Date: 03/28/09 01:45 pm Title: Chapter eight.
oh god. :O bill's gottta marry a city?! ;D lol sorry, I had too. :P But what Bill and Tom were doing, the cuddling at the end, and how Tom thought he had lied to bill. Ohhh, it broke my heart. Haha :P i love this(:
Author's Response: Aww thankies! :)
Date: 03/28/09 01:40 pm Title: Chapter seven.
oh mah gaahh. :O (: i'm like really giddy right now! :D You'll be mine forever...Awww! I loved that line(: The whole last part of this chapter was soooo sweet(: aww. :D
Author's Response: Yeeeah, we're all sappy deep down! ;) thanks..!
Date: 03/27/09 04:47 pm Title: Chapter six.
chinga ma durgen. >:P i'm not liking Jorg too much right now, but, I really liked the fact that he was actually being nice to Bill! :D I just hope that they get to stay together--Tom and Bill, I mean! And the whole 'Andreas' thing, and how their relastionship is going to change is a little sketchy--I'm not so sure I like it. [I got sketchy off of Rob&Big ;D]
Author's Response: Aww I love how intrigued with the plot you are! :) Thanks for reading so far. ;)
Date: 03/27/09 04:40 pm Title: Chapter five.
omfg. they kissed. they kissed. :D I'm happy nau! ^__^
Author's Response: Ohh that's good! :)
Date: 03/27/09 04:29 pm Title: Chapter four.
i like this. I luff this. It's interesting, and different.
Author's Response: Aww, thankies! :)
Date: 03/27/09 04:16 pm Title: Chapter three.
even though the story is already finished, and it really doesn't matter what I say, buuuut, I'd enjoy seeing Tom and Andreas in some kind of action together, if ya catch mahh drift. *raises eyebrows repeatedly* Bahahaa. Yeah, I'm a sucker for Tom/Andreas pairings. :P This is good, and it's sweet how Bill got excited over the little place thingy. :D
Author's Response: I agree with you, Tom/Andreas is hot! You can read many stories with that pairing on this site, just go through the Search mode and put that pairing in your research. :) Unfortunately I had to make him the bad character in this story, but oh well. Tom/Bill is still there! ;)
Date: 03/27/09 04:09 pm Title: Chapter two.
i liked this one, it was cute. ^_^ I guess I can't say much yet, so can't wait til I read the next chapter. ;D
Author's Response: Eheh thanks. :)
Date: 03/27/09 04:05 pm Title: Chapter one.
I couldn't help, but, giggle when it said what Bill was wearing--I could actually put those words with that body. xD I really like this! I've never read a story on here like this, and I luff the fact that it's like one of those old books of some sort like that. I'm not sure how to explain it, though. o.O
Author's Response: Aww but I guess I got what you meant, and it's lovely! :) thanks!
Date: 03/21/09 01:57 pm Title: Chapter thirteen.
oh, wow!
what a truly amazing story!
thank you so much for sharing!
Author's Response: And thank you so much for reading and reviewing. :)
Date: 02/03/09 01:35 am Title: Chapter one.
Hmm... I wonder if Tom has dreadlocks
in this story.... Awesome story by the
way!!
Author's Response: You'll eventually find out. ;) Thankies big time! :D
Date: 02/03/09 01:23 am Title: Prologue.
Okay, the prologue was pretty tight man.
It gave me goosebumps when I started reading the whole thing. GREAT JOB MAN!!
Author's Response: Eheh, wow thank you a lot! :D
Date: 01/29/09 02:00 am Title: Chapter thirteen.
awwww
i loved it
it was super cute
i think you also ending it perfectly
anymore and it could've ended badly
happy ever after...just like we all want!
Author's Response: Awee thank you very much darling, this means a lot for me, it's my first real story. :)
Date: 12/03/08 05:07 pm Title: Prologue.
This would be a perfect introduction to a really old novel. And it's true; really old novels dont' have place names, at the very least. Great intro!
Author's Response: Omg *blush* thank you so much :) This is my very first story, so it means a lot!
Date: 11/04/08 05:54 pm Title: Prologue.
YAY ! i loved it !
*shanks helena*
bbbbbitch .
but billa and tomi are so cute (:
Author's Response: Hey thank you a lot :)
Date: 09/24/08 11:53 pm Title: Chapter thirteen.
aw, cute!
I loved it. >
Author's Response: Thank you very much :D
Date: 09/22/08 06:12 pm Title: Chapter thirteen.
dude!!!!! what?!?!? i mean that story was overly awesome!!!! but there has to be a sequel... Oh come on!
Author's Response: This is why I told it before ;) I can't afford writing a sequel, for my time is now so little to dedicate to another story :( school's fault! But thank you anyway for reading it :D
Date: 09/20/08 11:43 pm Title: Chapter thirteen.
this story was awesome!! it was absolutely beautiful.
Author's Response: Why thank you so much :D
Date: 09/20/08 11:22 am Title: Chapter thirteen.
Sad to see this end, but I liked the ending.
It was sad that Bill had to leave his family to be happy himself but I'm sure they are going to be fine.
To bad there isn't going to be a sequel I think there would be a lot to write over but that would be a completely different part so you could leave it to the imagination ;-)
So nicely done *applause* I so enjoyed reading this story and I love to read more from you to ^^
Author's Response: Aww, thank you ^^ I'm glad you understand my no-will to do a sequel, for I think it'd only overdo the story :) and I'd be also happy if you checked out more from me too :D thanks again <3
Date: 09/20/08 11:15 am Title: Chapter twelve.
Missed two chapters ^^ I thought i'll review all of them then :-p
I can say that I adored this story and I'll like to congratulate you with this great writing^^
I was surprised with Andreas change in character. First I didn't like him but now he just saved them. ;-)
Author's Response: Aww, you're sweet <3 you'll read about Andreas in the next chapter ;) thanks ^^
Date: 09/20/08 10:21 am Title: Chapter thirteen.
So very-very sweet!!! But it`s a pity that finisches:´-( But thank you again for the 14 wonderful chapter, full of love, romantic feelings, intrigues, danger and two adorable boys, who finally live together!! But what did you mean that Bill live as a "happy family man?" I`m cuorios, like always;-)And I like the character notes on top:-)
I`m looking forward your other fics!!
Author's Response: Aww, thank you :) I thought I'd see you again in this last review ;) And I'm pretty sad about it, because now I won't see your reviews for a while I think :( unless you wanna check out my other stories :P about the 'family man', means his family now is Tom ;) he left behind his other, betraying family to build another, loveful one. Thanks for all, really. <3