Date: 08/14/10 09:03 pm Title: And our scars remind us...
That song is just... gosh, I really love it and I think it works really well for this story! you know, usually Tom is seen as the strong one while Bill is troubled and such, so this is really unique!
Author's Response: Oh, I know! and thank yoooou (= People have said that... lol so yeah.
Date: 08/14/10 01:07 am Title: And our scars remind us...
i love that song. it was a great story, though i wish it had a happy ending of course. i feel so bad for the both of them. really great story.
Author's Response: Me too! thank you very much, and yeah totally understandable... but I like sad endings... Good thing it's not real, eh? thank you (=
Date: 08/13/10 09:22 am Title: And our scars remind us...
Wow, I like the depth you went into.. like, there was a lot of plot in this. I just really wish the song lyrics could disappear. lol.
I felt so bad for Tom, :( He should have just told Bill flat out, but of course ppl don't always do what's rational. And poor Bill too. :( I liked your characters.
I find it very interesting to read this bcuz Tom is never the emo cutter, lol, ppl always portray Bill that way instead, and I think this story is unique.
I can't say this was the best written fic, but I really did enjoy reading it. Well done. :)
Author's Response: Thank you (: And yeah, sorry about those...rnSo did I (; Yeah exactly, I mean, think about it really... if you were a twin and you were in love with them... Would you tell?rnthank you very much ^^rnYeah I know! I know it's harsh, but I love it when Tom is the person who is the "Troubled one." dunno why.rnThank you very much ^^
Date: 08/12/10 08:57 pm Title: And our scars remind us...
You think this makes you cold hearted? ;) Try writing rape and enjoying that! ^_^
The fic confused me a bit... it was.. hard to figure out. I can see what it meant, but it felt like a blur. Obviously done so on purpose!
It was a lovely fic.. very beautiful :)
I loved the conflicts between the twins.. and the paragraphs of Tom watching Bill sleep and vice versa.
Lovely.
Author's Response: Oh gosh good point... I'm actually working on something like that, and enjoying it.rnrnSorry, I guess it could be a bit confusing, eh? Yea, the confusion was supposed to be there a bit, but at the same time.. I don't even know. i wrote it all at four in the morning.rnthank you so much ^^rnYes, conflicts are fun.. Oh yes I thought that was cool.rnrnThank you (=
Date: 08/12/10 08:41 pm Title: And our scars remind us...
Great story. It was a little sad, but I liked it nonetheless.
Ironically, I was listening to the raidio when I read this, and this song came on XD
Author's Response: Thank you very much.rnrnOh wow, that's a bit of a funny coincidence!