours! There can never be enough twister fics, I'm sure! I'm glad you enjoyed it, though, and thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Icarus Defiled Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/14/10 09:15 am Title: Tourbus Twister

Oh, I loved this so much. I can't actually come up with words to convey my feelings for Bill when he is written like this, so I am just going to stop babbling and go back to read this again. Happy twin moments are such a rarity, and I love Tom's reaction to being a part of Bill's little world.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it!

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