Date: 09/18/08 08:40 pm Title: Chapter twelve.
Interesting. You've made some rather sudden and dramatic character changes recently involvint Helena and Andi. While it's understandable that they may have fallen in love with him over the ten years you should have made that clearer.
Oh well.
I'm glad Andi acted nobely.
Author's Response: You see, I couldn't really have made this a novel for evident reasons of time and space: for that a book is needed, and I wouldn't want to bore my readers with long and detailed chapters, for the main thing in this story is the relationship between Bill and Tom. Andi's behavior was about redemption- I've read about it in the book that had inspired me to write this, and it's based on religion, or love, or even fear of what's to come (like coscience and the supreme -God's- judgement), so that was the reason for Andreas' change behavior; instead, I've said quickly that the two, as for Helena and Bill, had got to 'love' and respect each other, but it was evident that Helena had only Bill, while the man had Tom in his heart ;) I hope it's clearer now :) I should probably have said this because maybe without analyzing the text it was difficult to comprehend :/ thank you for the idea, I will do it now ^^
Date: 09/18/08 02:51 pm Title: Chapter twelve.
What a beautiful chapt again!!! I like Andreas there:-) It is so sweet: he hopelessly in love with Bill, and because of it, he tries to help him!! But I feel sorry Bill!! I really hope thet he can see his son again!! And what will happen with Bill`s kingdom without a leader??
Author's Response: I bet he doesn't really care neither about the kingdom nor about the rest, when he's about to have the chance to be happy forever with his love ;) thanks for reading another chapter yet again <3
Date: 09/18/08 09:17 am Title: Chapter twelve.
Only one? That ain't much xD Great chapter :D I hope you continue soon ^^
xx Chi
Author's Response: Everything comes to an end :) thanks ^^
Date: 09/18/08 03:14 am Title: Chapter twelve.
OMG O_O Love it. Just love it.
Author's Response: Thank you <3
Date: 09/17/08 11:13 pm Title: Chapter twelve.
Aw! I Love this story!!!
It's soooooo cute!
And sad!!
But really good!
Update again soon please?
Author's Response: I definitely will :D thank you ^^
Date: 09/17/08 09:42 pm Title: Chapter twelve.
only one more?!?!
Author's Response: *sigh* yes :) why, haven't you enjoyed the past 12 ones? ;P thanks ^^
Date: 09/17/08 07:12 pm Title: Chapter twelve.
OH.MY.GOD. I'm...melting on the spot to say the least. I don't think I will be able to give you the good long review you deserve, but well, you will have to forgive me, because right now my mind went blank (and I had soo many things to say). I think it's the first time I'm going to trust an "in love with Bill but knowing that he won't ever get him because Tom's there" Andi. I still don't know why. So only one more chapter? I'll be so sad when this finishes, but then again if you keep it going with no plot, it becomes confusing, boring and utterly pointless. I'd be happy to get a oneshot of their new life after their runaway, anyway.
You know, I've been in love with this fic from the very first chapter, so I'm more than proud to have a chapter (more, actually, I think) dedicated to me.
Today granny's brownie's all for you. Oh, and seems that in the end I managed to write a propper review.
Author's Response: Yes, you did! :D A very lovely one <3 I adore all your reviews, they're so special and always give me motivation *_* I'll think about the oneshot, but no sequel is planned :( though I'm honoured you've really liked this from the start ;) thank you :D
Date: 09/17/08 06:49 pm Title: Chapter twelve.
OMG one more chapter omg wow i cnt beleave Andreas was so nice lolz and damn helena is a bitch
Author's Response: Helena is a betrayed woman who goes crazy, like obvious, and Andreas had crossed paths with redemption ;) thank you ^^
Date: 09/17/08 06:24 pm Title: Chapter twelve.
Oh god, I love Andreas so very much right now. Wonderful chapter, I'm so excited for the rest!
Author's Response: Thank you! :D you see, Andreas crossed paths with what is called redemption ;) or, rather, fear of what's to come in the future, more like the 'exam' you'll have with your coscience one day :)
Date: 09/17/08 04:57 pm Title: Chapter twelve.
poor bill
Author's Response: D: you'll be happy for him soon ;)
Date: 09/17/08 04:35 pm Title: Chapter twelve.
AHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!! *runs around in circles*
Author's Response: *stop you* thankie :D *blows kiss and lets you run XD*
Date: 09/17/08 04:22 pm Title: Chapter twelve.
YEAH! Ur still my hero!! XD
Author's Response: I bet! ;)
Date: 09/17/08 04:15 pm Title: Chapter twelve.
*gasp* Oh, no! I'm glad Andreas told Bill what was going on. However, it sucks that Bill won't be able to see his kids again. I guess that's the price he has to pay to save the love of his life =] I hope everything works out okay!
Author's Response: Maybe it will ^^ keep reading ;) thanks.
Date: 09/17/08 03:56 pm Title: Chapter twelve.
YAY! Andreas is good!!!!! ^^
Author's Response: Redemption ^^ thanks ;)
Date: 09/17/08 03:50 pm Title: Chapter twelve.
Oh my GOD!
I cant wait to see how this ends!
I hope it'll be happy!!
Author's Response: Indeed :D omg you're the shakespeare one <3 I love you <3 thanks ^^
Date: 09/17/08 09:48 am Title: Chapter eleven.
Wow that was really sweet. The way they said how much they missed each other. Really touching, I could almost cry with Bill when he said that he didn't thought that he would she Tom again. *dreamy look*
To bad Helena find out. I short of get why see reacted that way. Nobody likes to be betrayed like that. But that doesn't mean I like her, definitely not when she is going to do something about it all though I knew she would, it's a natural reaction, I think. But what is the nameless going to do. He doesn't sound like a nice one to me O_o
So can't wait to see what's going to happened so pretty please update soon(A)
Author's Response: I talked about him a few chapters ago, I think it'd be good if you read what's his history again to understand what's to come ;) I'll update later tonight, and you'll finally find out what happens :D thanks, keep reading ^^
Date: 09/15/08 03:36 pm Title: Prologue.
*screams with anguish* Ohhhhhh! D:
Don't do eeeeeet. LET THEM RIDE HAPPILY INTO THE SUNSET, I BEG YOU! D:
Author's Response: What if it's the dawn? ;)
Date: 09/14/08 05:41 pm Title: Prologue.
YAY!! You said yeeees!! *jumps around clapping like Bill with his jumbi* I'm so gonna do something about it, just wait and see.
Author's Response: Like what? :P I LOOOOVE surprises ;)
Date: 09/14/08 11:16 am Title: Chapter eleven.
Wow!
I loved this chappie, it was too sweet!
But...Is Helena gnna ruin everythin?? I hope not!
Author's Response: Read on to find out! ;D *me evil* eheh! Thanks ^^
Date: 09/13/08 09:07 pm Title: Chapter eleven.
Holy shit, I should praise you, girl. Really, now that they are back together (eventually!!) and everything should be right you just come with a twist on the plot when it seemed it was the happy "we live as lovers forever and ever" ending.
Now, where did I leave my cookie jar? Lemme find it, because I so need to give you the whole jar *finds cookie jar and gives it sheepishly* I...*blushes* I think I've asked you this like seven times before, but anyway, will you marry me? because right now I love you so much. *blushes insanely again*
Jeez, we have to wait so much for new chappies, but it's definitely worth the while. I knew I made no mistake by favoriting this loooooong time ago. Hope to see more of this soon, and just so that you know, if you don't find the way to get rid of Helena, I can just come and kill her with my superpowers.
Author's Response: *_* omg, I've melted on the ground - this is my shadow talking *_* really, THANK YOU ENDLESSLY for this heart-melting-sugar-coated review <3 I'll gladly do with your superpowers btw! ;) no worries for now, I've got the remaining chapters ready so I won't make you wait long for updates :D though there isn't much left of this... and *munches cookie* thanks for the sweets X3 YES I'LL MARRY YOU! *O* thanks again <3