Date: 02/09/11 09:28 pm Title: Chapter 4
ook so i i have a confessoon: what im about to but here isnt a review- or 'comment'- about the story. Its a reply to ur reply to my comment (man thats a mouth full lol.
1st: you love me? awwwww thanks it feels good 2 be loved - all my friends r paired off and being lovy with their bfs/gfs cause its so close 2 hearts/condom day =/
2nd. yeah i know my comments can be overwhelming - iv had a few ppl not respond to them at all, its so frustrating! i just stop commenting- but i hope u mean well.
3. yessssss add the next chapter, i garentee u morethan just me will readit.... but it would be nice 2 have a chapter posted in my honor hinhint haha
last: sorry 2 get u all excited about someone reviewing ur story when their not. idk where else 2 put this. u cant send messages or leave pg comments on here.... happy hearts day/national condom day if u dont get this til then =)
Author's Response: Awwww Thanks! I hope you had a wonderful condom/heart/the day to make singles feel like shit/valentines day. :)) Thank you for the comment to my comment. (That was a mouthful!) 1. Yes I love you. Inwas alone while all by bffs are with boyfriends and girlfriends and stuff too, so don't feel bad. (Bill was at an interview lmfao jk) 2. The comment was NOT overwhelming it was entertaining and thoughtful so I LOVED IT. It was great to see what my reading see, feel, and think. :)) 3. I will update asap (by this friday 2/18) just for you as my valentines present/being an awesome reading present to you! I'll even put a dedication and everything! I might even make you a banner (I'll try. I don't have that much time on my hands =/)rnlast: No worries I liked it! Happy valentines and condom day and stuff to you too!!!
Date: 11/27/10 12:13 pm Title: Chapter 3
comment one: you started college? congrats! where are you studying- and i mean the in the least creepy way possible-
comment: ugh she's kind of annoyinh now. he sent a car for you just shut up and be thankful. you wernt too scared to go half way round the world by your self you shouldnt think the worst everytime you see someone.
comment 3: theeeere ya go. i guess the reason shes was acting so was she wanted to see him
comment4: oooook. so uh... just forget my asking if she was talking to herself-i got my anser lol
comment5: nah dont feel bad for thinking mean thoughts at the bitching girl. she shouldnt assume your a whore- its probly just cause shes pretty and shes one.
comment6: gggr he's not creepy. you the one examining his eyes- YOUR creepy lol
comment7: i find it funny she wants people to thinkwell of her when she always thinks the worst of everyone first time she meets them
comment8: wow i take it back maybe the guy really is creepy... that or has a dark sense of hummer
comment9: didnt he ask her out? isnt that a pretty good sign that he likes her?
comment10: let me guess- the roomate only asked who she slept with cause she like talor and thinks thats who she was with that night? bitter bitch
comment11:'Racheal doesn’t seem that easy. Guess I was wrong.' yeah maybe but I was right lol
comment12..... you mean to tell me bill i s just walking around germany?..... and his pants are TIGHTER than last time? good grief
comment13: where is tayler? i thought he was still sitting with her... he left?
comment14: awwww someone likes bill ;)
comment15:... im confuse-ed
comment16: both twins huh?.... get it! lol
Author's Response: OMG! I Think I LOVE you! When I first saw all the comments I was like 'Woah' But I'm so glad you commented! It was so funny!!!!!!! I LOVE YOU for your comments they are almost better the 'constructive criticism', because I know first hand what you think and how to fix it. lmfao! you are awesome! Thanks alot. I wrote this story out of fun a LONG time ago so I am currently trying to edit it to make it a little better but I think I'm going to just put what I have for you! I know it's a bit unrealistic at times, but hey, a girl can dream right?rnrnThanks rnrnChinaxxdoll
Date: 11/27/10 11:39 am Title: Chapter 2
comment: ugh i know i have the same problem withmy parents only i cant live up to my older twin brothers ugh
comment2: why didnt she just take the money with her
comment3: half german half italian? hot
comment4: he saved his number as call and find out? hahahaha
comment5: oh wait i get it- if he put his number she could look up who he is or her friends would know. smart.
comment 6: poor tom... but if he wore toms clothes wouldnt people mug him thinking he was tom?
comment7: i thought the guys said they wanted to do songs in english and it was their idea? .... eh then again it could have been a cover up. it would be offensive if they said they didnt want to.
comment8: 'third talent'? whats her first two? ... english and german?
comment9: whtas this 'tax' they keep talking about.... is it a german thing?
comment 10: somethings suspicious about tayler...
comment11: would she quit calling him ;the creepy gay guy' already? shesh...
comment12: im confused whos she talking to?... herself?
comment13: wait ait wait wait wait.... someone tried to kill her? yikes
comment14: if he has ten minutes why cant he take a call?...... or right cause hes bill. itd be more like 20
comment15: bill needs to stop crying wolf or he's going to pass out and no one will come
comment16: of course shes confused. shes calling a stranger for a ride. and why would she trust you? she met you once and ya followed her
comment17: gustavs the only one who said anything helpful. how did he get ll that from a short message? oh yeah cause he's pro... TEAM GUSTAV!
comment; i alreadty wrote my 'review' when i saw your kinly sex thing so i cant make a joke huh..... psh to hell with that 'multibles'- think about it.... haha
Date: 11/27/10 11:01 am Title: Chapter 1
warning: i dont really do 'reviews' i leave comments. hey tend to be very long and deatailed so if thy annoy you tell me and ill stop..
comment one: oh god i hate that. when people tell me there from someone else im nice about it, i dont stare. but you say your american and suddenly you have 6 heads
comment two: why does it matter that she girls taller and weighs bit more?.... insecure?
comment3: 'Dill Cowshitz!" niiice haha
comment4: someone found bill
comment5: oh Bill asking 'dont you want my autograph?' is so vein. Plus didnt he want to be left alone anyway?
comment6: i wonder how she doesnt know who the boys are... weird
comment7: it's ok hun- bill looks better in skinny jeans than all of us
comment8: He matrixed! haha
commet9: 'When did gay guy's start hitting on women?' lmao
comment10: in every story bill gets all hyped up over things like a lil girl lol
comment11: he's going to go see her even if he gets mobbed?uh yeah that sounds a bit obsessive to me.....and where the hell is the head of security in all this??!
Date: 10/26/10 06:05 pm Title: Chapter 4
I agree that this chapter is fun and funny :D
*coughs* About the 'not the real Bill' issue, I have to say my opinion - I hope you don't mind ^^ I'll try to be nice, still ;) But, I have to warn you that it will be long... XD
It is true that none of us know the real Bill (or the other band members) that's why when we write we use our own interpretation and imagination to create their character - and that will be different for each of us.
But, again we have to remember that we are writing fanfiction - which mean we are writing about characters who are actually exist. And that is the tricky part. If we write them too different from their real self, people will start to complain that we don't portray them right. But, the problem is that we don't know them that well to write that accurately correct. That is the main issue about creating fanfiction.
I think the solution is that you have to trust your own instinct about how to balance realism and imagination. I'm sure you have some image in your head about how Bill is from interviews, concerts and Tokio Hotel TV etc. You can just stick with that image and add some things here and there from your imagination to create a believable character.
I think that is all for now :) I hope you don't mind my long ramble XD
So far I like your story ^^
Author's Response: I can never be angry with your long ramble, and its not rambling at all it is actually helpful. Whether you belive it or not. :) I appreciate your comment, honey. That is what I will do ( "You can just stick with that image and add some things here and there from your imagination to create a believable character") To make it more believeable. Maybe, I got a little defensive about the whole "real Bill" thing, because thats just who I am. Hahaha! But no matter the review I keep then all in mind. (That is why it is taking so long to update,plus being in college) rnrnWell thanks for your review Love! ^^rnrn
Date: 10/14/10 09:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
poor georg being teased by the twins... which reminds me I have part of hanna's and georg's story written but i'm not so sure about the beginning part... read it over?
Author's Response: Yeah, Email it to me Hun
Date: 10/12/10 11:45 am Title: Chapter 4
BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! woooow... erm... o-kay then
Author's Response: hahahahaaa Yep yep yep
Date: 10/11/10 11:22 pm Title: Chapter 4
dude, that is so true... it is fun to be mean in the mornings.... unless you're being mean to your mother who desn't quite get that some people JUST AREN'T morning people.... anyway!!!!! great job, more soon!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: hahahahahahaaa! Yeah mother's don't understand that just because they're morning people doesn't mean you are hahahahaa I will thank you LOVE!
Date: 10/11/10 07:57 pm Title: Chapter 4
Hhahah well either way I find this enjoyable and noone really knows what Bill is like we can all just assume(sp?) BUt yeah I like this makes me laugh
Author's Response: Thanks! that was my goal to make you all smile! And I'm a bad speller too but I believe you spelled it correctly sweety.
Date: 10/11/10 07:37 pm Title: Chapter 2
Hahaha I love it!!! Please,post more soon!
Author's Response: I defiantly will honey!
Date: 10/11/10 05:50 pm Title: Chapter 4
i liked this can't wait for the next, by the way since i suck at throwing i going to hand you a stone jk (3
Author's Response: AAAAWWWWW! Thank you love for not hurting me! I will update for you love
Date: 09/30/10 05:52 pm Title: Chapter 3
i like this, please continue!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I will try, but I am on a writer's block because other reviewer's want me to change some things. Well will try to update soon! LOVE Ya!
Date: 09/05/10 06:28 pm Title: Chapter 2
Sorry but the second chapter is a bit disapointing. It doesn't make much sense in some parts and Bill really doesn't act or think like the REAL Bill.
Author's Response: It's ok. If anything, Thank you for the honesty. :) Understand I wrote this story about 2 years ago, and is one of my worst stories. This is the only ine I had the courage to put up honestly! but I will go back and edit just for you Love!
Date: 09/05/10 06:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
I dont much like the first person POV because it often makes characters concieted. Angel is a little too perfect in her actions, she may be thinking she's normal in her head but you are counteracting the normal with her getting standing ovations and Bill going "OMG she GORGEOUS!"
BTW, work on your sentence structures.
Other than those issues you have a really good idea going here. Just work on it a little to lose the fake-ness...
Author's Response: Hey hey hey! :) Yea, I agree with the 1st person. I usually don't do it, but later in the story you find that she isn't as perfect as she lets on.
Date: 09/02/10 04:27 pm Title: Chapter 3
I like this story very much can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks! It's nice to have some positivity! I Love you Kcrose.
Date: 09/02/10 11:45 am Title: Chapter 3
birthday sex with the twins? wooow o-kay... pretty sure that Tom would enjoy that ;)... But anywho as I'm pretty sure you already know this I absolutely
Author's Response: True True! HAHAHA YES lot of wonderful Beautiful marvalous Kinky sex
Date: 09/02/10 04:19 am Title: Chapter 1
Nice for first chapter. Different.
Author's Response: Thank you love!
Date: 09/02/10 02:19 am Title: Chapter 1
someone's important son? lol
I like it so far^^ Just i think you might put a little remark of whose POV it is :)
Author's Response: Ok I will Honey! But I'm going to redo the second chapter when I have the chance! Thanks Angel
Author's Response: Ok I will Honey! But I'm going to redo the second chapter when I have the chance! Thanks Angel
Date: 08/18/10 01:45 am Title: Chapter 1
Mmmmm interestingggg :) goo good soo farr im all into it n shytt.ilove yur grammar its like ur a real authorr :).--- french v
Author's Response: AWWWW thanks babe!
Date: 08/16/10 07:46 pm Title: Chapter 2
lol kinky sex??? lol like the story so far! ^.^ i think it's kinda slow going though...
Author's Response: I know but i didnt want to rush it..I'll speed it up for ya!!! Thanks babe! and Yes, Lots and Lots of kinky sex for you from our boys!!!